Aww, now I feel bad for Justin. I mean he basically just told her how he felt about her and she pushes him away. I hope they work something out though because that kissing scene was hot (haha!). Great update, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks a million. Just had to respond to the reviews. Anyway, I hope you like how things are playing out so far.

Couch kissage. very nice. and the 'I don't take rejection well' side of Justin makes me want to hug him and then laugh when he's out of earshot. *pets him* Lovely update. keep the goodness coming, yo. also...hehehe glad you liked the name HarpoLynn =)

Author's Response: Hehe glad you like it. thanks for the great feed back. :-)

Oh Zara. :(. You broke his heart! He felt it in his chest! he's in pain. how could you? I mean the kiss scene was wicked hot! gosh this is depressing, yet I can't get enough of it. I'm drawn to this drama tale. I think they might be falling in love and not know it. please fix this little predicament. I really want those two together. I know them having a relationship will be a journey, I'd love to read about. But Zara is as stubborn as a mule! I think she's insecure with Justin because of her size. She needs more self-esteem! She needs to come to her senses and realize how great Justin will be for her and fast! Update asap. I need my fix soon! I'm Justin and Zara deprived. lol. Great chapter by the way.

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I know I'm responding after the updates but I'm taking all reviews into consideration for the story. It's good to know what you guys think.

looks like the tables have been turned im kinda getting the feeling that zara might be scared of having something w/ jt

Author's Response: Yes they did. Wait till you see what's in store for those two. hehe. :) Thanks for the feed back

someone dose protest to much. she soooo wants him but is just scared. please update soooooooon. PLEASE

Author's Response: Tell me about it. We'll see how it all turns out. Hope you enjoy the updates. :-) Thanks for the feed back.

Uhhh... no you didn't. Zara is stuuuuupidd; she wants Jeremy and not beautiful Justin, girl is crazy. I love the updates, like I told you before they're getting me by this week! But seriously, you've got to fix this, they were soooo close to the wild sex and then BAM.. she crushed his pretty little heart. LOL, update soon! I'm addicted.

Author's Response: I'm so glad my updates are helping your week to be a tad bit more enjoyable. :). Can't for your updates. lol. She did crush his heart, but Justin's a strong boy. He always bounces back. lol. Addiction is bad. :-). Hope you like the new updates and thanks.

WOW!!! What happend to Z fantasizing about Justin in the beginning. I thought she wanted her some of that, now this Jeremy dude comes along man...... I hope she makes up her mind.

Author's Response: Yeah, that's only the beginning. And I'm not so sure if making up her mind is going to be an easy task. hehe. Thanks for the feedback.

OH. MY. GOD. is she the dumbest person to walk this earth?! JEEZ! update again soon!

Author's Response: Well, maybe. Haha. You be the judge. But things are about to change for the two of them. Thanks for the feed back.

OMFG! I just read the last two updates. I really don't know what to say to this. I'm just as speechless as Justin. Just, OMG! Please update soon, like today. Please!!!! I'm suffering! I need more NOW! Awesome chap by the way. lol

Author's Response: I have as you can see. hehehe. Hope you enjoyed the new updates. :)

See now, I'm gonna have to kill Zara. First time, okay, she was a little nervous. But this time, you had all that Timberlake on a couch...in the dark...up under you...on TOP of you... WILLINGLY wanting you and you give him up for Gymster Jeremy?! She obviously needs Justin to fuck her reeal good for her to get something in her head. And I hope soon that you grant both of them that wish! lol. But in all honesty, I kinda see where she's coming from, since they work together and all. But it's only so seldom you get Justin Timberlake! And he is the man she's been drooling over forever. But at the same time, I like that she's messing with Jeremy a lil bit so we can see how jealous he gets. Jealous=mindblowing sex right? Right lol. Yeah, I just don't know what I want. Another chapter is good though! good work on this one!

Author's Response: Ok, so I know I'm replying after the update is up. But, I know you very much want Zara and Justin to hook up. And well, maybe it might not be so easy. Maybe things might be a little complicated, so wait and see what happens. And Jeremy isn't leaving the picture just yet. :(. He makes things interesting...don't you agree? hehe, thanks a lot for the feed back

Oh boy, for once she's the one making things difficult. Is she having self esteem issues or what! Screw jeremy, obviously you don't like him that much if you're making out with some other dude twice lol It's not just tension! Well, ok it's that lol but it could be more if she would let if, she could at least try to get to know him better, maybe then she'll come around. I have a feeling she's stuborn though. Wow! Just was nice, this was a turning point for him I think, let's hope he doesn't do a 180 and turn stupid again but I have a feeling he will, that's what men do, screw up lol Oh, and the make out session was HOT, me likey the kissage lol More soon! :D Like..tonight lol I know how it is though, I just started school too, anyway, good chap!

Author's Response: Zara does have a low self-esteem and she's just confused by the attention she's getting from Justin. i guess she's still shocked that he's showing interest in her. They're both stubborn! :). And yeah, i like nice Justin more. hehe. Glad you liked the kissage by the way. :)

Tell me... why is Justin actin stupid? And whats up with 'gym boy'? Im like her brother not too sure about him, I just hope hes not psycho... I may never know nor understand men and their dumb ass ways; hmm then again the world may not neither... But what I do know - I know that this chapter was off the chain! hehe However before I go there is somethin' that I really wanna know, is when... When am I going to get the next chapter? - Dani

Author's Response: Justin is just being a guy I guess. :-P. He'll get better and won't be such a retard, I promise. :-). Ask for Jeremy, well, you'll have to get to know him along with Zara and everyone else. :P. Men can be fustrating, I agree with you. And thanks so much for the compliment :). And, you're in luck! The next chapter is done! So it will be up in a few. hehe. I love your reviews! lol Stay tuned.

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuude! I will have your bastard children and we can call them 'HarpoLynn' even the boys if you update like....yesterday! omg. the argument...i was sitting at my comp like 0_0 slap his face Zara! Kiss her Justin! *flails* I need another fix of this...pleeeeeeeeeeease.

Author's Response: What!?!? :-O. OMG...that cracked me up. HarpoLynn? LMFAO! Ok, so, I feel you on the whole argument scene, hehe. But the next update is done, so stay tuned to find out what happens. Thanks so much for the awesome feed back. haha. :-D

Justin you dummy! And Zara why zara? how dare you shove him and hurt him like that. Arrg! Those two are fustrating. I just need them to fall in love and get their groove on already. lol. I loved it a lot! awesome update

Author's Response: Aww I feel your fustration. I promise it won't go away any time soon. haha. Well yeah. So, thanks for the feed back and stay posted.

UGH, they make me so angry sometimes. damn it, Justin. Damn it Zar! lol

Author's Response: I know they make me angry too, when I've read over what I've written. hehe. But! It keeps things interesting and that's life for you. We can't get along all the time right? hehe. Thanks for the feedback. :)