WHOT!!! Ok, I'm pissed with Zara now. Please fix this. And why is Justin at Jeremy's? What's that about? Oh. so much drama. I love it. Update asap

Author's Response: Everyone is pissed at Zara now. Even I am, when I read over what i've written, but it's necessary. She's this way for a reason and soon, you all will understand just why she's the way she is. More is coming soon. Thanks

okay i'm completely confused...why is justin at jeremy's? i hope trace slaps some sense into zara. and i hope you update again soon!

Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion...i promise it will be cleared up soon. :). Thanks for the feedback

OMG....more soon!!!!

Author's Response: More is on the way. Thanks. :)

WHAT!!! Girl you can't leave me hangin like that update soon plzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry, the next update is done. It will be up shortly. :) Thanks for the feedback.

O_o! Wow. I almost cried with Justin. I could feel his raw emotions and pain. Why is Zara so stupid? What are those pills she keep taking? And hot damn! A Justin and Jeremy face off? I hope we find out how this turns out soon.

Author's Response: All your questions will be answered...hehe. Stay posted for more and thanks for the feedback

Damn...that was hella intense! First off, is she crazy for saying those things to Justin? I mean the man cried for God sakes over her, she really needs to get her shit together after that. And what's gonna go down between Justin and Jeremy? I'm hella intrigued about how this is going to turn out. Great update, thanks!

Author's Response: I think both Justin and Zara are a bit crazy and unstable. Yeah, well,  from this next update things are going to switch up a bit for the the both of them. The Justin and Jeremy interraction will be explained soon too. I promise. Thanks for the feedback. :)

oh wow that was ugly. i felt so bad for justin, although i know she didn't mean it. But just the thought of him crying and the pain that he felt at the moment, heartbreaking! And this chat, hmmmm...wonder what they're gonna discuss. Great update! it's time for more more more!!

Author's Response: Yeah it was pretty bad...More is on the way. Oh and you'll find out about Jeremy and Justin's 'Chat' soon. :). Thanks for the feedback

damn chat what chat

Author's Response: You'll see soon. :). Thanks for the feedback.

First of a;; son't you DARE change a thing about the way you write those sex scenes us non sensitive got yo back girl don't let people block yo crative flow cause damn that's hot. I'm happy that he's falling in love with her I just hope she don't break his heart cause he fo sho gone now that he done tapped that ass. Mallory and soon Jeremy can hang it up cause good pussy and a big dick is not something to over look (sorry but i'm real) . OHHHHHHHHHHH the under water eat out I stood up out my chair and clapped cause that's some skillz right there I think i came alomg with them that was after sex smoke worthy. Keep it up and as alway I love it and look forward to more and soon i hope!!( that's my way of begging)

Author's Response: Hehe Thanks a lot for the compliment and having my back. ;-). I'm glad you enjoyed it and I feel you on the whole Mallory and Jeremy thing. It's going to take a little bit more work for them to be completely out of the picture but i'm working on it. Thanks for the feedback.

girl, whoever those sensitive readers are, they can just skip the chapters. get as detailed as possilble. LMAO. that was HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTT! OMG, he said it and what did she do? jump on his drick and step on his heart. poor jay. i get the feeling that it's not gonna be so great in the morning. this rollercoaster story is driving me crazy, but i looooove every minute of it =]]]] keep up the fantastic work.

Author's Response: Hahaha. Ok, I'll stay detailed. :). And thanks so much for the feedback. They are certainly on an emotional rollercoaster. It won't last forever though. I'm working on it. hehe.

HOTNESSS!!!!! *Ohh fans self* lol. So hot! So steamy! More! Please more! I'm not sensitive to the visuals. I want you to do another one of this story. Anyway, why do I feel like Mallory and Jeremy are going to mean trouble and why do I feel like Zara is going to shatter Justin's heart? Oh, it's all wonderful. I'm officially in love with this story. We're involved now. lmao. More soon!

Author's Response: LOL So glad yo loved it. Stay tuned for more. :) So glad you're involved, but don't get too involved now. lol.

oooh pool sex. HOT. So glad they finally did it! But ugh, I'm mad that she didn't say I love you back. I've noticed through this story how Zara is the one who's scared that Justin's gonna break her heart and she's all sensitive and everything...somehow I think that roles are changing. I have no doubt in my mind that Zara is in love with Justin, but I think that he's more in love with her and he'll probably end up being the one getting his heart broken. I got a feeling that Justin is gonna be the one she runs to when things don't work out with her and Jeremy, and I certainly hope that it's not strictly for sex cause man, Justin is gonna be so heartbroken. Realllly great chapter and I can't wait for more. You're awesome!

Author's Response: Hmm you know you have a good point with them switching roles. Wait to see how things turn out. I have it planned out. hehe. Thanks so much for all your awesome reviews. They are really motiviating. :)

OO....dayum girl!  good vissy!  can't wait to see what drama Mallory brings! 

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. Yeah, Mallory is a volcano waiting to erupt that's for sure. hehe. More is on the way.