I usually don't touch fic that's more current, preferring to stick to when they were all a band. But I liked what you did with this. There was some real raw emotion to it, and I'm such a sucker for angsty shit. Great job!

And I quote: "YOU DIDN"T COME BACK!" *ugly cry* I FELT THAT THOUGH! The thought of JC being so vulnerable and open when he's drunk and pouring every ounce of painful emotion towards Justin over the phone is so heartbreaking, loved it!

These quotes here: JC.” Justin drew his lip into his mouth and bit down on it at the other man’s words and the insinuation behind them... “You’re not expendable man... don’t talk like that...” “Invisible...” JC mumbles as Justin listens to the near silence on the other end and can hear the lazy shuffle of feet against carpet. “What?! No. JC, come on-“ “Just invisible righhhhht!?!” His best friend’s protest going unheard he continues “If you can’t see me, don’t see m-me- NO, won’t see me... If ya Just pretend I’m not there... That I’m nowhere... Maybe then you can just forget the past right?”

Powerstuff right here, nicely done! :)

This quote here: 

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I love drunk JC <3 

I’m not sure if you were leaning toward slab or not. Not a Justin fan at all, so was hesitant to read this. Definitely not a Joshtin reader so only clicked because it said her and to give it a chance. This.... man.... sucked me in. Poor fucking JC. My heart has been ripped from my chest and lay bleeding on the floor.