Comments For An Unexpected Love Affair
wildthang (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 12:55 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
I can't believe him! Welcome back girl and I'm glad you enjoyed the labor day, but please do something about Justin and Z. I want them to hook up badly. This is not going to help. They were doing so well before. Justin had to f**k it up. Good chapters. Update asap.
Author's Response: Aww all these great welcome backs. Thanks a lot. And yes, Justin was a royal srew up. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Aww all these great welcome backs. Thanks a lot. And yes, Justin was a royal srew up. We'll see what happens. Thanks for the feedback.
alimera (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 08:40 am (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
ooooooooooooh boy. i did not like the way this went AT ALL. justin is an asshole!! he took it way too far this time, and god only knows what stupidity zara has cooked up in her insecure little brain...whatever it is, justin is going to regret his words. update again soon, i'm dying here!!!
Author's Response: Yes he is! And he did take it too far. Maybe he's just confused. I don't know. Well, the next update is done. So you'll soon find out what happens. Thanks a lot for the feedback! :-)
Author's Response: Yes he is! And he did take it too far. Maybe he's just confused. I don't know. Well, the next update is done. So you'll soon find out what happens. Thanks a lot for the feedback! :-)
LucidDreams (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 02:28 am (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
OMG! OMG! Please! Fix it! Justin you jerk! OMG! O_O :S :| lol. OMG! I'm glad you enjoyed the weekend. But OH MY GOD! I'm still addicted to the story. Amazing chapters by the way. But OMG! lol Ok I'm done now. :)
Author's Response: OMG I WILL! hehe. Addiction is a bad thing. But I'm so pleased you're enjoying this story. you guys give some interesting reviews! :). Thank you so much for the feedback. Stay tuned for the next part.
Author's Response: OMG I WILL! hehe. Addiction is a bad thing. But I'm so pleased you're enjoying this story. you guys give some interesting reviews! :). Thank you so much for the feedback. Stay tuned for the next part.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 02:25 am (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
oh no Berry dont cry over that butt hole... Ju had no right at all! however i wanna know when? when is there going to be more lovin instead of fighting? hate is so strong word... lol dani
Author's Response: He really hurt her you know? But she's a strong girl. lol. Ask for the more loving instead of fighting, that's complicated now to give an exact time or exact chapter. I don't even know what's going to happen to them. hehe. I'm just messing. Wait and see what happens. And hate is a strong word. But we all say terrible things when we're angry right? lol. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: He really hurt her you know? But she's a strong girl. lol. Ask for the more loving instead of fighting, that's complicated now to give an exact time or exact chapter. I don't even know what's going to happen to them. hehe. I'm just messing. Wait and see what happens. And hate is a strong word. But we all say terrible things when we're angry right? lol. Thanks for the feedback.
classicbeauty (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 02:14 am (Pilfered Hearts - Part 1)
Girlie I missed u! did u have fun? why didnt u take me with u? and did u see Justin? was he fine? Ok okay, i know shut up-first off sorry for not reviewin ur A.N. so not like me, but OMG! What do u do? Follow me or read my journal? its like u know me so well u knew what i wanted-no bump that-needed after a f^cked ^p week! See it started last Friday around the time i got your A.N. & its been down hill every since. anyway so u knew id want/needed 2 chapters huh? girl gave it and i absolutely loved it! - Dani
Author's Response: Aww I missed you too! hehehe. Why didn't you tell me you wanted to come with me? Lol. I wish I saw Justin, but sadly I didn't. I was too preoccupied with my friends and family. hehe. You're dead set on me stalking you eh? First it was the gym, now this. hahaha. I can just read your mind. I'm psychic. heheh. J/k. But you know, I'm really touched that my update can shine some light on your bad week. I know what those are like and I'm happy you reviewed! The next update is done. So check back today. :)
Author's Response: Aww I missed you too! hehehe. Why didn't you tell me you wanted to come with me? Lol. I wish I saw Justin, but sadly I didn't. I was too preoccupied with my friends and family. hehe. You're dead set on me stalking you eh? First it was the gym, now this. hahaha. I can just read your mind. I'm psychic. heheh. J/k. But you know, I'm really touched that my update can shine some light on your bad week. I know what those are like and I'm happy you reviewed! The next update is done. So check back today. :)
Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 01:24 am (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
Hey girlie! How was your trip to the NYC? hope you had a blast! NOW, as for these this chap? what DE FUCK?? what happened?? They go from almost getting their groove on up on the door to THIS? nooo! And what Justin said to her was hella mean. I wouldn't blame her for not forgiving him. Well, since he was drunk and high, I'm sure it was the drugs talking. And also, I think that Justin is alot like Zara in a way. He doesn't like to let people in. He's cocky and confident and she's shy and reserved, but in the end, they're both just afraid of being in love. I think that Zara is getting the best of him. He doesn't wanna let her know that he's in love with her so he has to break her down piece by piece. She needs to go back home to her brother. That was a sad but yet great chapter. I think the best one yet actually. I can't wait for her!! So glad you're back!
