Comments For Spun
amk88 (Signed) on Aug 09, 2009 11:48 pm (Chapter 25)
yay! it was great. my only critique was that you should have sperated it more when the P.o.v. changed, but other than that, it was sweet. is there a sequal for the new baby?
amk88 (Signed) on Aug 08, 2009 11:12 pm (Chapter 24)
Funny that he can't seem to get it together when he's sober, but when he's drunk, he nos exactly what not to say... o well, least he's not braindead
amk88 (Signed) on Aug 04, 2009 11:26 pm (Chapter 21)
... and a last time if she keeps calling him baby like that, especailly around harri
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 12:46 am (Chapter 16)
OMG, that girl is giving me a headache with all her mind changing-- at least i agree this time.
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 20, 2009 12:29 am (Chapter 15)
Not the way I thought this chap would go at all, but much better than anything i had planned
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 02:52 am (Chapter 7)
OMG, the line about the baby being up there...and Adam too, too funny. i was rolling on that one.
U r a beautiful writer. And Aunt Rita, Lord, child, i can't take how hard i was laughing with that
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 02:27 am (Chapter 6)
not in love with her...much haha, good save. n that' line about falling in love with her, but eveything in him cahnging, good one! sry if this is long n pointles, but i like good writers to get good feedback.
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 02:07 am (Chapter 4)
Aww, his "long as there's love b/t us..." speech was so perfect. not to sappy, but so sweet.
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 01:52 am (Chapter 2)
Laffin my tail off. serves her rite. how did she think she was gonna get out of that... n he thought his girlf was gonna b mad b4..tehe, he ain't seen nothin yet.
amk88 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2009 01:34 am (Chapter 1)
OMG. i was gonna bypass this sotry at first, but i decided to give it a chance, and i am so glad i did. wonderfully written. so good. can't even pick out the good parts, there were so many, so i'm just gonna say, way to go n write some more stories!
