I really loved this one. What a great concept and interesting turns in the story. Your descriptions are incredible and you definitely painted the scene just as good as you had Benny do. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Beautifu writing. Clear, concise, emotional, vivid. Very well done!
Wow what an amazing story!!! ??‘???‘???‘?
Wow and that is only the 1st chapter.....waiting patiently for an update
I"m just going to sit right here and wait for the update. DON'T MIND ME AT ALL.