Comments For Spoiled
Miraclebabe (Signed) on Sep 24, 2007 01:50 pm (Closer & Closer - Almost Touching)
They could have at least kissed that wouldn't have made her a freak just freaky. Damn woman you killing me softly here but I love ya for it. Great chap and I can't wait for more so don't make me PLEASE!

Author's Response: I don't know about you but I couldn't just kiss Justin Timberlake Lol.



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 21, 2007 11:13 pm (Closer & Closer - Almost Touching)
The best chapter ever!!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you likey.



champ (Signed) on Sep 21, 2007 06:10 pm (Closer & Closer - Almost Touching)
liking your story...hope you update soon!!


Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R.



LaLa (Signed) on Sep 21, 2007 02:32 pm (Closer & Closer - Almost Touching)
Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: More to come soon.



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 21, 2007 05:39 am (The Date)

Ooohh....that was just one big tease!  They need to hook up! :)

PLEASE!



Author's Response: You think that was a tease. Hehehehe



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 21, 2007 02:25 am (The Date)
That was interesting.

Author's Response: A jealous Justin is always interesting. Not to mention hot.



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Sep 20, 2007 03:34 pm (Tales of the Broken-Hearted)
OMG i love this story. lol The fact that she was a PCD made me giggle cuz i could totally see justin and trace with their mouths to the ground. love itttt

Author's Response: Yup Kiki's got a not so innocent side to her and poor Justin missed all the action. Maybe she'll give him a glimpse of what he missed. Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you love my storyyyy. LoL



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 07:44 am (Tales of the Broken-Hearted)

WOooo!!! They like each other, they like each other! **does a dance around the room**

SO, now they need to hook up :)



Author's Response: Patience is a virtue hehehe :)



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 06:14 pm (Hallway Fun)

Oooh...something's gonna happen soon, I can feel it!  To completely steal a line from Hollie, "my spider sense is tingling" and I'm stealing that because Hollie is the shit and I love that line....

Oh...I ramble way too much! 

 



Author's Response: Well those spidey senses are going to be tingling for a little while longer......



Gigi (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 09:31 pm (Hallway Fun)
Something tells me he was pretending.

Author's Response: Hmm? Maybe ;)



LaLa (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 08:35 pm (Hallway Fun)
cute...can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 12, 2007 02:30 pm (Kick Off)
So....they're getting 'cozy', huh?  Good!  They're cute together :)  Loved it, can't wait to see what happens at this party!

Author's Response: Yes Kiki and Justin are steady reeling each other in. I won't be highlighting the first after party, but there is another party coming up that is going to be very interesting. You just gotta be patient and wait a little bit for it. :)



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 10, 2007 10:00 am (New Beginnings)

Ooohhh....something's happenin' between them :)  I love it!

Can't wait to see where this goes :)



Author's Response: Oh yes Kiki and Justin are makng things happen. Thanx for the R&R!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Sep 08, 2007 11:08 am (Try Outs?)
I like the premise of it so far... and i totally love how the family is so close. i even giggled with the paella refrence... lol it sounded like my house. good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a big fan of your work so I'm flattered that you like my story. Yes the Lewis are a tight group, they stick together. I hope you like the rest of the story.



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 07, 2007 07:17 am (First Impressions)
That wasn't a very good first meeting.  I hope things get better between them soon!

Author's Response: We shall see!





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