SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 13, 2008 07:12 pm (A Step Back...?)
what the hell? NOOOOOO!!!

Author's Response: *sigh* don't worry about those two, it's going to take a little bit more to tear them apart. :) I should have the next update out soon.



Gigi (Signed) on Jun 13, 2008 06:23 pm (A Step Back...?)
MAN!!!

Author's Response: I know! I'm going to work on fixing it. Don't worry. :)



alimera (Signed) on Jun 13, 2008 10:17 am (A Step Back...?)
Well, I guess I'm not completely mad and upset for the way this is going...she could have messed up and actually gone to Justin and told him that she was cheating on him or something like that person told her to. But I guess at the same time, I doubt she's going to tell him why she was taking those pills, and he's most likely going to be pissed at her, again. Ugh. I hope you fix this soon, girl, because I'm not understanding a thing and I don't want whatever is going on to separate those two! Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: I agree with everything you said. Hope you'll like the next update. It's going to start smoothing things out a bit. thanks for the feedback. :)



tda720 (Signed) on Jun 10, 2008 07:56 pm ('No One Will Tear Us Apart')

ah! so i leave and everything falls apart?! what's with these calls girl? and what did christian want with justin?! this is stilll my favorite story up here after all this time! you better make justin and zara turn out well; i dont like how hes been acting towards her! update soon! pleaseee! <3



Author's Response: Hey Tay! How's everything girl? It's been a while. lol. Everything hasn't fallen apart I wouldn't really say that, but Zara and Justin are facing some issues and mysteries that need solving. :) I'm so glad this story is still a favorite of yours. It's like a  'fan fiction soap opera' as my close friend calls it when I asked her to read it and give me her views on it. LOL And I agree they both have issues. Justin I'm sure you can tell has a serious temper he usually hides well which might end up being a problem...idk. lol. Thanks for the feedback girl I appreciate it and I miss you! When are you going to start back writing? Anyway I'm already almost done with the next update because some inspiration hit so hopefully, I'll have it up soon.



alimera (Signed) on Jun 10, 2008 12:13 pm ('No One Will Tear Us Apart')
Well, I'm glad he's taking the Christian thing better than I thougt but I'm hoping he's not just keeping it in only to explode it all out at the wrong time. And I'm really intrigued by the pictures and who could be behind sending them to Christian...update again soon!

Author's Response: Yes! Let's hope he doesn't go off when people least expect it. You know, Zara might not be the only one who needs some help in counseling. Justin needs to channel the anger he has which he rarely ever shows, but then that's the dangerous kind that's just ticking away like a time bomb huh? I'll work on clearing up the Photo part soon. :) Thanks a lot for the feedback on this update. I really appreciate it even though it was just a filler for what's coming up.



SJane (Signed) on Jun 09, 2008 10:48 pm ('No One Will Tear Us Apart')
justin is hiding something and i for one would like ti know what it is lol

Author's Response: lol I know right? Now when Zara wants to open up and talk he's being all withdrawn *sigh* I'll work on them I promise. thanks for the feedback. :)



Gigi (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 06:21 pm (Confusion and Chaos)
I'm convinced Mallory and Jeremy are working together and are behind all of this.

Author's Response: good point. lol . We'll see what happens though. thanks for reviewing. :)



DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2008 01:36 pm (Confusion and Chaos)
All this drama in their relationship is ridiculous!

Author's Response: I wholeheartedly agree. Everything is just crazy and I'm sorry for putting them and you all through this. I have it worked out. It won't be so over the top forever, just until some stuff is cleared up. :) Thanks for the feedback.



alimera (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 10:12 am (Confusion and Chaos)
Oh great, now Justin is going to blame all of this on Zara, isn't he? There's something very weird and twisted going on here and I don't like it...update again soon!

Author's Response: I agree with the wierd and twisted part. Surprisingly, it's not going to last too long. lol. So Hopefully I can clear up all the confusion in the coming updates. :) Thanks for the feedback.



SexualCoco (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 02:25 am (Confusion and Chaos)
Ok seriously, WTF is going on? Hell, I'm just as confused as the characters in this story (haha). So you know how I thought Christian had something to with those sketchy phone calls and all this other stuff that's been going on. Scratch Christian, I think it's Jeremy who has finally gone off his rocker and done went crazy (haha). Besides all that, great update girl and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: It's pure craziness now, like I was going for. But I'm not going to keep it crazy like this for long because my characters are going to have some other issues to deal with soon. lol. I just had it all outlined so I'm going along with that because I know exactly what's supposed to happen. I hate writing stories with no outline because it makes them harder to write since I have no idea what going to happen next. lol. Thanks for the feedback girl. I'll try to update soon. :)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 01:45 am (Confusion and Chaos)
Oh SHIT!!!! Justin and Christian FACE-OFF!!!

Author's Response: Ahahaha, not quite yet, but I won't count it out either. :p :D thanks.



SJane (Signed) on May 25, 2008 06:52 am (Unsettling Situations)
It has taken me a while but I fianlly got up to sped with this story. First is it really classed as an a/u story when justin is still who he is?

Anyway your story is just amazing I feel for berry and wanting to let go of the past but still in some way not able to.

Author's Response: Hey thanks so much for reading. I usually just put most of my stories as AU if I find that my Justin character might be really different from the real one. But it's not really an AU when you think of it. Hmmm...I might take it out. lol. But I'm glad you like this story and I'll try to get an update in soon. :)



alimera (Signed) on May 20, 2008 09:17 am (Happy Thanksgiving...?)
Um, who was that weirdo on the phone and what the hell is his or her problem? And Mallory is a bitch and needs to realize that Justin isn't hers anymore! Update again soon!

Author's Response: *Sigh* Ppl just don't like to see a good thing I guess. And yes Mallory is very much that, esp with what I have planned for her. She's not gone yet...:) Thanks for the feedback.



Gigi (Signed) on May 19, 2008 04:02 pm (Happy Thanksgiving...?)
Like someone said I think it's Jeremy.

Author's Response: Hmmm we'll see. Hehehe. thanks for the feedback. :)



Vessy (Signed) on May 19, 2008 11:57 am (Happy Thanksgiving...?)
Great update!

Author's Response: Thanks girl, i'll try to update soon.





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