Comments For He lived up stairs.
JtsSenorita (Anonymous) on Jan 11, 2008 12:39 pm (Chapter 15)
cant wait for more!:)
update soon!!
Vessy (Signed) on Nov 21, 2007 10:38 am (Chapter 15)
great chapter, I loved the “Watch Out for the Car” in there :D
Gigi (Signed) on Nov 20, 2007 04:32 pm (Chapter 15)
That ending!
Author's Response: ITS NOT OVER WITH YET LOL!!!
Author's Response: ITS NOT OVER WITH YET LOL!!!
mozie (Anonymous) on Sep 06, 2007 11:18 am (prelude.)
love the new chapter. much better on grammar and content. keep the updates coming
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know, and thanks for responding. (updates coming soon)
Gigi (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 12:34 am (Chapter 12)
Cute chapter. I do hope her nightmares go away though.
mozie (Anonymous) on Sep 05, 2007 10:34 am (prelude.)
I love this story, but this chapter is a little confusing. The grammar and some run on sentences have me confused as to the content of this chapter. I still look forward to more updates, but maybe you should review and edit before posting.
Author's Response: thanks for reading. I'll defiantly look more at that stuff, i think i was really half away when i finsihed this chaper last night; so from now on i write leave it for an hour read it and edit/post. Lol Sound Good?
Author's Response: thanks for reading. I'll defiantly look more at that stuff, i think i was really half away when i finsihed this chaper last night; so from now on i write leave it for an hour read it and edit/post. Lol Sound Good?
Whtny (Anonymous) on Sep 05, 2007 03:01 am (Chapter 11)
Rachel needs to step (aside)
LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 10, 2007 01:08 pm (Chapter 7)
Gurl I love this story. Keep it coming. Good Job.