Comments For Second Best
alimera (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 08:09 am (Chapter 21)
oh dear...that was not good. update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Things aren't going too well, are they?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Things aren't going too well, are they?
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 05:03 am (Chapter 21)
good work!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 02:10 am (Chapter 21)
Oh hell na!!! hahaha. Hooray for La standing up to Justin. But Justin needs to get his shit straight. Can't he see he's hurting her? Uhhgg men are so dense and clueless sometimes. I'm angry. He might realize he needs her or has feeling for her or maybe even love her when it's too late. It would serve him right. He's being an ass. Haha. Loved it girl! Wonderful update. So sad to see it's ending but on the up side, it would give you time to write us another great story once the hectic school life clears out a bit. I hope u murder school and ace everthing by the way. :-D. Good luck! *crosses fingers* Hehe. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
It's about time she stood up to him, but he is acting like an ass who can't figure out what he wants. Men are always dense, what are you talkin about sometimes ::haha::. He won't realize what he had till it's gone, right? As far as another story is concerned, it may be a while until I write a new one but I do have some ideas brewing! Thanks for the review as always and for the luck (I'm really going to need it because I'm about to go insane). You need to update too girl!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 17, 2007 08:26 pm (Chapter 21)
Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Justin is an ass, right? Maybe he'll change? But old habits die hard, right?
Justin is an ass. I really have nothing else to say, he's just a selfish ass.
Love it! :)
Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Justin is an ass, right? Maybe he'll change? But old habits die hard, right?
LuLu (Signed) on Sep 17, 2007 06:39 pm (Chapter 21)
I am glad that Alana is finally starting to break away from Justin. He's a brat and is using her, his own best friend. Justin needs to learn that he can't have his cake and eat it too.
Author's Response: It's time for Alana to start depending on herself, it's a shame that Justin has to be the way he is, right? He'll learn eventually though. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: It's time for Alana to start depending on herself, it's a shame that Justin has to be the way he is, right? He'll learn eventually though. Thanks for the review!
omgwtfjustin (Signed) on Sep 17, 2007 03:52 pm (Chapter 20)
i love it. can't wait to hear more!!
Author's Response: Aw, it makes me happy that you love Second Best. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot. More should be up soon, so watch out for that
Author's Response: Aw, it makes me happy that you love Second Best. Thanks so much for reviewing, it means a lot. More should be up soon, so watch out for that
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 02:53 pm (Chapter 20)
Author's Response: She needs to stand up for herself, it's about time. Aw you missed me, have no worries I'm back. Thanks for reviewing!!
Good, stand up for yourself, Alana :)
I'm glad you're back! I've missed you :) good luck with everything, and i can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: She needs to stand up for herself, it's about time. Aw you missed me, have no worries I'm back. Thanks for reviewing!!
pinku06 (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 12:56 pm (Chapter 1)
wow great story i hope more soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot. More should be coming soon, so look out for that!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot. More should be coming soon, so look out for that!
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 03:03 am (Chapter 20)
me give threats? no never *tries to look innocent* more like a request... i must say i was look more for a email-but a chapter totally works for me too girl it was good it was great and u know I cant wait for more - Dani p.s. *hugs* for the bf maybe everything will work out for the best and school totally feel u on that
Author's Response: First, I just need to thank you for making that "request" (cough) of yours because if not I probably wouldn't have even opened up MSWord to write. You may have to wait a few more days for another update though, I've got tons of Drs. appts this week (and not to mention tons of damn homework) soo not much writing going on. Thanks for the hugs (I'm better off without him :-D), thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: First, I just need to thank you for making that "request" (cough) of yours because if not I probably wouldn't have even opened up MSWord to write. You may have to wait a few more days for another update though, I've got tons of Drs. appts this week (and not to mention tons of damn homework) soo not much writing going on. Thanks for the hugs (I'm better off without him :-D), thanks for the review!!
danie (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 11:47 pm (Chapter 20)
Author's Response: Hhaha, you're the first person I've heard that hates 'Bed', J Holiday has a great voice. Thanks for reviewing, I think you're not the only one who thinks they need to stop messing around. It's ruining their friendship, but who knows what'll happen.
good chapter, hate that fuckin song that. its like a damn echo in my ear and i can't stand it. its like that freaking umbrella song, only worse. i think they should stop with the sex and shit though.
