Comments For Spoiled
alimera (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 11:22 am (Hook, Line.....)
Hmm, things are definitely getting close to boiling point for those two...can't wait to read what happens next! Update again soon.

Author's Response: Oh yes Justin and Kiki are arms length away from the BP and someone is bound to get burned.

Thanx for reviewing and more to come soon!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 11:33 pm (Hook, Line.....)
I think that Kiki needs to give it up. She loves him and he loves her, plus they have a daughter. Yeah he hurt her, but people make mistakes and he's making up for them. I love this, PMS

Author's Response: Yeah Kiki needs to give in before she drives herself crazy, but at the same time it's going to cause more problems than solve them. Remember Justin has a little thing called a girlfriend and after being cheated on herself more than once, Kiki's not too keen on being a cheating co-captain . So the question is: does she do what will make her happy, but hurt someone else or does she forfeit her own happiness for someone else's?

Now as for Justin - Yes Kiki wants him back too, but taking advantage of that in pursuit of her when he's already involved with someone, is unfair.

I like the think Juki is one of those couples that you think belong together and root for even at the expense of others. It may not be right, but what's meant to be is meant to be for Juki. Ooh that rhymed. LoL

Thanx for the review!!!




champ (Signed) on Jan 30, 2009 10:13 pm (Hook, Line.....)
great update...

Author's Response: Thanx! Once I post it, I hope you'll enjoy the next chappie too!



juno (Signed) on Jan 19, 2009 08:04 pm (Denial)
Aww... this is so heart-wrenching. I rooting for Kiki and Justin.

Author's Response: I know that was a pretty emotional experience for Kiki especially. She's so torn between still being in love and still being afraid to let Justin back in. Justin maybe be in pursuit, but he really hasn't grasped the reason why Kiki's so resistant and until he does, he and Kiki can't truly reconnect. Have faith though, I'm a happy ending fan, its just going to take some time.

Thanx for the feedback : )




alimera (Signed) on Jan 17, 2009 10:12 am (Denial)
Hopefully he does get Kiki to realize that they're meant to be a happy little family! Update again soon.

Author's Response: Justin got his work cut out for him, with Kiki, but also with himself. He's got some issues of his own to deal with that haven't surfaced yet.

Thanx for the R&R and I'm working on the next chappie already : )




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 17, 2009 02:23 am (Denial)
I love their little game they're playing. Kiki needs to give it up and just admit that she still loves him. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Of course I want them together too, but like the chapter title says: denial. Kiki is in serious denial, its easier, less painful for her to just ignore the fact that she still loves Justin especially since her heart is still damaged because of him. But she can't lie to herself forever and Justin's not going to stop until he wears her down.

Thanx for the review!




SJane (Signed) on Jan 17, 2009 12:27 am (Denial)
Oh im all for justin playing this game to get kiki back but does he forget about cameron???

Author's Response: You nailed it. Justin's mind is so focused on winning Kiki back that he's totally forgotten Cameron, but Kiki hasn't. And eventually Justin's pursuit of her and his status as unavailable are going to clash.

Thanx for reviewing!




alimera (Signed) on Jan 10, 2009 10:51 am (Walking Into A World of Trouble)
Seriously, they need to get over their past and work on their future--ASAP. Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: They definitely need to work through their mess, but its a heavy mess that's between Justin and Kiki. Its going to take some time for them to get there and its not going to be all sunshine and roses. I can say that they are at the point of no return now so its only a matter of time.

Thanx for the R&R!




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 07:42 pm (Walking Into A World of Trouble)

It took me forever to review and I'm so sorry! I love this story though. You know that!

 

Justin's mother's day with Kiki and Cheyenne was adorable. I loved the green mac eyeshadow! LOL That was so cute. And the thanking eachother for Cheyenne was even cuter. Gah! The sexual tension between Justin and Kiki just keeps growing and growing. I was hoping they'd get with each other in this chapter but :(. I'm sure it'll happen soon enough!

 

Might I also say that I love how possessive Cheyenne in. lol She's such a daddy's girl! Kiki isn't far off though... hehe, she was so jealous when the groupie hit on Justin. She needs to act on it! haha. Loved the update! More soon please!



Author's Response: Don't worry about it girl, I'm just happy you reviewed!

I would say that both Cheyenne and Kiki definitely have a possessive streak when it comes to Justin, but he's just as possessive of his girls. They're a family, Justin and Kiki just have to get that through their freakin' heads. Of course with the UST ever growing its just a matter of time before it clicks.

Thanx for the review Jay!




champ (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 07:11 pm (Walking Into A World of Trouble)
great update...hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanx for the review!

I hope I'll update soon too LoL




SJane (Signed) on Jan 05, 2009 03:44 am (Walking Into A World of Trouble)
That's right none of this pretending shiz anymore grab those hormonea and run with it guys lol
Love it girl

Author's Response: I know right LoL. No more fakin' the funk for Justin and Kiki. Its time they stop playing and just let nature take its course ; )

Thanx for reviewing Stacey!




kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jan 04, 2009 11:42 pm (Walking Into A World of Trouble)
I love this. I so want them to get back together. I love her dumping the drink on the groupie. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I know the "accident" with the drink was great. Kiki's got the same nasty jealous streak that Justin has.

I think its safe to say that Justin and Kiki are steadily getting closer and closer to a reunion. But that doesn't mean its going to be easy.

As always, thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate it.




MissM69 (Signed) on Jan 04, 2009 11:37 pm (Walking Into A World of Trouble)

OMG :O

please please update soon can't wait to read what will happen next :D



Author's Response: I'm going to try really hard to get the next chapter out very soon. Believe me, I'm just as anxious about the next post as you are. LoL.

Thanx for the R&R




aswift (Signed) on Jan 04, 2009 10:37 pm (Walking Into A World of Trouble)
It's about time!!  Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: I know, I know. This chapter was supposed to be a Christmas post, but that didn't happen so then it was supposed to be a New Years post and that didn't happen either so....My bad! LoL. I'm not making promises, but I hope to have the next chapter up soon. Thanx for R&R!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 10:30 am (Family Matters)
Aww, they're getting closer and closer by the hour! I can't wait til one of them cracks...update again soon!

Author's Response: You're right - Justin and Kiki are ever getting closer to falling back over that edge. The problem is, it's not going to be a very easy fall. Thanx for the review!!





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