Comments For Ashes
smrkks (Signed) on Jun 06, 2007 11:09 am (all for the want)
oh poor kate. yet, somehow, i get the impression that she's going to turn into super bitch soon. i still feel bad for her though.. even if she was the one who made that crappy decision. loved the chapter of course.
Author's Response: i love how you almost know whats coming....just you wait. all this is going to build and buld and build and then....well i can't tel you lol
Author's Response: i love how you almost know whats coming....just you wait. all this is going to build and buld and build and then....well i can't tel you lol
nameless (Signed) on Jun 06, 2007 11:06 am (cradle and all)
A part of me feels for Kate, but the other thinks she made her bed, now she must lie in it. The JT/Mae interaction is cute though, can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Kate is a sad character. so torn lol thanks for the review.....
Author's Response: Kate is a sad character. so torn lol thanks for the review.....
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 06, 2007 01:22 am (all for the want)
Uh Oh. This is not good. Even though I don't like Kate very much I'm starting to feel bad for her :( But I want to know what happens with Mae! LoL. Awesome job once again! Can't wait for more! TTYL -Traci
Author's Response: i'm just glad people give kate a chance....i love knowing whats going to happen with this lol more soon :)
Author's Response: i'm just glad people give kate a chance....i love knowing whats going to happen with this lol more soon :)
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 08:37 pm (all for the want)
I do kind of feel sorry for her...but that's what she gets! So about this Mae/Justin thing...is there even a thing? Anyway, AWESOME! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: she did make her bed didn't she...more justin and mae to come...thanks for the review! keeps me going :)
Author's Response: she did make her bed didn't she...more justin and mae to come...thanks for the review! keeps me going :)
Chelsia (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 06:07 pm (all for the want)
okay soooooo now i feel bad about not liking kate in the last chapter. now i feel bad for her. justin needs to bring jonah down there. and there's so many possible love connections happening i can't even guess anymore. guess that just means we need more udpates :)
Author's Response: i love how the tides change with you lol. i also love how you don't hesitate to tell me what to do :) lets me know where you stand lol
Author's Response: i love how the tides change with you lol. i also love how you don't hesitate to tell me what to do :) lets me know where you stand lol
Chelsia (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 06:00 pm (crooked man)
whoa whoa, when did this mae and justin thing happen? have i been living under a rock or is this just out of the blue? i'm pretty happy there's another chapter sitting here waiting for me to read to figure things out more....and fyi, i dont like how kate's only calling once a week....
Author's Response: i hope its not out of the blue....but then again i think i may exclude entire parts of the story that are only in my head.... lol
Author's Response: i hope its not out of the blue....but then again i think i may exclude entire parts of the story that are only in my head.... lol
chicagokiss (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 04:42 pm (all for the want)
I want to like Kate, but it's hard not to think she's selfish. Maybe you'll write something that will change my view of her. Agian, great update.
Author's Response: kate well kate is kate and people will love her or hate her. maybe you'll warm to her yet.... thanks for reading!!
Author's Response: kate well kate is kate and people will love her or hate her. maybe you'll warm to her yet.... thanks for reading!!
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 11:16 pm (crooked man)
OK...maybe I can warm up to the possibility of a Justin/Mae encounter. *Throws hands up in frustration* OK! You got me! So I was wanting the encounter to happen when she was tying his tie? No biggie! LOL. Awesome update!
Author's Response: LOL YESSSS! my goal is complete. that was the point. thanks so much!
Author's Response: LOL YESSSS! my goal is complete. that was the point. thanks so much!
chicagokiss (Signed) on Jun 02, 2007 04:14 pm (crooked man)
The thought of Justin not being able to tie a tie makes him cute, like a puppy cute. :)
Author's Response: lol well i think its good when men can be a little helpless :) thanks for the review
Author's Response: lol well i think its good when men can be a little helpless :) thanks for the review
smrkks (Signed) on Jun 02, 2007 02:51 pm (crooked man)
okay so aside from the fact that im really on team mae/trace.. the tie moment had my heart doing a little skip in anticipation. and i love mae simply because she is fantastic. update soon ash that was a little bit of a teaser of a chapter. don't make me get into my analogies again. :)
Author's Response: stace....such a stickler. teaser. hmph that took me two hours lol. come back to me star!!!
Author's Response: stace....such a stickler. teaser. hmph that took me two hours lol. come back to me star!!!
lesanne (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 06:03 pm (crooked man)
I really like this story, and I have to live without it for the summer. Well, at least I will have lots of reading to catch up on when I'm back in town.
As far as the chapter is concerned, I smell lots of trouble.
Author's Response: les...this is sad. i am responding to this and you're not even there to read it. why even bother with witty banter :(
As far as the chapter is concerned, I smell lots of trouble.
Author's Response: les...this is sad. i am responding to this and you're not even there to read it. why even bother with witty banter :(
nameless (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 03:58 pm (crooked man)
Justin going on a date, Trace has a girl on the side. Poor Mae, she needs lovin' from someone other than Baby J.
Author's Response: i know huh? how come men always seem to be doing better than us girls....thanks for the review :)
Author's Response: i know huh? how come men always seem to be doing better than us girls....thanks for the review :)
Hollie (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 01:00 pm (crooked man)
Hmmm. Intresante. More, please
Author's Response: lol just because you asked nice...
Author's Response: lol just because you asked nice...
alimera (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 08:30 am (crooked man)
love it...update again soon!
Author's Response: thanks so much! working on it :)
Author's Response: thanks so much! working on it :)
westernway (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 02:25 am (crooked man)
I love that you updated this! Good chapter and I adored the moments between Justin and Jonah as well as the little tie moment between Mae and J. Throw someone a bone ;) - Amanda
Author's Response: bones. hmmmm overrated i think. mostly i think i will draw this out as long as possible and...lol
Author's Response: bones. hmmmm overrated i think. mostly i think i will draw this out as long as possible and...lol
