alimera (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 09:46 am (I Need You Now More Than Ever)
oh man, this is not good! glad justin is there to catch her though, and i'm not confused anymore!! update again soon...



classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 03:18 am (Be Without You)
no no no what is she doing?! what is wrong with her? and ju poor ju that had to hurt however look at it this way...all that anger, aggression and pain will give him enough and power for when he wells on gym boy lmao



classicbeauty (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 03:10 am (No Holding Back - Part 2)
can we say da-da-da da-da-da damn girl that was h o t t hot loved it and what the f*ck?! whats wrong with her?



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 10, 2007 01:11 am (I Need You Now More Than Ever)
Oh lord, there is way too much going on right now! First with Justin coming back and now Malcolm and on top of that Justin and Zara's unresolved issues! Girlie just when I thought this couldn't get any juicier, you always add one more twist. Great job (once again) and I can't wait to read what happens next. I got your email by the way, thanks for hitting me back! ; )



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Oct 09, 2007 03:44 am (How Do I Breathe)
Oh wow, I know exactly the way he feels. But damn, he must've really had his heartbroken if he had to go away for a month. I'm glad to know that she still loves him and that she misses him terribly, as does him. I can't wait til they reconcile, people in love with each other belong together! And people who have been apart for awhile has GREAT makeup sex, and don't make it sensitive, I love raw sexual detailed sex! Just letting you know *wink wink* Great chapter and I surely can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Justin is, well, he's Justin. In this story, he has a lot of depth and complexity to him with raw emotions he barely ever hides. I try to still make him as simple as possible in all of it. :) I know they belong together so, i'll see what i can do about making that work. lol. :P. And I totally feel you on the detailed sex scenes. I like mine detailed too, but not excessively raunchy. Thanks for the feedback and more is on the way. :)



wildthang (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 05:57 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Poor, poor Ju. This is heart wrenching. Love hurts. That's for sure. I can't wait for those two to reconcile. They need each other. Zara should realize she needs Justin. They should be together. Update soon

Author's Response: I know, it's so agonizing, but with bad comes good and vice versa.  I feel you on them needing each other. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the review. :)



Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 05:02 pm (How Do I Breathe)
aw, damn. i know the feeling. love hurts like a motherfucker. i wish i had a nice little long cabin to run to. ugh, i hope he feels better! =/

Author's Response: Yes It does hurt! I can testify! lol. I wish I had me one of those too! Well, time heals all wounds. So, with time comes great strides and changes. :) Thanks for the review. :)



Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 11:23 am (How Do I Breathe)
( Heart fails to beat ) See? Look at what you do to me. Oh lordy, update SOON!!!! Please :)

Author's Response: Where have you been girl? Still waiting patiently for the 'This is my Story' Updates. :P. And why isn't your heart beating? Don't worry, everything will be alright....I guesss...I think....I hope ^_^. Next update is on the way. Thanks for the feeeback. :)



alimera (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 08:48 am (How Do I Breathe)
good another update is coming soon...because i'm still a little confused!!

Author's Response: Ok, this next one should shed some light on things. Thanks for the feeback. ;)



lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Oct 08, 2007 01:02 am (How Do I Breathe)
ooh can't wait for more!

Author's Response: More on the way. Thanks. :)



tda720 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 10:56 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Grrrr, you're leaving off at bad spots D. You better update soon cuz I need to know what's going to happen with them. I'm glad Zara is feeling the brunt of everything, girl shouldn't have been so stupid to tell him she doesn't love him!

Author's Response: I'm updating now! Yay! You're going to find out. Don't worry. Everything is coming into place. :) Thanks for the feedback Tay. What's happening with Feldata? Hmm...So glad you finished second best. I've been so busy. Don't feel like I've forgotten. :(. Let me know ok?



Gigi (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 09:23 pm (How Do I Breathe)
Turned poor Justin into a mountain man.

Author's Response: Aww man I know, but at least he's a hot mountain man. haha. Thanks for the review. :)



Tash2 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2007 07:33 am (Be Without You)
IS SHE COMPLETELY FUCKED IN THE HEAD! I'm cool i'll be calm till u fix stuff but HURRY i don't like this at all got my boo cryin and shit don't make me do a drive by.

Author's Response: Yes she is. With good reason too, that you'll soon find out in the next few updates. I'm workin on fixing everything. hehe. LMAO at the drive by. That cracked me up. If she died, we'd have no story. :(. thanks a lot for the feedback. :-D



Gigi (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 09:16 pm (Be Without You)
OK first of all, how dare you end the chapter right there!!! Second of all what is wrong with Zara!? Why is she so f'd up in the head! I don't know about Justin but I am so sick of her games!!!! Just update date soon I think I'm having an anxiety attack over! Either that or heart attack!

Author's Response: I know, I know, but I ended it there for a reason. hehe. I won't keep you all in the dark too long. The next few chaps will clear up everything. Zara...she is a mystery that's soon to be solved also. LOL. The next update is already done, so it will be up soon. Thanks a million for the feedback.



tda720 (Signed) on Oct 06, 2007 01:50 pm (Be Without You)
Hate you? Never, but stopping right there was pretty messed up. Zara is effing crazy, what is her problem, hurting Justin like that. And what could Justin and gym boy possibly have to talk about other than the fact that Justin needs to beat his ass and get it over with?? Good luck on that midterm, and update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah I know. I agree Justin needs to beat Jeremy up for what he's done. More is coming soon. everyhting should be cleared up through the next few chaps i'm working on. Thanks for the review girl.





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