Comments For Ashes
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 01, 2007 01:30 am (crooked man)
OMG! My name! LoL. You're awesome! Haha. I don't know if I appreciate the " dog walker/psychologist/yoga instructor" but hey...*shrugs* what can you do. What an awesome chapter! I really REALLY can't wait to see where this is going...something needs to happen...whether it's between Mae and Trace or Mae and Justin...something! Awesome job once again! TTYL -Traci PS-We need to catch up!
Author's Response: i thought you might like that :) i love that you like this! as for action....keep reading lol
Author's Response: i thought you might like that :) i love that you like this! as for action....keep reading lol
westernway (Signed) on May 27, 2007 08:26 pm (goodnight moon)
All that can be said is awwwwwkward! I don't know where I stand on the Mae/Trace or the Mae/Justin thing. I'm kinda leaning towards the Mae/Trace thing but maybe because Trace beat Justin to it.
I want an update missy! Drama this good should not be left unupdated lol - Amanda
Author's Response: I didn't know love was a race skittles. good to know for future effort though....lol as for how its going to go... not tellling lol
I want an update missy! Drama this good should not be left unupdated lol - Amanda
Author's Response: I didn't know love was a race skittles. good to know for future effort though....lol as for how its going to go... not tellling lol
lesanne (Signed) on May 27, 2007 06:26 pm (goodnight moon)
Ok. I'm getting a little worried. Trace kisses her and she runs off. Then Justin's scent calms her. Oh no. There's a love triangle brewing. Or a love square if Kate renters the picture. I think my head just started hurting.
Author's Response: where would we all be without a healthy dose of drama. i mean it makes everything interesting if nothing else. lol i love the thought of a sqaure.
Author's Response: where would we all be without a healthy dose of drama. i mean it makes everything interesting if nothing else. lol i love the thought of a sqaure.
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on May 23, 2007 10:12 pm (goodnight moon)
Mae and Trace...I like that a lot. Please tell me that you're gonna keep her with Trace and not make her fall for Justin. That would just be wrong! LOL. Anyway, I LOOOVEED the update it was awesome! Great Job!
Author's Response: hmmmm i could tell you that, but then i might be ruining something so i'll keep quiet. so glad you liked it :)
Author's Response: hmmmm i could tell you that, but then i might be ruining something so i'll keep quiet. so glad you liked it :)
Mr_Mrs_JRT (Signed) on May 23, 2007 02:15 pm (cradle and all)
Am i da onli one whos hoping for a Justin Mae Hookup i think dey would be too cute and hot where on da otha hand her and Trace seem like da bff dat try sum10 wit each otha den realize its not for dem. I can see Jay_Mae as a couple and Mea and Trace as a brother sister type
Author's Response: i don't know if you're the only one, but i'm glad that someone likes her with justin, even if its just wishful thinking lol thanks for the review!
Author's Response: i don't know if you're the only one, but i'm glad that someone likes her with justin, even if its just wishful thinking lol thanks for the review!
alimera (Signed) on May 23, 2007 11:40 am (goodnight moon)
haha, they do make one hell of a dysfunctional family. i love it! update again soon!
Author's Response: yes they do lol i'm working on the update now so hopefully soon :) thanks for the review
Author's Response: yes they do lol i'm working on the update now so hopefully soon :) thanks for the review
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on May 23, 2007 10:18 am (goodnight moon)
Uh ohhh. LoL. Awesome job once again Ash ;) So happy to read something! FINALLY Trace made a move...but I feel bad, cause it might not turn out that way :( Anyway, great job! -Traci
Author's Response: thanks so much traci! he did make his move and as for the future...who knows lol
Author's Response: thanks so much traci! he did make his move and as for the future...who knows lol
Chelsia (Signed) on May 23, 2007 06:18 am (goodnight moon)
so that was exactly what i needed to start my day. have i mentioned lately just how much i love mae? her and trace? very cute. about time there was some kissing happening. ok, so more like A kiss but hey, i'll take what i can get...
Author's Response: i kinda like them too. especially mae. love that she seems to not give a shit what anyone thinks, which is nice. and yes A kiss, we'll see if more is to come :)
Author's Response: i kinda like them too. especially mae. love that she seems to not give a shit what anyone thinks, which is nice. and yes A kiss, we'll see if more is to come :)
Vessy (Signed) on May 23, 2007 03:14 am (goodnight moon)
nice chapter!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!
smrkks (Signed) on May 22, 2007 11:25 pm (goodnight moon)
well then. excuse us all. they FINALLY kissed and she escapes from reality through justin's scent. damn girl. bring in a new character... name her something clever for me and get her together with trace... sexuals and all please. thanks. lol loved it.
Author's Response: *evil grin* the things i do torment you. but on a serious note....i'm sure you would love some trace sexuals....but i can't tell you if that'll happen or not. would ruin the great streak we have going lol
Author's Response: *evil grin* the things i do torment you. but on a serious note....i'm sure you would love some trace sexuals....but i can't tell you if that'll happen or not. would ruin the great streak we have going lol
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on May 14, 2007 04:21 pm (baby and me)
Oooo! I like, I like! Can't wait for more! You rock girl!
Author's Response: thanks so much :) hopefully you keep reading!
Author's Response: thanks so much :) hopefully you keep reading!
smrkks (Signed) on May 14, 2007 10:36 am (baby and me)
enter mae. i'd imagine this is when the tangling begins? and like i said, mae and trace should get together. not mae and justin. and SOMEHOW i have this little inkling that you're going to drive me insane with this. loved the chapter though. even if i felt like punching every single one of those assholes that frowned at jonah.
Author's Response: i think that a huge motivation is driving you insane. it carries all kinds of bonuses :) and go ahead and punch lol
Author's Response: i think that a huge motivation is driving you insane. it carries all kinds of bonuses :) and go ahead and punch lol
alimera (Signed) on May 14, 2007 10:26 am (baby and me)
mae to the rescue! lol...update again soon!
Author's Response: she should get a cape or something like that...thanks for reviewing :)
Author's Response: she should get a cape or something like that...thanks for reviewing :)
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on May 14, 2007 10:18 am (baby and me)
Haha. I knew he needed her. :) Awesome job once again. This story keeps getting better and better. ;) I did start to feel bad for Justin though. LoL. Anyway, great job once again :-D -Traci
Author's Response: at least he figured that out lol thanks so much! it means a lot that people are liking it :)
Author's Response: at least he figured that out lol thanks so much! it means a lot that people are liking it :)
Chelsia (Signed) on May 14, 2007 06:20 am (baby and me)
yes exactly. mae needed to be back in the picture and here she is. can i say that I loved that she and trace were together when justin called? so the way i see it, this is great. you give me some ashes, i'll give you some weathered. what a splendid balance
Author's Response: mae and trace are well, i'm just not going to tell you lol i love that you like it! and as for the trade...any time!
Author's Response: mae and trace are well, i'm just not going to tell you lol i love that you like it! and as for the trade...any time!