Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
what_where (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 05:06 pm (No Holding Back - Part 2)
Author's Response: Hehe so happy you liked the update. I'm pleased everyone enjoyed it. I didn't want it to be too raunchy for their first time. hehe. More it on the way. Thanks for the feedback.
I loved this amazing chapter and i am not one of those sensitive readers so... details are great.LOL. just so you know. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hehe so happy you liked the update. I'm pleased everyone enjoyed it. I didn't want it to be too raunchy for their first time. hehe. More it on the way. Thanks for the feedback.
Vessy (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 12:46 pm (No Holding Back - Part 2)
I love it! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 12:27 pm (No Holding Back - Part 2)
Damn...that was hot! Like I said before, it's about time they got down to business and that right there was delicious. I'm kind of sad that she didn't say she loved him back after he said it to her (I hope that will change though). Great job and thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Oh Now I'm happy you liked it. More is coming soon. I've just been so busy with school, I don't get time to sit and really indugle in my writing to update all my stories and reading the other stories on the archive like I want. Anyway, the next update is done so stay tuned. Thanks for the feedback
Author's Response: Oh Now I'm happy you liked it. More is coming soon. I've just been so busy with school, I don't get time to sit and really indugle in my writing to update all my stories and reading the other stories on the archive like I want. Anyway, the next update is done so stay tuned. Thanks for the feedback
alimera (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 10:51 am (No Holding Back - Part 2)
oh. my. god. lovely visuals!! and damn zara for not saying the three words back to justin...not nice! update again soon please...
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I'm really relieved you guys liked it. Yeah, Zara is on something else right now...let's hope it gets cleared up and soon. :) Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. I'm really relieved you guys liked it. Yeah, Zara is on something else right now...let's hope it gets cleared up and soon. :) Thanks for the feedback.
tda720 (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 10:20 am (No Holding Back - Part 2)
Yess!!! They finally really did the dirty, and it was effing hot! And Justin loves her?! This is so great, all in one chapter, but I have a really bad feeling that this isn't going to turn out for the best (at least when it comes to Gym Boy and Mallory). Good luck on your midterms this week girl, and hurry back so we can figure out what happens next!! Thanks for the update, again it was great as usual.
Author's Response: They finally did it eh? Hehe. I know you've been waiting forever. And yes, he does Love her, but did you ever doubt that? all the signs were there...hehe. And you're right. There are going to be some serious obstacles coming around the corner that Justin and Zara need to overcome before they can really truly be together. Hope you stick around for more. :). Thanks for the goodluck. I needed it. And so sad that SB ended. I read the last two updates today. Hurry with another great story for us ok? Hehe. Thanks for the review Tay.
Author's Response: They finally did it eh? Hehe. I know you've been waiting forever. And yes, he does Love her, but did you ever doubt that? all the signs were there...hehe. And you're right. There are going to be some serious obstacles coming around the corner that Justin and Zara need to overcome before they can really truly be together. Hope you stick around for more. :). Thanks for the goodluck. I needed it. And so sad that SB ended. I read the last two updates today. Hurry with another great story for us ok? Hehe. Thanks for the review Tay.
jrtsnubianboricuaqueen (Signed) on Oct 01, 2007 09:51 am (No Holding Back - Part 2)
Finally, they did it! It would have been a perfect night for them if she would have said I love you too, but anywho. Loved it!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yes. Finally! hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. More it coming soon.
Author's Response: Yes. Finally! hehe. Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. More it coming soon.
Timberlake (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 11:41 pm (No Holding Back - Part 1)
OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies*
Author's Response: LMAO. Your reviews crack me up girl. :).
Author's Response: LMAO. Your reviews crack me up girl. :).
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 30, 2007 12:26 am (No Holding Back - Part 1)
Oh hell no?! i was wrong teaser hurt! what what was that? i dont know where to began... gym boys gotta go i said it before ill say it again he gotta go! and those two needa get with it already. wheres part two? homework got ya? need help let me know can help... lovin it, Ms D, girl u know what i need - dani
Author's Response: :D. That's all I gotta say. hehe. Next update is done so check it out. So glad I can give you your addiction fix. lol.
Author's Response: :D. That's all I gotta say. hehe. Next update is done so check it out. So glad I can give you your addiction fix. lol.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 29, 2007 03:01 am (No Holding Back - Part 1)
im still here! okay its true i did disappear for a minute, ive been busy with school chapters, tests/papers, 3 powerpoint projects worth 300 points each of my grade and work. im willing to pay for some to do the work? *looks for offers, hears silents* thats cool ill remember this-however to the author's note: u thought i didn't know but i needed a break even if it was a paragraph. and girl u played me, from now on a preview or teaser, anything never hurt anyone...i know shut up dani, later
Author's Response: Haha girl you are the best. i had to come and respond to your review. I know what school is like. It's a killer. But there will be updates for you when you get back. :). So no teaser. hehe.
Author's Response: Haha girl you are the best. i had to come and respond to your review. I know what school is like. It's a killer. But there will be updates for you when you get back. :). So no teaser. hehe.
wildthang (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 10:05 pm (No Holding Back - Part 1)
FINALLY!!!! Where the heck is the next part? Update yesterday. Don't keep us hanging like this. TORTURE! I LoVeD iT
MiZzTurQuoiZe916 (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 04:43 pm (No Holding Back - Part 1)
No! That was pure torture! You can't just leave us hanging like that! But on another note, finally! LoL
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 02:08 am (No Holding Back - Part 1)
Okay, I'm WAYYYY behind on this story! I gotta catch up! lol. And that's what I'm gonna do right now, I'll tell you my thoughts in a bit! :)
LucidDreams (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 01:14 am (No Holding Back - Part 1)
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh what awesome updates to come back to! Ahhhhhhhhh. finally! OMFG! FINALLY! Now that is out, girl what were you thinking leaving us hanging like that? oh and late birthday wishes but, I demand some action. get with the updating missy. please? lmao. this story is so good. this is only the start of those crazy two relationship right? I can't wait to see where life takes them. hopefully down the isle. *wink* I'm a sucker for happy endings, but I'm looking too far into the future. lol. just please, i'm begging. update asap.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 12:41 am (Voice of Reason)
hold up! wait a minute, it was ur bday and u didn't tell me or anyone know? oo u aint right, however i hope it was awesome and happy belated bday *hugs* now on to the amazing chapter, not too happy shes pushing him away so was not cool however i can honestly say ive never heard the bed song, but u and tay make me wonder if im missin out here? gotta go make more comments...
