Comments For Heavily Broken
Ambs07 (Signed) on Oct 28, 2007 10:28 am (Opportunities)
I like this story so far, it's good... Update soon.

Author's Response: Hey!!! I'm glad you like it...it's definitely been interesting to write. I should have another update out shortly though!!! I hope you enjoy the next one as well!! Thank you soo much for the review!!! :)



aswift (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 12:59 pm (Opportunities)
I'm ready for more!

Author's Response: Good deal because another update is on the way!!!!!! Thank you for the review!!!!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 09:01 am (Opportunities)
hmm, the past must've not been that pretty if she's hesitating because of him! update again soon whit!

Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! It's not so much their specific past together but rather she doesn't want to reconnect to her past with memphis. She likes being alone in LA and nobody knowing her. Justin knows her as Addi, from Memphis and that's what she doesn't want to deal with. Yikes...I'm so excited to really get into it. Thank you sooo much for always reviewing...your support is awesome!!!!!



JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 06:05 am (Opportunities)
Update soon and make ur story alittle long :)

Author's Response: Hey there!! I'm working on the next update and they'll definitely get longer once I really get into it. Right now it's a lot of back history. Thank you sooo much for the review! I love hearing feedback from readers!!!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 08:45 am (Fairytales...)
hmm...i see a little foreshadowing there! can't wait to see what happens next--update again soon girlie!

Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! hahaha I don't think I can put anything by you!!! Thank you soo much for all your support...it defintiely means a lot to me!! I'm working on the next update and it should be ready to go in a day or two!! :) You're awesome! p.s. where's your update? :)rn



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 08:08 am (Fairytales...)

Ooh....I love it :)  I'm so excited for this, and I think you're doing a fabulous job!

Oh...and we need to have a conversation soon, about Christopher (The Marine)...I think I just might shock you



Author's Response: Hey AJ! Well thank ya chica...I'm pretty sure I'd still be thinking about another story if it wasn't for your words of wisdom! haha..but I'm glad it's living up to your expectations!! Thanks for all the support!!rnrnp.s. YOU DID SHOCK ME!! BUT RIGHT ON!!!!



JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 21, 2007 06:40 am (Fairytales...)
I like it.Update soon

Author's Response: Hey there!! I'm so glad you like this story...it's definitely been challenging to write so far...still working the kinks out! haha...but I'm working on the next update and it should be out soon! Thank you sooo much for the review!!!!!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 01:50 pm (Devastating Secret)
Really good start. I like this story so far. Poor Addison, I think it'd be devistated too.

Author's Response: Hey there!! I'm so glad you liked the beginning. I'm really looking forward to getting into this story...there's definitely a lot of different dynamics going on in her life. But I hope you continue to read and enjoy the next update!! Thank you sooo much for the review!! :)



alimera (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 08:12 am (Devastating Secret)
oh dear, poor thing! is it ever a good time to tell children that? update again soon!

Author's Response: Hey Alimera!! That's exactly my feeling...I don't think there ever is a good time to find that out. Especially if your family hides it from you. That secret really has hurt Addison and made her question a lot of things in her life. Well I hope you like the next update and thank you for always reviewing!!! You've been awesome!!rnrnp.s. Girl, where's my update?! :)



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 06:07 am (Devastating Secret)

Ohhh...girlfriend!  I will help you sort your thoughts ANYTIME if it helps create stories like this one is shaping up to be :)  You know I'm so excited for this one, I can't wait to see where you take it!

and...hey...that was fast! :)



Author's Response: Hey AJ! I'm glad you liked the first chapter, especially since you've helped me really develop this one!! But I hope you enjoy the rest of it and you can bet we'll be having some long chats when I get stuck again!! Thank you for always reviewing...it's awesome girl!!



SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 17, 2007 12:58 am (Devastating Secret)
Yay, you're back already! Well, I wanted to be the first to comment on your new story. First off, I think it was totally random and crazy how the mom just sprung that on her on her 18th birthday. Like who does that just out of the blue? I'd be pretty pissed too, esp. on my birthday. Great start girlie and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey!!! That first chapter was just a snapshot back...it's an explanation for Addison's behavior. I mean finding that out whether it was on your birthday or not would be really hard to deal with. Especially since her family hid that from her all those years. I'm really glad you like the new story because it's definitely different than my other two! But thank you sooo much for always reviewing...you've been with me since the very beginning!!!





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