I'm gonna make this quick. I hate Mallory. Justin and Zara are so screwed up, but gah so cute. The keyring with the picture of them kissing? *big love sigh* He is so romantic.  I fail to believe they're gonna go 3 weeks without seeing each other. Midnight trysts anyone? Or least some good ol' ayo technology or phone sex? *wiggles eyebrows* But then going without seeing each other for 3 weeks could increase the passion and emotion. Me likey! Anyway, I just know THIS J better take her to bed...bed...bed hehehe

Author's Response: LOL. no one likes Mallory. I feel sorry for her. really I do. Yeah Justin is a romantic, that's for sure. Oh, I can't wait to see what you say about the next update. hehe. Thanks for the feedback. :D

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! omg! why can't they just be together???? i'm so missing somebody right now and this is making it worse! haha. but i can't stop reading! it's an addiction!!!! haha

Author's Response: I know they should be together. I agree. Hehe. So glad this story is addicting. It gets better. :D. Thanks for the feedback.

And the song returns <3 This was great, signing on now that my computer is fixed (way) earlier than I expected. I loved the update, but seriously the both of them need psychological help with their bi-polar asses. They cannot go three weeks without seeing each other though; I know you're going to make them have secret late night meetings (if not, take the advice). Update soon!

Author's Response: Can't get rid of that song. I think Justin is going to have it stuck until he can "fully relate" To the lyrics. *hint*. haha. And So happy you're back. I've been working up a storm this past week. Expect an email from me over the weekend. :D. And I'm happy you liked the update. I agree with you on the help. They are both messed up in the cabeza. lol. I'll be sure to take your advice into consideration. *shh.* haha. thanks for the feedback.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha. it's my birthday, so these next chapters better have my present in it, haha

Author's Response: Hold up. Is it really ur birthday? Today? Or are you joking? Because if it is, mine is today as well! That's why i've been so busy planning a party and outings and stuff for the weekend with me and my friends. hehe. And um, I'm not sure what present you're referring to...but if it's what i'm thinking...well. *lost trend of thought* Yah ok. So. hahaha. Thanks for the feedback. :D

Seriously can't Mallory just disappear!

Author's Response: I know she is a pain. But i mean, she hasn't really done anything. She's not all bad. :). Right now, Justin isn't thinking of throwing her through any windows. I'd say that's a plus. haha. I'll see what I can do about getting her out of the picture. Thanks for the feedback.

Hold up wait...the Titanic? why not Dirty Dancing? but a sinkin ship at a moment like this... that dont make u nervous? before i go, I was lookin at the top ten and let me just say Berry's not the only one whos got the touch-u see this story u were absolutely unsure about, almost deleted it... im glad u didn't otherwise i would have missed out on the 6th most read story...thats not all-looks whos at the top, cream of the crop, ten of most reviewed? thats right u,Ms D, im so inspired u & happy for u - Dani

Author's Response: I know right? I guess the titanic thing was just cliched. hehe. Oh Zara loves Dirty Dancing too and I like that movie. It's one of my old favs. Oh yeah, I was stunned too with the amount of responses this story got. I really thought people wouldn't like it. :-). I'm so glad I can entertain you all with my twisted mind. It's been in my system for some time and I finally took some time to ouline the ideas so I could write this. I'm glad I Inspired you. I get inspired by all the authors and readers here all the time. You need to post your stuff girl. I'll read. Thanks for the compliment and sticking with me through this story so far. The next update will be up soon. ;)

*here is a replay of dani reading part two* omg robin thicke?! he is too fine...isnt he mar-yep he is, but Berry looking never hurt anyone.. what the-Ju?! i swear men and their egos?! the nerve of him to be a baby a totally as-*stops, silence fills the air* OMG!?! A YACHT?! oh my, this has just turn into a love/hate relationship-love to love the story & its characters but hate its not real & not me, girl where can we find a man like him? lol a boa-no wait my bad-a yacht...u did it, dont know how but u did

Author's Response: LMAO!!! Haha. I cracked up by that review. Omg. lol. That was a good reenactment. hehe. I love your reviews. They're so  creative.  :).  I'm glad you love to hate it.  :). It gets better. I got the next few chaps outlined. :D.  And what exactly did I do? lol hehe. Thanks a lot for the review dani.

lmao tracy-poo is just too much! ju and berry are just too cute for words... dani

Author's Response: Yeah Trace can be a handful and he's just getting started. hehe. And those two I know they are adorable. :)

awe!  can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. More is on the way. :D

AHHHHHHHHHHH! Is really all I want to say right now. It's about time that they're getting somewhere, shhiiiit can I get a yacht from JT?! I can't wait for them to set off to wherever they decide to go, do I sense that there will be some love making on the horizon?? This def made sneaking on my sisters laptop worth it and it made me feel a little better about not being able to write for a ccouple days. Update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

Author's Response: Haha I feel you Tay. It's about time right? Yeah, at least now, things can start moving forward for them. I'm predicting it will too. :-). Even though they got a few bumps ahead, I won't dissapoint. And I miss you already. I read the notice you posted on SB. Can't wait for everything to work out.  Oh and I read your email so I'll be responding to it soon with some ideas. But it looks like you've got a good grasp on where you want things to go. But I'll take some time off to work out some of my ideas and email them to you. Anyway, can't wait till you're back. Oh and thanks for the great feedback. :)

OMG, I've been absent for a while and reading all the past updates were amazing. Is JT in love with Zara? That's the only explanation I see here. I mean he bought her a boat! That's pretty huge. Update soon.

Author's Response: Oh thank you for the compliment. I'm trying to get this story out of my system. I want to see it right through to the end, so I can work on updating my other stories. :). This one just won't stop flowing though, so that's a good thing. :). You all inspire me too. Stick around for the next update. You'll get the answers you're looking for and some more. Thanks for the feedback.

good, they need some alone time!! i wish i would get a yacht as an apology...lol! update again soon!

Author's Response: They most definitely need alone time. It's coming soon too. Who wouldn't want someone to buy them such a cool gift right? Thanks a lot for the feedback. More is on the way.

A yacht really well damn if he did this before he got the ( since we grown folk i'ma say it) PUSSY what the hell he gon do when he do get it. Justin gon lose his mind. I love it and i must tell you this I really do LOVE THIS STORY!!! More soon please !!

Author's Response: Oh man. I can only imagine right? He seems pretty sprung already. hehe. I'm so touched and happy that you love this story. I was worried people might not like what my twisted imagination had to offer. Lol hehe. But since so many are reading and enjoying, I'll keep writing. :D Thanks a million for the feedback.