ok. you MUST update. this is amazing. im dying here, i need to know what happens!

Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot I really appreciate it. lol More is on the way, the next update is done. Thanks for reviewing.

I love this story! I just read ten chapters straight through, but now I need to go to bed. Can't wait to read more tomorrow.

Author's Response: Oh I'm so honored you like it. That definately puts a smile on my face when people like what I've written. :). Thanks for the comment.

First of, thank you so much for updating. And secondly omfg, Justin and Zara need help. They both have some serious issues. Why can' t they just say fuck it and be with each other? ok, I know things are hard now but damn it! How can Zara not see how delish Justin is? The man is willing to bend backwards for her. Can't wait to meet Christian and hopefully Malcolm will be ok and all this can be cleared up. Update soon girl. Great job.

Author's Response: LMAO...I feel you, they can be pretty fustrating...even to write. :-O. Thanks for the feedback. More is coming. :)

wait, what was she about to do?? update again soon!

Author's Response: :) she was about to make a call but chickened out, don't worry, you'll see when she makes it. Thanks for the feedback. More is on the way.

Wow...first off, I'm so glad you updated (and don't worry about losing me as a reader, this story is TOO good to miss). I honestly thought Mallory was going to jump off the roof when Justin dumped and fired her, but it was all in due time I guess. I really wish that these two could just spill their hearts because it's so evident in their eyes, but not in their words. I know that the main concern is Malcolm, but until they find out his condition, I think they should try to start over again (and I think starting with Christian is a good idea). Great update girl and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot. :). Yeah well Mallory isn't completely gone but it's good that Justin too that step. I guess Justin and Zara are both a little scared of rejection and well they just have some issues to deal with lol. Yeah good ole Christian, you'll get to meet him soon. hehe. Thanks so much for the update and sticking with the story. It means a lot. The next update should be up soon.

more soon!

Author's Response: next update is done so expect it soon

Aww this is so sad! Write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next update is finally done so, expect it soon. :)

Hold up! Wait-J arent u forgetting someone? Hello 'Gym Boy'?! Wouldnt want Mallory traveling by herself, now do we? im lovin' it update soon, more like yesterday - dani

Author's Response: Hey girl. Finally got some time to sit down and respond so some reviews. Plus, the next update is finally done. Thank goodness. It's not the best, but I'll be posting it up soon. :-). Thanks for sticking by me and for all the awesome reviews. hehe.

OMFG! lol hahaha Please push her Justin! lol Well I know you would never make him push her, but if he scared her that would be great! At least Mallory will get the picture that Justin and Zara need to be together and she should butt out. And Jeremy. There is something shady about him. Why do I feel like you're going to hit us with something hard! lol Please if you do be gentle. Great update girl. Can't wait for part 2 and I hope Zara and Justin can do some reconciling so they can be together.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the feedback. More is coming soon. :). So glad you liked the update.

Firstly, I am SO SUPER glad that updated, so thank you for that. Secondly, I'm glad that Zara finally spoke up and told Jeremy to dip. I just hope that once everything calms down she'll be able to speak up and let Justin know what's on her mind (and vice versa). Again, great update and you already know that I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: hehe thanks so much girl for sticking by this story. Honestly, it's not writer's block keeping me from writing. It's time and the fact that I have so many other things doing and so many other little stories writing on the side when I don't feel the creative juices flowing. But, just letting you know the next update is done so expect it soon. Thanks for the feedback.

haha, throw her off the top, justin!! PLEASE!! ugh, jeremy is an asshole. and mallory is one dumb girl. i hope you put the next part up soon!!

Author's Response: What yoy guys would give to see Justin do that eh? But well, that might not necessarily be a good thing. Thanks so much for the feedback and the next part is finally done so expect it soon. :)

Damn he's going to push her off the roof lol. Update soon

Author's Response: lol I even wish he would but well, we'll see. Thanks a lot for the feedback and the next part is done so expect it soon

ummm...whoa! he isn't going to actually... kill her, is he? haha that would be awesome. damn, i wish justin would think about strawberries when he's thinking about me.... mmm... haha

Author's Response: hahaha. Justin is a lot of things but that would make him a little crazy...ok a lot crazy if he turned homocidal on us. And I feel you on the strawberries part. Turns out their my fav fruit so I'm glad I thought of the idea to incorporate them in there. hehe. The next update is finally done. will post it up soon and thanks for the feedback girl.

LMAO!  can't wait for more!

Author's Response: More is finally on the way. hehe. thanks.

omg hes not gonna push her is he... no that will totally fuck the story up lol

Author's Response: Yes it would. Come on now. Justin isn't that bad. hehehe. But well, he can get a little crazy when it comes to berry so we'll see. Next update will be up soon. Thanks for the feedback.