I just caught up on this story. It's cute and super sweet and easy to follow. Kudos on that!
You might want to think about having someone beta or edit your stories, though. Even the best of us need someone to look over and catch mistakes we don't see on our own. :)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh this was too cute...I really when he asked the women if he could pratice talking to her child...lol..that was just way to cute...Though it being twins was really easy for me to figure out...
Oh and does the press already know about the marriage and the baby? If not when will they find out?
Will this be more happy and no drama?
I am really excited about this!!! I cant wait for the next update...hope it will be soon!
Tina
Oh Boy this is going to get reaööy good..now that we have a package comeing..lol...Cant wait for what is to come next!
Tina
Author's Response: well go read the update and read some more stuff about them lol.
That was not in the sweet way....damn I wish my man was like that...lol I loved it though...and oh how I am wondering what is going to happen next..lol I will be looking for that update.
Tina
OK..thanx for clearing that up for me...lol...I was really not sure about it...and I excited to read the next chapter...so I will be looking..lol
Tina
ok how old is she cause if she was half his age that would make her like 15-16. I know she is older so do tell...lol...all and all it was gooddd!!!! I really love this story....Cant wait to read the next chapter!
Tina
Author's Response:
if you read i think its the first or second chapter it tells that he is in his early 30's (really his age 31) and the girl is in her early early 20's like 20-21, so like ten years apart; some might consider that half their age. Because if she was 18-19 he would be 28-29 so yea. but i guess some might just go eh your ten years or so apart whatever. lol. but thanks for the read i'll be updating inbetween classes if i get the chance.
I cant wait to read that update!! lol
Tina
Author's Response: thank you. I will update after work for sure.
I liked it. It's fun. keep it coming.
I can't believe she did wet her pants. lol
Author's Response: lol. i know right,