Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
SexualCoco (Signed) on Nov 27, 2007 03:22 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
Real bomb and sexy-like! FINALLY they told each other how they feel and everything is ok (for now at least). Again, another great chapter girl and I can't wait to read more!
FHJL88 (Signed) on Nov 26, 2007 11:37 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
I'm so glad she told him that she loves him. Can't wait to read the next update!
Gigi (Signed) on Nov 26, 2007 09:30 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
Nothing to say other than... FINALLY!!!!
tda720 (Signed) on Nov 26, 2007 09:28 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
That is just wrong.... I can't even say anything else about that.. lol it's just wrong and you know it. How dare you just leave me hanging like that..
wildthang (Signed) on Nov 26, 2007 03:25 pm (Turning Point - Part 1)
Hot DAYUM <@_@>----I did not expect that. Not at all! LMAO! That was suprising. Finally she says it. Finally! Ju didn't know what to do, he was so adorable. I should mention I now despise Jeremy. Like I need more girl, like now. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job
FHJL88 (Signed) on Nov 25, 2007 01:27 am ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Great Chapter, Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, next update is done. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, next update is done. :)
danie (Signed) on Nov 24, 2007 10:56 pm ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
this chapter has me a little lost. i read the last chapter but i must have missed something because i don't know what's going on. i hope all that is gonna be in the next chapter b/c i've missed some stuff.
Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry if there was some unclear things. I realised that would happen because there is this mystery with what's goin on with Zara and her weight and depression. That's going to be cleared up soon. Also Justin is trying to find out from Trace what he knows about Zara but Trace won't tell him. Uh, there is also something about Jeremy Justin knows that no one else knows, so in time you guys will find out. Oh and, Zara was nervous because she was going to call her Aunt Patrice that he hadn't heard from in a while. That part about her aunt will also be cleared up soon. I just need to update faster to get all those scenes that need to take place out. The last chap was just them having breakfast then going to see Malcolm in the hospital. I hope I made things a little clear, and if you're unsure about something let me know and I'll be glad to clear it up. In the mean time, I'm writing like crazy, trying to get as much updates out at possible to solve all the little mysteries here and there about the characters and their present behaviors. Hehe. Thanks for the comment.
Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry if there was some unclear things. I realised that would happen because there is this mystery with what's goin on with Zara and her weight and depression. That's going to be cleared up soon. Also Justin is trying to find out from Trace what he knows about Zara but Trace won't tell him. Uh, there is also something about Jeremy Justin knows that no one else knows, so in time you guys will find out. Oh and, Zara was nervous because she was going to call her Aunt Patrice that he hadn't heard from in a while. That part about her aunt will also be cleared up soon. I just need to update faster to get all those scenes that need to take place out. The last chap was just them having breakfast then going to see Malcolm in the hospital. I hope I made things a little clear, and if you're unsure about something let me know and I'll be glad to clear it up. In the mean time, I'm writing like crazy, trying to get as much updates out at possible to solve all the little mysteries here and there about the characters and their present behaviors. Hehe. Thanks for the comment.
wildthang (Signed) on Nov 24, 2007 12:31 pm ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Lol OMG that was great. Justin and berry are too cute. They so want each other. I'm glad Malcolm is ok. Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks, more is soon to come. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, more is soon to come. :)
alimera (Signed) on Nov 24, 2007 10:15 am ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Well, I will be here to read the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks and if anything is unclear, it will be clear in the next updates. It's just that I can't usually get every single thing out in one chap, so I try to make them flow as best I can. Thanks for the feedback. More is on the way.
Author's Response: Thanks and if anything is unclear, it will be clear in the next updates. It's just that I can't usually get every single thing out in one chap, so I try to make them flow as best I can. Thanks for the feedback. More is on the way.
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Nov 24, 2007 12:11 am ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
ooooo.....more soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) More is on the way
Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) More is on the way
tda720 (Signed) on Nov 24, 2007 12:01 am ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Ah I know I'm late but you're back!! I loved the update(s).. definitely made my shitty week a lot better. They are sooo messed up, when is this going to get fixed? What is going on with Zara? Justin to the rescue eh?? Maybe? Please?? I missed you girlie! Hope everything is cool!
Author's Response: Gurl just the other day I was like where the hell is Taylor? lol. I missed you too. And I checked to see if you wrote anything new since I was a little out of it for the time. :) So glad the updates was a plus for you. I know those shitty times, my fiction fix always made things better. And yes, Justin and Zara are messed up, but I'm working on them. In fact, pretty soon, things won't be so complicated. Well, maybe a little but not like how it is now. hehe. You'll see, the next update is almost done already. Expect it soon and thanks for dropping a line girl.
Author's Response: Gurl just the other day I was like where the hell is Taylor? lol. I missed you too. And I checked to see if you wrote anything new since I was a little out of it for the time. :) So glad the updates was a plus for you. I know those shitty times, my fiction fix always made things better. And yes, Justin and Zara are messed up, but I'm working on them. In fact, pretty soon, things won't be so complicated. Well, maybe a little but not like how it is now. hehe. You'll see, the next update is almost done already. Expect it soon and thanks for dropping a line girl.
Gigi (Signed) on Nov 23, 2007 09:32 pm ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Author's Response: hehe yeah, I hope it's not too confusing now, but everyting will make sense soon. More is coming, thanks for the feedback.
Loved that whole part when she was holding his hand.
Author's Response: hehe yeah, I hope it's not too confusing now, but everyting will make sense soon. More is coming, thanks for the feedback.
JustinsAngel (Signed) on Nov 23, 2007 08:53 pm ("I Won't Tell Your Secrets")
Author's Response: Yeah Zara is a little mystery but soon you'll find out what was going on with her I promise. It's coming in the next few chaps. Hehe. Thanks for the feedback.
What is going with Zara? Hope Justin can find out so he can help her... Update Soon
Tamisha
Author's Response: Yeah Zara is a little mystery but soon you'll find out what was going on with her I promise. It's coming in the next few chaps. Hehe. Thanks for the feedback.
FHJL88 (Signed) on Nov 20, 2007 10:13 pm (No Holding Back - Part 2)
I hate Mallory, that can't be said enough. I am so happy that they did it. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: :-D. No one likes Mallory. She's not that bad is she? Anyhoo, yeah, everyone was waiting for the day *Ju and berry* did it. lol. Thanks for the review. More is comming real soon.
Author's Response: :-D. No one likes Mallory. She's not that bad is she? Anyhoo, yeah, everyone was waiting for the day *Ju and berry* did it. lol. Thanks for the review. More is comming real soon.
