this is really good so far update soon =)

WOW! Intense! More soon! I like ;-)

Author's Response: i will soon. very soon actually.

oh shit. justin just got cauuuughht. good. that asshole. i hope jade is free now.

Author's Response: Justin got it finally! But that's not the end of that. There's a lot more to come with him and JC as well. Thanks!

omfg! Thank god she escaped.  hmm Jc as a cop? That's hot. And Justin 'teared'?? what's that about? Is he that twisted in the cabeza? I mean he's abusing the poor girl and he's 'hurt' that she left him? Is he that delusional to think she would be with him and 'love' him or something? OMG. I'm kind of pissed because I can just bet he's going to find her. I don't want her to undergo his rath. Aww man. This is getting really good. I'm hooked. lol. Update again soon! :-D

Author's Response: There's a lot of underlying reasons why Justin is the way he is. She's a big part of his life. But without giving too much away, I've taken the story in a new turn. Thanks again Donna for your support!

omg she escaped but i think jt is gonna find her

Author's Response: We shall see. I got a few things up my sleeve. Thank you!

Shit. This is really good. Is she going to get away from him or will he find her? I'm dying to know, update soon.

Author's Response: LOL I'm running out reasons to just tell you to read. I can't give too much away but someone big's going to happen. Thanks for the review!

Wow, Justin is a psychotic, deranged lunatic! Haha. My sympathy goes out to Jade. I wonder what that 'rustling' was. Can't wait to see what happens next. Great update.

Author's Response: LOL Yeah, Justin isn't all quite there and I wanted to portray that part a lot in this story. Things are getting really good. There's a lot of different directions I could take this story in. A lot of surprises along the way. Thank you for the review Donna!

You really grabbed my attention with this chapter, it's so angst-ridden. I like that it's different than most stories. I can't wait to learn Jade's back story, and why Justin is the way he is.

Author's Response: Yeah, the further into the chapters there's a huge backing to these characters. I'm so happy you like it aria. I'm working the next chapter, it should be out very soon. Thank you for the review!

Wow, poor Jade. I really like where this is going, but I hope something happens to change the way Justin treats her, either that or she gets away. Update soon!

Author's Response: I don't know really. I'm trying to take it in a different direction but who knows? I might go another way with this. Thank you Taylor!

Ok what is going on?

Author's Response: LOL That's funny. Did you read the chapter? What are you confused on? Well, its only the chapter and the prologue, there's more to it if you keep on reading.

Oh can't wait to read this. Please update soon. 

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you'll still be here for more. Thanks Donna!

yr very descriptive and it does sound that she was kidnapped or something like that i especially liked how u ended that ch. its gonna keep me on the edge of my seat lol

Author's Response: I like to do that when I write. But its still nice to hear other people liking and noticing it. Thank you the review very much!

That was a very nice beginning. I'm eager to know more and I hope that you update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm working hard on this story. Hopefully you'll stick around for more later. Thanks for the review aria!

I'm really interested to see where this is going! Update as soon as you can, it's really good so far.

Author's Response: I'm writing more to it now, thank you for being so interested Taylor. I really appreciate you liking it.