YAY!! now I know things will be ok :D
Great chapter can't wait for the next update ^^
Author's Response: Things are going to be better now, but there is still adult drama on the horizon. Can't wait for the next update you say. Well you don't have to....Thanx 4 reviewing!
THank YOU!!!! PIXIE IS GONNA BE OKAY!!!!!!
Author's Response: Of course she was. Cheyenne's like her mother, she's a tough girl and she's not going to let this bring her down. Thanx for your review!
Author's Response: Well then here's more.... Thanx for the R&R!
Author's Response: Yes Justin has seen the light and is walking towards it lol. Thanx for reviewing!
Well...That was a relief. Justin is a match..and by stepping up and saving his daughters life and sticking around..he may just be able to redeem hisself.
I LOVE the description of Cheyenne..Though she is a bit younger than the actress..her spirit reminds me of that adorable little girl that starred in that Disney movie "The Game Plan" for some reason..I just invision her like that. :)
Kiki..All I can say is that Justin is extremely fortunate that she is the type of person that puts the well being of her child before all else. She is able to set aside animosity..I understand why Justin should be allowed to take his rightful place in Cheyenne's life..it's best for her that she has her Daddy.
I know it's a distant secondary thing at the moment..but I hope that it is slammed home time and time again how terribly Justin hurt KIKI. He walked away from something great, and I want to see some reckoning for that..eventually. I can't help but resent his relationship with Cameron. He walked away from Kiki because what...he was falling in love? Why the hell is it ok to love Cameron?! If you were to bring them together again..I want him to have to work for it...HARD. lol
Alright luv..I'm done. Brilliant update..as always ;p
Author's Response: Haven't seen "The Game Plan" (I need to 'cause my other man - Dwayne Johnson - is in it looking all kinds of good lol), but from the previews I know the little girl you're talking about. She is adorable and yeah I would say Cheyenne has a personality like hers. Cute and percocious. Yes Justin is very lucky Kiki is such a good mother. She can put her own feelings towards him on the back burner (Side note: Justin and Kiki's past relationship WILL be addressed. Justin has not redeemed himself yet for that bretrayal in no way shape or form.) for the greater good, her child. Now when did I say Justin loved Cameron? ;) Thanx so much Dani for all the support you've been giving my story. rn
Author's Response: Of course the news would be good. Cheyenne's not going anywhere anytime soon. Thanx for the review!
lol i used the little girl from enough for one of my stories. lol shes an adorable little girl. good choice. she has an adorable voice.
Anyway, i really think that Justin is working hard to redeem himself. He put it best by saying that he was, "really was pretty frickin' shady" lol. He needs to work hard to gain everyone's trust and hopefully he's on the right track. Now, all he needs to do is get rid of Cameron... lol. Love the story girl!
Author's Response: I know I saw that in the video for Passion and I was like "well I guess great mind's think alike" ;) lol. Plus my little cousin has a voice like that and its like the cutest thing ever when she talks. I just thought the little girl I used for Cheyenne and that voice fit perfectly together.rnrnI'm so glad you think Justin is redeeming himself. He may not have just woke up one day and said, "I'm going to be a better person from now on." He had to be scared straight. He could have easily come to the hospital and given his donation and walk out again. But he's seeing this situation for what it is and taking advantage of the second chance(s) he has. Now as for Cameron well....you'll just have to wait and see :P You love my story, I love your reviews. Thanx girl!
Hopefully this crisis would be over with soon and none of them would have to sit back and watch an important part of all their life fade away.
That line just GOT me. OMG that was so sad girl. I hope she's alright. Leukemia... GOD. I was not expecting that... that poor little girl. I really just wanted to cry.
And I can't stand Cameron. lol She just sounds so nasal and annoying in my head lol.
Justin had better not be an asshole again or he's going to deserve a major smack across the face. I'm so addicted to this story. You throw in all these twists that I'm not expecting at all. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Hey I gotta keep you on your toes with my twists and turns, right? ;) LoL. This was defeinitely an emotional chapter for me as well, but everything will work out in the end. And part of that will not involve Justin backsliding. He has seen the light, plus Kiki's not about to let that happen, at least without doing some bodily harm to him first lol. Now Ms. Diaz, well there was a little selfishness coloring her response to Justin having a child, but she might as well get used to sharing him because Cheyenne not going anywhere and she's just been bumped down Justin's priority list. Thanx for reviewing Jeannie and I'll be feeding your addiction soon! LoL.
Author's Response: Justin has had himself a very rude awakening and now he is ready to do what's right for Cheyenne. Say bye bye to dumbass Justin. Thanx for your review!
Author's Response: I can tell you this: It happens everyday, but I don't think its right for parents to have to bury their child....Thanx for the R&R!
Author's Response: Thanx! I'm glad you like it. The next one is in production already.
Author's Response: Thanx 4 the review! And as far as the next chapter goes.. :)
Crying is not the best way to start out your day..but that's how it started for me. This chapter was so heart wrentching. You made us fall in love with Cheyenne last chapter, and now this sweet beautiful little baby could die. That's actually worse than Kiki dying.
Ok..now I feel sorry for Justin..against my will. Well, your right I pity him. A sick child supercedes everything else..and makes hard feelings and isecurities fall to the wayside. I'm just glad that Justin immediately reconized that he had screwed up. That he could lose his child.
At this point I'm just going to patiently wait for the next update, and hope that it brings good news for little Cheyenne. I won't even comment on the underlying stuff that has got to be going on between Justin and Kiki. Later for that.
The update was..Wow.
Dani
Author's Response: I know it was a sad one, but I had to bring in the drama somewhere and what's more dramatic and emotional than a child in crisis. Plus it the kind of situation that brings everyone together and cuts out all the BS that was keeping them apart. But the drama doesn't stop here, like you said there's "underlying stuff" between Justin and Kiki that still needs to be addressed. For now though, Justin's eyes are wide open now and he's finally going to man up for both his self and Cheyenne. Thanx for the feedback Dani!
I hope they all pull through this. I'm glad Justin's back, and I want things to be right with all of them again :)
Author's Response: Its going to be a long road, but things should pan out well for the whole gang. Thanx for reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah it was depressing writing that chapter especially when I played the song while doing it. Thanx for the R&R!