Author's Response: Hhaha, you're the first person I've heard that hates 'Bed', J Holiday has a great voice. Thanks for reviewing, I think you're not the only one who thinks they need to stop messing around. It's ruining their friendship, but who knows what'll happen.
sChErZo (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 02:33 pm (Chapter 20)
i love that song!!! great chapter girl!!!
Author's Response: I love it too, J Holiday reminds me of Justin in a lot of ways so I just had to use it. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked the chapter; hopefully I'll get another one up soon.
Author's Response: I love it too, J Holiday reminds me of Justin in a lot of ways so I just had to use it. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you liked the chapter; hopefully I'll get another one up soon.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 02:23 pm (Chapter 20)
I was just thinking about you and your story the other day and was like "Where is the girl and my updates?" (haha). I feel you on Senior year though, it's crazy as hell with college planning and whatnot. Anyway, JT singing "Bed" was a crackup because his character in A.U.L.A. (as you know) is obsessed with that song. But it was cute how you incorporated it in the story. Great update, can't wait to read more soon! Btw, Alana knows she wants her some of that....hell, I know I would (haha).
Author's Response: I'm here, it's good to know you were thinking about me updating though! Thanks for the review, as usual it's really appreciated. I'm really not ready for the next couple weeks as far as college visits, application, and retaking my SAT's. As far as Justin singing "Bed", I didn't even realize that his character in A.U.L.A loves the song until after I posted (I'm scatter brained). Everyone wants a piece of JT, Alana may be an exception though (for once).
Author's Response: I'm here, it's good to know you were thinking about me updating though! Thanks for the review, as usual it's really appreciated. I'm really not ready for the next couple weeks as far as college visits, application, and retaking my SAT's. As far as Justin singing "Bed", I didn't even realize that his character in A.U.L.A loves the song until after I posted (I'm scatter brained). Everyone wants a piece of JT, Alana may be an exception though (for once).
alimera (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 01:14 pm (Chapter 20)
well at least they're not mad at each other anymore. hope your senior year is going well--trust me, senior year of college bites too. just wait til you get there. lol, update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Updates should hopefully come soon, hopefully. I should have just listened to all my slacker friends and taken the b.s classes this year but I had to be stupid and use the whole "I need to be challeneged" route..
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Updates should hopefully come soon, hopefully. I should have just listened to all my slacker friends and taken the b.s classes this year but I had to be stupid and use the whole "I need to be challeneged" route..
d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 01:11 pm (Chapter 20)
HAHAH ROLFLMAO....At the "J.Timberlake" Bed rendition. I just...I don't know. I had this big cheesy grin because I know it's a big deal to Justin in my story A.U.L.A. lol I'm picturing Justin singing the song...because I love that song by the way. And Hmm...I just. I don't know. Who wouldn't wand JT to put them to bed? Alana should have jumped him and said 'take me now' haha.Kidding. Dat was a fantastic update girl. I can't wait to see what happens next. They moreless made up so I guess that's good. I just hope they can stay civil, but what's a story without some drama right? hehe. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
HAhah, I was going to wait till later to respond but I had to. The second I heard J Holiday sing "rock your body" the way he did it reminded me of Justin's song so I had to make Justin sing that somehow. Justin would sound great singing that in his falsetto ::drools::. I have some odd feeling (or maybe because it's my story) that Alana is about to change things between her and Justin; there may not be anymore doin the nasty between these two (SO IM EXPECTING SOME LOVE MAKING IN A.U.LA).. Thanks for the quick review! I'm trying to get some more ideas but you know how school goes.
I did e-mail you by the way..
d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 12:53 pm (Chapter 20)
Ok Taylor. So I haven't even read the damn chapter yet and I'm jumping in my seat with excitment. Haha. I was hoping u'd not be stuck and come out of the writer's block! did you email me again? I haven't checked my email in a while. I've been busy too with school I know how it is. Ok now, this was a pre-review. hahaha. I'm off the read the update now. :D
