theusagirl (Signed) on May 15, 2020 01:32 pm (Chapter 3)

"To sell on ebay??" LMAO Joey!

Marlene is the ultimate control freak though, something must be done!



Author's Response:

I love you thought that line was so hilarious. Bekah often points some winners out to me - things I didn't think were funny writing that she got a real kick out of. So thank you! I love when I add a tiny bit of humor into these serious stories.

Glad you're still enjoying! :)




theusagirl (Signed) on May 15, 2020 01:30 pm (Chapter 2)

I love Chris so much OMG...LOL Marlene scares me..LMAO! First she ties JC up and then she treats him all nice, she reminds me of Lady Dominatrix from CSI...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying Chris. I think when I wrote this story I wondered if he was maybe coming off too harsh at times. And lol at Lady Heather from CSI. I loved that show! I promise I did not have her in mind when writing Marlene, though I guess I can kinda see some similarities.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)




Now and Forever (Signed) on May 11, 2020 07:22 am (Chapter 1)

Great story so far and I really want to see how it ends! Love the setting of New Orleans!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I loved the setting of New Orleans too. Funnily enough, I actually had written this before I visited the city, and then I actually went for a long weekend and fell in love. It's a great city for sure, and definitely an awesome setting!

Thanks for the review! :)




theusagirl (Signed) on May 05, 2020 10:06 pm (Chapter 1)

YAY! It feels so good to review! Halloween/Hocus Pocus vibes I am getting, love Chris with his snarky attitude:

Joshtin moment! Go rescue JC..



Author's Response:

Thank you, Steph! It feels awesome to be posting again, lol.

I love that you're enjoying the story. I promise to do better about regular updates. Only a few chapters left of this one though, so I'll make sure my next story posted gets updates at least once a week.

Thank you again! :)




ShadesofNsync (Signed) on Mar 19, 2020 10:42 am (Chapter 3)

I am LOVING this story! Cannot wait to see how (or if!) JC gets out of this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's one of my favorite stories I've written, so I'm glad you're enjoying it!






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