Author's Response: Oh the trip was excellent! I had so much fun. I'm still recovering. lol. I know, I know. Zara and Justin did a 180 on each other. It couldn't be helped, lol. Ok, so maybe it could since I'm the one writing, but every chapter shapes what's to come. Don't forget I have the story outline done. Even though I edit it along the way. :-). Justin was a complete jerk, but I'm sure the next update will shed some light on the situation. Thanks a lot for all the wonderful positive reviews! And the next update is done. :-)
Author's Response: Oh the trip was excellent! I had so much fun. I'm still recovering. lol. I know, I know. Zara and Justin did a 180 on each other. It couldn't be helped, lol. Ok, so maybe it could since I'm the one writing, but every chapter shapes what's to come. Don't forget I have the story outline done. Even though I edit it along the way. :-). Justin was a complete jerk, but I'm sure the next update will shed some light on the situation. Thanks a lot for all the wonderful positive reviews! And the next update is done. :-)
SexualCoco (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 11:22 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
OMG, that was horrible and just plain sad! Yeah Justin is going to feel like shit and he should for all that bull he said. I hope these two can reconcile and get their shit together. Great update, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I know it was right? When I read it over I was a little suprised at how intense I made their argument. The next update is done. So look out for it to see what happens next. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Author's Response: I know it was right? When I read it over I was a little suprised at how intense I made their argument. The next update is done. So look out for it to see what happens next. Thanks for the feedback. :)
tda720 (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 08:39 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I pissed you guys off. lol. But, I'll fix it in time. Don't worry. Thanks for the welcome back and NY was the bomb! I still wouldn't live there though. It's crazy up there, but I love to visit! hehe. Anyway, thanks for the awesome feedback and check me on those stories girl. I'm available. Anyway the next update is done. It will be posted soon.
D, now why would you do that? Him calling her fat and hideous is not going to get them to do the grown up any faster, so I think that you should fix this and pronto!! But although these two chapters shot their relationship to hell, I loved them and I'm glad you're back. Hope New York was great! But get to work on fixing their relationship..seriously..
Author's Response: Yeah I know. I pissed you guys off. lol. But, I'll fix it in time. Don't worry. Thanks for the welcome back and NY was the bomb! I still wouldn't live there though. It's crazy up there, but I love to visit! hehe. Anyway, thanks for the awesome feedback and check me on those stories girl. I'm available. Anyway the next update is done. It will be posted soon.
Gigi (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 08:33 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
Justin you prick!!!!
Author's Response: I certainly agree to that! lol. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: I certainly agree to that! lol. Thanks for the feedback.
rev0586 (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 08:25 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 2)
things were going so great n jt had to fuck it up but i wonder is something going to happen to zarawith those pills idk u keep brining them up?
Author's Response: Yeah he did. And he's going to suffer for it. But that's life eh. Well, you know what I mean. lol. And about those 'pills', wait and see if anything happens. Thanks for the great feedback. :)
Author's Response: Yeah he did. And he's going to suffer for it. But that's life eh. Well, you know what I mean. lol. And about those 'pills', wait and see if anything happens. Thanks for the great feedback. :)
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Sep 06, 2007 08:16 pm (Pilfered Hearts - Part 1)
oO..can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! There will be more really soon. The next update was done already. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! There will be more really soon. The next update was done already. :-)
Vegas Chick (Signed) on Sep 02, 2007 01:23 am (A Shrouded Love)
I sure don't like the bonehead...That will be his new name for me'Bonehead' cause that is just what he is...I am excited to read the next update!! So I will be looking...lol
Tina
Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 31, 2007 11:22 pm (The First Escapade)
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so close, so close, so close!!!!!!!!!!!! why won't she leave jeremy? he's not as fine as Justin!!!!!!!!!!!! lol
classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 31, 2007 12:47 am (The First Escapade)
AAAAHH! *does a happy dance* OMG I feel like I just won the lotto!?! Girl i almost screamed when i saw this but i caught myself before waking everyone in the house. lol Oh my this chapter was so worth the wait! Still dont like 'gym boy' and he proved i was right by acting a fool! Now lets not forget Ju and Berry...boy oh boy did it get hott and juicy at the end- I didnt know what to do nor what to say?! D, girl u know what I need- Dani
JuJuB (Signed) on Aug 30, 2007 10:51 pm (The First Escapade)
Ahaha first off, you are the awesome with your perception of Justin. I see him as being kinda crude and all 'guy' like with the 'i wish she'd get on her knees and fix it!' statement. and Zara, im glad she tossed his line right back at him. ahahaha I'm loving this and so is Harpolynn....I think you've inspired me to stop being all shy and make with the posting of my own fic. I do love some Justin torture and you're chalk full of it. *hands you muffins* bravo!
More! pretty please.
