Author's Response: I agree but it might be easier said than done? no worries, i work on them all for you guys. Thanks for commenting
Oh hell to the no...he couldnt grab MY phone like that. I dont care if he was my older brother...that boy better have some manners and stop gettin all up in Zara's buisness like that. I know he tryin to be all protective and shit but Zara a grown ass woman who can make her own choices without her brother bein all up under her. That aint right....brothers gotta know when shit like bein WAY too over protective aint right....but also little sisters need to learn that hidin shit...knowin they gon get caught at some point....from family(especially brothers that are police) aint right and they need to tell the truth and get on with life. I think Malcolm needs to get off his high horse and see that Zara loves Justin and aint nothin gon change that...not him or that assshole Christian!!!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!
PS: When I get pissed off or somethin gets to me(in a good or bad way) I sorta turn ghetto and get a little like my older sister who loves to have arguments and crap about random stuff.
Author's Response: Oh my goodness...well first off is totally cool that you wrote this and I'm glad you did because that means you could connect to the characters hehehe. And man, I have you guys not liking Malky now. :(. Don't be too mad at him, he's just trying to be a good brother to Zara. I mean they are all each other has right? Maybe he feels threatened that Ju will take his baby sis away from him? hint? hehe. I agree that he's too protective but then again he is a cop so i guess his nature makes things more intense. Don't worry. I'll work on him and on the entire situation as the updates go by. And boy Christian is another issue all together. He's gonna come in the story as some point too. :S. Hehe thanks for the great review. I appreciate it and I'll get to updating soon.
Author's Response: hehe so glad you're catching up. I missed you girl. hope things are well on your end. :)
Author's Response: Hey tay, thanks for the review. Sorry I'm taking so long to update. I need to get some things out of the way since Life has become busy. I'll be updating soon to everyone who might read this. I'm working on the next update finally. lol. :)
Author's Response: lol Christian just called at the end. hehehe. I'll try getting an update in sooon. thanks a lot for the feedback. :)
Author's Response: lol I'm sorry. I had to. But so glad you're still loving this. hehe. I'll get to updating as soon as possible. Thanks for the review.
Justin and Zara are so cute together. That said, why is Christian calling? I can't wait to read what he has to say. Update soon!
Author's Response: aww I know right? :). Well i'll try getting the Christian mystery out there. :P I'll try updating as soon as I can. I'll try not to keep you wall waiting for too long. thanks for the feed back.
Author's Response: Let's hope not when they return to work right? hehe. Thanks for commenting.
Author's Response: Yeah let's hope it's good too. hehehe. So glad you liked it. I'll update soon. thanks.
OMG *FAINTS*
Can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: :). I'll update as soon as I can. So glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Muahahahaha.....:D.
Author's Response: Man Bri, you guys have no idea what I got in this outline. lol. :P. I'll try to get to updating soon so you all aren't left wondering for too long. Thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Yeah I know finally right? Well now that part is cleared up, staying together is the next issue. hehehe. Thanks a lot for commenting. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, let's hope that happens. Hehe. Thanks for the review. I'll update soon.
oh no no no. u cant leave it like that! gosh darnit.... * sigh * torture.
thanks for taking the time to respond to everyones reviews... i noticed u do that, and its really cool that u appreaciate ur readers. :)
Author's Response: lol...I know. I'll update soon so don't worry. you guys will see how it turns out. hehe. Oh yeah, it's a habit. I figured if you all can take your time out to review then i can do the same and respond. it's great to know what the readers think. And i really appreciate you guys and the great feed back. Thanks so much. That made me grin :-D
