Comments For Heavily Broken
Rae (Anonymous) on Feb 10, 2010 05:46 pm (Devastating Secret)
yeah so this story needs to be finish like right now.........lol. but forreal please update this story, its so good.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 09:38 pm (Nothing Can Ever Be The Same)
Author's Response: Hey AJ!!! I am so glad you liked the chapter, you have no idea how much it means to me! You helped me develop this story and it's awesome to know I'm doing it justice!! Thanks girly for always supporting me and the reviews!! You rock!!! Thanks AJ!! rnrnp.s. we need to catch up soon, give me a call! Later girly!
Ah Ha! I knew it :) I knew this scene was coming, and I think it was perfect :) Yay for Justin and Addi, and yay for good friends.
Yo go girl. This story is coming along amazingly and you're doing such a wonderful job with it :) Maybe some of your updating will rub off on me!
Author's Response: Hey AJ!!! I am so glad you liked the chapter, you have no idea how much it means to me! You helped me develop this story and it's awesome to know I'm doing it justice!! Thanks girly for always supporting me and the reviews!! You rock!!! Thanks AJ!! rnrnp.s. we need to catch up soon, give me a call! Later girly!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 09:28 pm (Shelby Forest)
Wow. This was such a great glimpse into Addison and her past. Bravo for such awesome writing, I think you handled this chapter beautifully :) And I hope that things get better with her Family, but I have a feeling that it's going to be a certain pop star that comes in to pick up the pieces.... heh :)
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! Awww...you're awesome!! Thank you, thank you...I am so glad you're liking a story that you helped me create!! Oh, it's definitely going to take a pop star to help her figure some things out...but I do have some crazy ideas coming up!! Thanks girly for all the reviews!!
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! Awww...you're awesome!! Thank you, thank you...I am so glad you're liking a story that you helped me create!! Oh, it's definitely going to take a pop star to help her figure some things out...but I do have some crazy ideas coming up!! Thanks girly for all the reviews!!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 23, 2009 09:18 pm (Football Obsession)
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! I can totally relate about being overwhelmed with school!! No problem!! I loved that she was checking him out too! She's finally noticing Justin a little more too. Favre, Favre, Favre...he's still the man but I'm not gonna lie, I'm pissed he left the Pack but he's still the best damn QB ever!! Hopefully he can forgive me!! Thanks for all your reviews girly!!
Ok Ok....please, no hate mail! I know I have to catch up on my reading...I've just been uber busy trying to get through school. But anyway, I'm here now and I'm ready to read and review.
First of all....WOOOO!!! She was TOTALLY checking him out, and...they've got dates! This is exciting.
Secondly....Giiirrrllll....you must love this story to jump ship on Favre! I loved it, though, and I'm sure Brett will forgive you're artistic choices :)
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! I can totally relate about being overwhelmed with school!! No problem!! I loved that she was checking him out too! She's finally noticing Justin a little more too. Favre, Favre, Favre...he's still the man but I'm not gonna lie, I'm pissed he left the Pack but he's still the best damn QB ever!! Hopefully he can forgive me!! Thanks for all your reviews girly!!
alimera (Signed) on Mar 22, 2009 09:20 am (Nothing Can Ever Be The Same)
Wow, I'm so happy for her! She needed to open up to someone and since Justin is so grounded and secure in his life, he was the perfect candidate. Loved it Whit, as usual. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! Awww, I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I think it was about time he finally got a look into the true Addison, not just the walls of protection. Thank you girly for always reviewing and you're support! You keep me going and I really appreciate all your kind words! :)
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! Awww, I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I think it was about time he finally got a look into the true Addison, not just the walls of protection. Thank you girly for always reviewing and you're support! You keep me going and I really appreciate all your kind words! :)
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 21, 2009 11:14 pm (Nothing Can Ever Be The Same)
Her parents need to stop being so selfish and think about how their decisions make her feel. I love this, PMS
Author's Response: Hey!!! I completely agree!!! They're so absorbed in appearances that they don't see the damage they've done to Addison. I am so thrilled that you love the story!! Thank you so much for the review and support! It's amazing and keeps me going!
Author's Response: Hey!!! I completely agree!!! They're so absorbed in appearances that they don't see the damage they've done to Addison. I am so thrilled that you love the story!! Thank you so much for the review and support! It's amazing and keeps me going!
MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 20, 2009 02:33 pm (Nothing Can Ever Be The Same)
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hey!!! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!!! I think it was about time that Addison finally let him see who she really is. Thank you so much for your review and the support! It's wonderful!
