Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
lyss2118 (Signed) on Dec 07, 2007 02:19 am (Guilty Pleasures)
oo my gosh, way to leave us hanging....lol update soon?!? :)
Author's Response: the next update is done so I hope if you read it you enjoy. :D Thanks.
Author's Response: the next update is done so I hope if you read it you enjoy. :D Thanks.
wildthang (Signed) on Dec 05, 2007 01:42 pm (Turning Point - Part 2)
omg that was so good. And I hate jeremy. I hope malcolm finds out he is no good and zara doesn't listen to her brother for once. i feel bad for ju. update soon
Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean. Don't worry, more is on the way. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean. Don't worry, more is on the way. Thanks for the feedback. :)
lyss2118 (Signed) on Dec 05, 2007 01:55 am (Turning Point - Part 2)
ooo my gosh, u cant leave off there...its too good damnit! update soon!! :)
Author's Response: lol so glad you're enjoying it. And the next update is done, so It will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: lol so glad you're enjoying it. And the next update is done, so It will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback.
danie (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 09:34 pm (Turning Point - Part 2)
i should have expected for jeremy to do something like that. i just hope jahzara doesn't listen when malcolm talks to her b/c she will regret that forever.
Author's Response: Yeah Jeremy is a sneaky bastard huh? lol. I like a little mystery with characters. It makes things interesting. We'll see how it all turns out soon. I agree with Zara not listening to her brother, but let's just say Malcolm has a huge influence on her so we'll see how it turns out. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Yeah Jeremy is a sneaky bastard huh? lol. I like a little mystery with characters. It makes things interesting. We'll see how it all turns out soon. I agree with Zara not listening to her brother, but let's just say Malcolm has a huge influence on her so we'll see how it turns out. Thanks for the review.
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 07:35 pm (Turning Point - Part 2)
more soon!
Author's Response: The next update is done so look out for that. Thanks! :)
Author's Response: The next update is done so look out for that. Thanks! :)
tda720 (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 03:43 pm (Turning Point - Part 2)
Jeremy is a biiiiitch, when is he going to be gone from the picture? I don't think this is going to be good for Justin or Zara now that Malcolm knows what's going on with them (nice change in p.o.v by the way, it was nice reading what malcolm had to say) Update soon girl!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm going to have to agree with you on that one. lol. He really is a jerk. I can't say when or if he'll ever be completely gone, but I'm working on it. hehe. And Malcolm hmm, well he might be a challenge but we'll see. Yeah, I had to get his feelings out at some point. There might be another POV of his soon, so...hehe. Thanks a lot for the feedback Tay, so glad you're still enjoying it. :). More is on the way.
Author's Response: Yeah I'm going to have to agree with you on that one. lol. He really is a jerk. I can't say when or if he'll ever be completely gone, but I'm working on it. hehe. And Malcolm hmm, well he might be a challenge but we'll see. Yeah, I had to get his feelings out at some point. There might be another POV of his soon, so...hehe. Thanks a lot for the feedback Tay, so glad you're still enjoying it. :). More is on the way.
alimera (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 10:28 am (Turning Point - Part 2)
Oh my God, what does Malcolm have against Justin?! Update again soon, I don't like this cliffhanger!!
Author's Response: Well, Zara is his baby sis so...we'll see how it turns out. Hehe More is on the way don't worry. :). Thanks for the feed back
Author's Response: Well, Zara is his baby sis so...we'll see how it turns out. Hehe More is on the way don't worry. :). Thanks for the feed back
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 05:07 am (One Step Closer - Part 1)
I'm trying to catch up...I'm so far behind on this story. :(
Author's Response: haha it's cool. Don't worry about it girl. I know what you mean. I'm the same with some stories i'm reading. Still try to get some reading time in. hehe. Thanks for commenting though. ;)
Author's Response: haha it's cool. Don't worry about it girl. I know what you mean. I'm the same with some stories i'm reading. Still try to get some reading time in. hehe. Thanks for commenting though. ;)
kara (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 02:30 am (Turning Point - Part 2)
I love ur story especially zara and justin relationship how its evolved since the beginning...jeremy is an asshole justin needs to hurry up and tell zara whatever it is he knows about him already..next add i vote that jeremy untragically dies ina freak accident..LOL
Author's Response: Oh thank you sooo much. I'm honored. When i started this story i wasn't sure where i wanted it to go, so i sat down and really thought about it and created a story line on how I wanted the characters to develop, so i'm glad it's paying off. :) LMAO about the freak accident. That would just be too easy don't you think? hehe. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Oh thank you sooo much. I'm honored. When i started this story i wasn't sure where i wanted it to go, so i sat down and really thought about it and created a story line on how I wanted the characters to develop, so i'm glad it's paying off. :) LMAO about the freak accident. That would just be too easy don't you think? hehe. Thanks for the update.
Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 01:33 am (Turning Point - Part 2)
Jeremy, oh that little pissant! He better not be trying to ruin Ju and Zarbear's relationship with his little jealous behind! But besides that, AMAZING update. Loved It!!
Author's Response: Hey girl I know what you mean. He really is a thorn in their side right now. We'll see how it turns out. i can't make any promises but i'm working on it. Hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. More is on the way. :D
Author's Response: Hey girl I know what you mean. He really is a thorn in their side right now. We'll see how it turns out. i can't make any promises but i'm working on it. Hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. More is on the way. :D
Timberlake (Signed) on Nov 30, 2007 12:17 am (I Would Do Anything For You - Part 2)
wowowowowowowow. they really need to work it out and make up their minds!
Author's Response: LOL read more, you'll see what happens. :D
Author's Response: LOL read more, you'll see what happens. :D
lyss2118 (Signed) on Nov 29, 2007 05:32 am (Turning Point - Part 1)
omg omg omg..... update!! im obsessed. amazing!!!!
classicbeauty (Signed) on Nov 29, 2007 02:15 am (I Would Do Anything For You - Part 2)
that is it! get that boy, chris-some, on da damn phone now?! cause this aint going to work at all- what is wrong with that boy? has he lost his mind... men! dani
Author's Response: Hahahaha....Dani you crack me up. But yes, I know what you mean. ;). Hope you enjoy your read when you do catch up on the other chaps. :). Thanks for reviewing.
Author's Response: Hahahaha....Dani you crack me up. But yes, I know what you mean. ;). Hope you enjoy your read when you do catch up on the other chaps. :). Thanks for reviewing.
lyss2118 (Signed) on Nov 28, 2007 05:13 am (Painful Strides)
amazing ass story. its 6 a.m and ive been reading this all freakin night. lol now i cant wait to get off work and finish the next half. love it!! update soon!!!
alimera (Signed) on Nov 27, 2007 05:05 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
Wow, about f-ing time!!! I loved it, update again soon please!!!
