Comments For Second Best
browneyes (Signed) on Oct 16, 2007 09:53 pm (Chapter 1)
really good story. wish there was more to it.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 02:47 am (Chapter 24)
oh hell to da naw why did daddy have to go? whatcha mean its over? it cant be... not like that there's must be a short story sequal somewhere lol yes! no? maybe so?! i absolutely loved this story, u as a writer who has endless ideas and i can not wait for what u got next as a matter of a fact im off all next week at work prefect timing for something new lol dani p.s. im so soo sorry girlie i would have reviewed sooner just school and work has been crazy but i loved it and Tay girl u know what i need...
classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 02:30 am (Chapter 23)
damn can we say aggressive? remind me to not piss u or lala off. and Isa is right work something out thats her friend-best friend she needs him however j is still a jack ass dani
classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 02:23 am (Chapter 22)
awe hell naw... why daddy gotta get hurt and whats up with her ignoring peeps so not coo- however u know i loved it - dani
d_simplicity (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 05:24 pm (Chapter 24)
Awwwwww....no!!! *Cries* That was so sad yet perfect. I couldn't picture another ending but this. I really loved this story Tay. I would maybe hint a sequeal but it was perfect. Not all stories have the guy and girl end up together ending. Lol. So sad to see it end but it was so good. Great work girl. You're the bomb! hehe. Can't wait to read anything else you come up with. :)
soxy58 (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 07:56 pm (Chapter 24)
Good ending!! I'm sad this is over... but you did a fabulous job and I'm gonna have to come back and re-read this again hehe!
Gigi (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 02:39 pm (Chapter 24)
Yeah it has been a great ride. I just don't know what to say though. I'm kind of sad and disappointed in Justin though. I hope he realizes his mistake one day.
alimera (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 12:56 pm (Chapter 24)
well, i liked the ending. too bad she settled for second best, but i guess that was what she felt comfortable with. wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, they meant a lot. It is too bad that Alana had to settle, but it was better than not being in his life at all, right??
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, they meant a lot. It is too bad that Alana had to settle, but it was better than not being in his life at all, right??
Vessy (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 06:44 am (Chapter 24)
beautiful ending, good job!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 12:49 am (Chapter 24)
Wow, what an ending. I certainly didn't expect that. But it was enlightening to say the least. Great job on the story, I enjoyed reading it!
Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing, they meant a lot and kept me writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I enjoyed writing. To tell you the truth I wasn't expecting the ending either, I just sort of sat down and wrote with no plan in mind..but I really liked the way it turned out, so thank you again!!
Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing, they meant a lot and kept me writing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I enjoyed writing. To tell you the truth I wasn't expecting the ending either, I just sort of sat down and wrote with no plan in mind..but I really liked the way it turned out, so thank you again!!
Whtny (Anonymous) on Oct 03, 2007 11:37 pm (Chapter 24)
what? Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Author's Response: Yesssss... lol sorry if you were disappointed, but things should work out better that way, right?? Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: Yesssss... lol sorry if you were disappointed, but things should work out better that way, right?? Thanks for the review!!
JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 03, 2007 11:18 pm (Chapter 24)
Zoe is a bitch. Justin and Alana need to get together
Author's Response: HAha, she was just being a nosy roommate, but things seem better off when they're just friends, dont you think?? Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: HAha, she was just being a nosy roommate, but things seem better off when they're just friends, dont you think?? Thanks for the review!
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Oct 03, 2007 10:07 pm (Chapter 24)
damn, that sucks, settling for second best?!? but eh, at least she's out of the spotlight being the friend!
Author's Response: It does suck, but it seemed best for her with everything that was going on. Thanks for reviewing!!
Author's Response: It does suck, but it seemed best for her with everything that was going on. Thanks for reviewing!!
LuLu (Signed) on Oct 03, 2007 10:02 pm (Chapter 24)
Ok wait wait. That's not the end is it? i know I said I wasn't sure I wanted Justin and Alana to fix things, but I was LYING! They can't not get together, he can't choose Jessica over her. They're gonna finally get it together in the last chapter right? Right?!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm afraid it is the end. The two of them are better as friends since when they were 'together' it wasn't always rainbows and butterflies. Thanks for reviewing though!!
Author's Response: Haha, I'm afraid it is the end. The two of them are better as friends since when they were 'together' it wasn't always rainbows and butterflies. Thanks for reviewing though!!
