LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 10:51 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Oh no I should be happy but with Z's reaction I'm worried. What's going to happen between them now? Justin clearly likes her but she seems 'lost'. Update soon.

Author's Response: Wait and see what happens. :). Thanks for the feedback



alimera (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 10:28 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
oh dear. she liked it but she's confused. update again soon, i'm very intrigued by this story!!

Author's Response: Yeah she did like it didn't she? I'm glad you're interested with this story. It's far from over. :-). Thanks for the feedback and more is on the way. Stay tuned.



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 04:14 am (A Shrouded Love)
Oh yea and Mallory is SO annoying. Write in a nice 3 story window to throw her out of next chapter lol

Author's Response: Yeah she is quite irritating. Hmm I'll consider that 'murder plot' hehe that's so wrong though. lol. Thanks for the idea



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Aug 16, 2007 04:12 am (A Single Gesture Speaks Volumes)
Hahahaha, I knew it wouldn't be long before he caved. You can't fight the feeling y'all. They can ignore each other but the tension is just gonna build up again. Muwhahahaha. And yea, I'm awake at 4am so excuse me if this sounds crazy lol More soon! Like..tonight lol

Author's Response: Lol yeah you're right...he just couldn't resist. I feel you on the building tension and no i don't think you sound crazy because you were up at 4 in the morning when you read this...:-S. I mean, when most people we asleep, because I posted it some time in the early morning too! :) Working on the next update so expect it soon. :-). Thanks for the great feedback



SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 15, 2007 07:09 pm (You Make Me Better)
I just started this story today, and I love it. I just wish Justin would get some balls and make a move or let Zara know that he's feeling her some kind of way instead of being a jerk. Anyways, great story, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh, welcome aboard the Justin and Zara rollercoaster. No i'm kidding. But I am happy you're loving this story. And yeah, he can be a jerk, but hmm....we'll see how things turn around. Thanks alot for the feedback. It's deeply appreciated. I always enjoy knowing what people think of the story when reading. More is on the way. Stay posted. ;-)



classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 15, 2007 01:49 am (You Make Me Better)
ya know, its funny how youre worried if anyone will like this story...meanwhile here I am worried if im going to get a update from this story im totally lovin'... Dani p.s. now see thats a start but i needin more!

Author's Response: Yeah I was kind of worried, but with my loyal readers and reviewers like you...I can't dissapoint so I'll keep updating as long as you keep reading. Deal? hehehe...and I'm happy you love this story. More is coming soon. Thanks so much for the feedback. :-)



Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Aug 15, 2007 01:43 am (You Make Me Better)
Wow, that was an AWEsome chapter! So, where do I begin...First, Justin is being extra nice to her and smiley *giggle* And she stood up to him, you go girl. I think her standing up to him made him become even more attracted to her. She took a big risk by letting her boss know what's up. And he took her home and told her to call him Justin? What the hell has happened to Justin?? I can't wait to see what's gonna happen in LA and at the barbecue.  Or also what's gonna happen with either Justin or Jeremy. (please bang Justin, pleaseee lol)Hopefully we'll find out tomorrow? hehehe. I'm just so impressed with the constant updates. I feel so spoiled! and I LOVE IT! I'm so in love with this story and I think you're a great writer. great chap! K I'm done lmao

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I'm happy she stood up to him too...and yeah...he is kind of friendly now. What ever that's about. :-S. hehe. I feel you on the he might be changing and warming up to her part.  LMAO at the please bang Justin part. You're so bad! lol. You'll have to be patient on that one though. We have no idea when or if that will ever happen. :-P. Yeah, the next update is done, so it will be up soon. Stay posted and thanks so much for the compliment. I'm so glad I've spoilt you. Then my job is done...hehe. J/k. But stay tuned for the next part though. :-D



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 15, 2007 01:34 am (You Make Me Better)
Oh shit! Justin is human! hell yeah! I can't wait till he and Zara get their freak on. It's only a matter of time since she got that PA job. Update Soon!

Author's Response: Yeah he is! Shocker! lol. Oh you want them to get their freak on eh? That's so worng...no i'm j/k. lol.  We'll see what happens. Thanks for the feedback and more is coming! :)



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 11:13 pm (You Make Me Better)
Oh dang, call CNN y'all I think he was actually kinda *chokes* NICE there? And he only thought of sex like twice! Wow, who is this guy!? I might actually be liking him *gasp* lol More soon! Like..tomorrow would be nice lol

Author's Response: Hahaha....the CNN part cracked me up. I guess it's news worthy that he was nice right?  hehe Yeah, he's learning to control the hormones...or is he? Hmmm......I'm glad you're liking the story. The next update is done. It should be posted real soon. Thanks for the feedback.



Sweetchic05 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:26 pm (You Make Me Better)
I love this story!! Your doing and awesome job, and I can't wait to see if she takes the job!!!!

Author's Response: Oh I'm please that you love the story. That's great! And thanks so much for the compliment. More is coming soon, so stay posted. Thanks for the feedback too.



Gigi (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:22 pm (You Make Me Better)
YES! YES! YES! I so want her to hook up with Jeremy. Then once she does hookup with Justin gonna be so jealous! It's great!

Author's Response: LOL. We'll see how that works out and how it will all play out. :). Thanks a million for the feedback. More is on the way. :)



wildthang (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:18 pm (You Make Me Better)
Oh Yes! I was waiting for this. Justin is warming up to her. That's great. I sense a love trianlge brewing between him, Zara and Jeremy or am I wrong? Well maybe eventually. And I don't like Mallory either. We should all team up and 'plot her murder!' Or 'throw her out the window!' Lol. Update soon. I love, love it!

Author's Response: Well, you'll have to wait and see what happens with the three of them. And LMAO!!!!!!!! at the plot murder and throw Mallory out the window part. You read my mind! hehe. thanks for the feedback.



rev0586 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:15 pm (You Make Me Better)
if i was her id be confused as hell also lol, i jt might be having a change of heart thats great, im excited to see how her new promotion is gonna turn out since jeremy is also gonna be there

Author's Response: Yeah, Justin tends to be so hot and cold with her. It's hard to figure him out. But he sure is warming up to her huh? We'll see what happens between Zara, Justin and Jeremy. Thanks for the feedback. :-)



tda720 (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 09:07 pm (You Make Me Better)
Awwww shiiit! She's going to LA with them? And she's gonna be at the barbecue, Mallory's not gonna be happy about Justin's sudden interest in Zara! Hmm I feel like things are about to get hot <3. Update soon, I can't wait to see what's going to happen.

Author's Response: Lol you can bet Mallory is going to be pissed. And yeah, Zara and Justin are going to be spending some time together....hmm I wonder what's going to happen too! hehe. Thanks for the feedback. Stay posted. :-)



LucidDreams (Signed) on Aug 14, 2007 02:26 pm (Who Said It Was Over? It's Only Just Begun)
I forgot to say. You should hook up Z and Jeremy so we can see Justin squirm. lol. I hope you update today!

Author's Response: I guess no one is on Justin's side to make nice with Zara eh? Well, maybe the next few updates might change your minds? Maybe not? We'll see. Thanks again. :)





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