Kahlymilla (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 12:03 pm (Fall Apart Today)
Oh boy that was sad. I guess my assumption about something sad going to happen was right. It start of as a bittersweet moment that turned sour at the mention of her being pregnant and then to find out the father is gone. That's really sad. I wonder how Justin plans to be there for her...well if he wants to. I don't know how stepping in as a father appears to him. I know he's attracted and intrigued by her, but is that enough to allow him to take that big of a step? Anyway, can't wait to see what's in store for this story. I'll add it to my favorites so I won't forget about it. -Kahli



Kahlymilla (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 11:39 am (Say Something)
That was a very sweet chapter. I enjoyed the endearing and light-hearted conversation. It gave the characters a lot of substance. And that's what I like to see. I must say that I'm intrigued by this story and the characters. I've never read one of your stories before but I heard a lot about you. So I decided to give it a try and I'm glad I did. I've been trying to get back in the swings or reading and writing fiction since I had suffered a lack of inspiration for awhile. Autumn is a character that I know I'll like and the same thing goes for Justin. But for some reason those last lines of this chapter makes me think that something sad is about to go down. On to the next one I go...because this is getting lengthy.



Gabo (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 11:52 pm (Fall Apart Today)

Kathryn! Yay a new story! It's sad..yet intriguing! Love it! More please!

 

- Gaby 




Hollie (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 02:24 pm (Fall Apart Today)
Well now I'm all sad and stuff. :o(



alimera (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 08:05 am (Fall Apart Today)
wow, that is so sad--did he die over in iraq or something? poor thing...she needs a guy in her life right now if the other one is gone! update again soon, i love it!



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 12:21 am (Fall Apart Today)
See, I knew it lol Too good to be true. I know how y'all particular authors work by now on these stories lol Oh well, I'll keep on reading lol More soon :D



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 16, 2007 11:09 pm (Fall Apart Today)
Very interesting. As far as I'm concerned she's single and he should go for it. Unless he's not interested in playing the Dad role. We'll see. Please update soon.



Timberlake (Signed) on Oct 16, 2007 11:00 pm (Fall Apart Today)
omg, that's so fuckin' sad =[[[[[[[[[[[[[



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 16, 2007 06:52 pm (Fall Apart Today)

Oh...this just added a whole new twist that I wasn't expecting AT ALL and I love it!  I'm so excited for this story, you don't even know :)

And...about the first week of November/snow thing....my birthday is the 1st of Nov and I always pray that it won't snow before then...it always does :)




Gigi (Signed) on Oct 16, 2007 06:15 pm (Fall Apart Today)

OMG! I think my heart hurts.



Author's Response: Uhhh...is that a good thing, or a bad thing?



LoveYou2 (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 11:24 pm (Say Something)
Hmm this is good so far but I'm suspcious like Hollie. It's..nice! Something must go horribly wrong soon, y'all can't ever let characters just be happy lol I guess I'll read on for now though lol More soon :D



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 09:49 am (Say Something)

Oooh....you know, I don't know what excites me more, I new story, or a new story by you :)  and I have just clinched the ass-kissing title of the year!!!

haha...but really, I'm very excited to read more of this.  Fall happens to be my favorite season too!




alimera (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 09:47 am (Say Something)
ooo, this is really interesting! i love it, update again soon!



Hollie (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 07:08 am (Say Something)
That was cute. That was all very nice and cute, which means you are so up to something. I love it. More!



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 14, 2007 12:10 am (Say Something)
Aww, I love it so far. They're so cute together. Please update soon.





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