Comments For Picture Perfect
tda720 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 06:11 pm (Chapter 8)
He deserves to be left (even if he was the one who suggested a separation). I hope they work things out though! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 05:58 pm (Chapter 8)
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! JUSTIN YOU STUPID, STUPID, IDIOT!!!!!!! OMG...Lily what are you doing to me?! NO! FIX IT PLEASE! I'm so pissed off...ok, I'm calm now. hahahaha. But. I knew this would happen. Uhhgggg. UPDATE PLEASE!!! I'm hooked. :-)

Author's Response: haha I'm sorry you're so pissed lol but I'm really happy you like the story and you're hooked. Thanks so much :)



Gigi (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 05:27 pm (Chapter 8)
Yeah what have you done. JACKASS!!!!

Author's Response: haha yeah... thanks so much for reading :)



alimera (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:42 am (Chapter 7)
update again soon!



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 12:33 am (Chapter 7)
I read all the chapters earlier in the day. I'm liking the flow to this story and it's very interesting. But Arrrgggg! Why did Justin have to do that? Update soon.



lizzy99 (Signed) on Aug 13, 2007 04:48 pm (Chapter 7)
it was an awsome chapter! I hate Justin for doing that! I hope he can fix it!



Vessy (Signed) on Aug 13, 2007 04:21 pm (Chapter 7)
awesome, awesome, can't wait for more!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 13, 2007 12:44 pm (Chapter 7)
Ohhhh...it's just the begining with trouble in 'paradise' isn't it? Maybe next time he'll actually go 'all the way' with whoever. Hmm...I'm wondering if he does, whatever he does, if he'll tell her or get caught. lol. I liked it. :-)



SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 10, 2007 12:17 am (Chapter 6)
Ok, at first I felt bad for Kim and for her feeling neglected by Justin. Now she was just acting like a bitch for no reason even after they talked about it. Maybe it was her frustrations getting the best of her, but still if something is bothering her she should let him know instead of acting childish. Sorry for my rant, but that bothered me. Anyway great update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks for reading... Let me know if the next chapter changes your feelings haha



Vessy (Signed) on Aug 09, 2007 04:26 pm (Chapter 6)
this story is so good, can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)



d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 09, 2007 04:00 pm (Chapter 6)
Awww man. I wanted to tear up at the last part just before they made up. I hope Justin gets his shit together and fast or else he's going to lose his family. Nice update. More soon. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, I'll update in a few :)



Vessy (Signed) on Aug 08, 2007 04:24 am (Chapter 5)
Stupid Justin :) great story, update soon!

Author's Response: lol. thanks for reading!



lizzy99 (Signed) on Aug 07, 2007 10:50 pm (Chapter 5)
Aww, that was sad but really good!
I hope nothing wrong happens and they can fix their problems!

Author's Response: we will see... haha thanks for reading



d_simplicity (Signed) on Aug 07, 2007 07:11 pm (Chapter 5)
Aww man that was depressing. I hope things change between them or else It's trouble in the marriage. I really don't want them to get a divorce. :-). Nice update. More soon.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it :)



alimera (Signed) on Aug 06, 2007 09:32 pm (Chapter 4)
hmm, she's making too many excuses...she's not feeling it anymore! update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!





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