I LOVED THAT ENDING!!! OMG If he wasn't going to do I was about too.LOL.

Author's Response: Hahaha yeah I know. I agree that Mallory needs to go. lol. More is on the way. Thanks for the feedback.

oh hell-to da-naaaw *my texas accent (however i thinks it just southern) comes out think* what the?! i finished one book today and already started the second one, girl it was good u may like it! but thats not why im here-look...u never been gone this long? no word on why-no nothin?so not u, is everything okay? school got u tided down cause girl u know i understand.. wait ur not havin-no i wont even say it, i wont even think it-but girl if u need help with any-a n y thing let me know, ur girl - dani

Author's Response: I'm so sorry. I haven't  gotten any time to write this week. I'm sorry dani. I will update first chance I get I promise and to anyone else who reads this. No! No writer's block. Thank goodness. Just lacking needed time to site and write with no disruptions. Hey you can always check out my site. I'm on there once in a while to update stuff. it's small but I entered the hostee challenge at T.E so it would be a good chance to display my writing skills for other people to see and develop as a writer myself. I'll respond to the other reviewws soon. Just popped the lastes one open. http://dsimplicity.googlepages.com

OMG can we say withdrawel? what happen? its so bad i went to Barnes & Noble to find a good book to tide me over, found several but bought two, so going back for the Manny on Friday maybe sooner if i finish these two... anywho i will be checking back in the morning,Ms D- girl u know what i need!

omg great chapter cant wait to meet chris and hopefully everything works out for her so she can be with ju. poor big bro why something have to happen to him he never did anything to anyone. bring him back, now! pls? anyhow, been busy school and work, got me all tied up but im on vacation from work for a week so im all ur and tays when im not busy on homework. loved it and cant wait for more - dani

wow he really cares berry better wake up and smell the coffee-mmm...hot chocolate saids great right now, maybe tomorrow morning. anywho u should so check out omarion's other song obsession so works for this too! totally love it but i love the story more - dani

I really don't like Mallory and Jeremy.

Oh nooooooooo. I'm going crazy over this story. It's so good and well written but girl! I'm actually feeling to cry with this update. First over what Zara went through when she was younger, then the pain I know Justin is feeling from how things are with them, now Malcolm being shot. You developed these characters so well. I just need it to all be fixed. LMAO! Malcolm can't die. I won't allow it. lol. Keep the updates coming girl. I love it

I'm doing my go Justin dance. He was there 4 his woman despite his own pain. I pray everyone alright ( look at me so wrapped in how  wonderful yo story is i talking like these people is real in this story.) i'm just so hooked I love it more soon.  BTW she needs to really hear, listen, and do what Trace said.

oh my lawd! what. the. fuck. you can't keep doing this! NOOOOOOOOOOO. malcolm better not die or i'm kicking your ass via cyberspace. lol

OMFFFFFFFFFGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO! Omg! Omg! poor Zara! Poor Justin! Poor Malcolm! Why? Why. I'm freaking out here. Update soon. Please update soon. I'm grovelling! Fantastic update but please. I need, crave, have to have more!

WHAT!!! NOOOOO Don't stop there I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just knew that Malcolm was gonna get shot in this story, I knew it *sigh* My poor Zara! I hope she can save her bro's life! And Justin sure is a great guy and great friend to stick by her after what happened with him and Zara. I'm glad that they both still love each other. Hurry and gimme gimme MORE! hehe

oh no!  poor Zara!  more soon!

Wow, I didn't expect this to happen. Malcolm has to be okay!! But they confuse me D, first he's hugging her like she's about to go away forever and the next he's acting like she doesn't even exist; something's gotta give girl!! Update soon!