Author's Response: Hey!!! I'm so glad you liked the chapter!!! I think it was about time that Addison finally let him see who she really is. Thank you so much for your review and the support! It's wonderful!
alimera (Signed) on Mar 08, 2009 08:54 am (Shelby Forest)
Wow, she really doesn't like her adoptive parents, does she? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! You know I love your reviews! :) It's such a complicated line between loving them and hating them in the same breath. She's had so much time to think about everything and she feels completely betrayed by the two most important people in her life. It's more than just not liking them...she feels like she's been broken by two people she's supposed to trust no matter what happens in the world. She doesn't know how to let it go because it's something she's lived with for so long. But I'm really excited to get into this part of the story because Justin's about to catch a glimpse into her world. Thank you girly for always reviewing!!! You're awesome!!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! You know I love your reviews! :) It's such a complicated line between loving them and hating them in the same breath. She's had so much time to think about everything and she feels completely betrayed by the two most important people in her life. It's more than just not liking them...she feels like she's been broken by two people she's supposed to trust no matter what happens in the world. She doesn't know how to let it go because it's something she's lived with for so long. But I'm really excited to get into this part of the story because Justin's about to catch a glimpse into her world. Thank you girly for always reviewing!!! You're awesome!!
alimera (Signed) on Feb 28, 2009 04:30 pm (Football Obsession)
Wow, Addison is just like me lol. Except I'd be wearing a dark blue Philip Rivers jersey! Hmm, Justin and Jessica don't sound like a perfect match to me--update again soon!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! I suppose I could have made JT wear Philip Rivers. But I'm a big LT fan, I think he's amazing even though he was injured this year, next year he'll be great...but I thought JT would be an LT fan! haha...I'm so glad you've stuck with me through this story. Your support has been awesome!!! Justin and Jessica have some things they need to work out but Addison, she's got her own set of problems too. Thanks for always reviewing girl!! Talk to ya later!!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!!! I suppose I could have made JT wear Philip Rivers. But I'm a big LT fan, I think he's amazing even though he was injured this year, next year he'll be great...but I thought JT would be an LT fan! haha...I'm so glad you've stuck with me through this story. Your support has been awesome!!! Justin and Jessica have some things they need to work out but Addison, she's got her own set of problems too. Thanks for always reviewing girl!! Talk to ya later!!
CaliGrlNID (Anonymous) on Feb 26, 2009 09:06 pm (Football Obsession)
I love this story!! Im excited that you will hopefully be updating more often. Great job!!
Author's Response: Hey!! I'm so glad you're liking this story and I've been trying to stay on top of updating. Please keep the reviews coming becuase I love to hear from ya! Thank you for the support!!!
Author's Response: Hey!! I'm so glad you're liking this story and I've been trying to stay on top of updating. Please keep the reviews coming becuase I love to hear from ya! Thank you for the support!!!
alimera (Signed) on Feb 22, 2009 10:17 am (Morning After..)
Okay, I'm so happy you updated! You're getting to be as bad as I am at updating...although I don't think anyone is as bad as me anymore, lol. Loved it, as usual, and I'm waiting patiently for the next update, when we will hopefully find out why Addison is so against her parents!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!! I'm glad I finally got an update out as well!! I do have another one in the works and I'm hoping to keep that streak up!! There's quite a bit of anomosity between Addison and her parents and you'll see a bit of that when she returns to Memphis. Thank you for always sticking by Alimera!! Talk to you later!
Author's Response: Hey Alimera!! I'm glad I finally got an update out as well!! I do have another one in the works and I'm hoping to keep that streak up!! There's quite a bit of anomosity between Addison and her parents and you'll see a bit of that when she returns to Memphis. Thank you for always sticking by Alimera!! Talk to you later!
isis (Anonymous) on Feb 18, 2009 10:21 pm (Morning After..)
i like this story update sooN!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!! I'm glad you like the story and I already have the next update in the works!!! Thank you again!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!! I'm glad you like the story and I already have the next update in the works!!! Thank you again!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 17, 2009 07:44 pm (Morning After..)
Ooohooo!! An update, and it's a doozy too! I loved it, and I love that we can see Addy letting him in, even if she's going to deny it. I can't wait to read more...I hope this inspiration sticks :) I've missed your writing, girly...!!!
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! Thank you girly for the review!! I'm hoping the inspiration sticks as well!! I'm really glad you liked the new update and I've got another one in the works!! Thanks AJ!!!
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! Thank you girly for the review!! I'm hoping the inspiration sticks as well!! I'm really glad you liked the new update and I've got another one in the works!! Thanks AJ!!!
alimera (Signed) on Sep 20, 2008 09:46 am (First piece to the puzzle)
Well, I'm glad she finally let Justin comfort her. Now she just needs to let him know what happened so she doesn't have to deal with it alone! Update again soon Whit.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 17, 2008 07:58 pm (First piece to the puzzle)
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! It's definitely a huge step forward for her to reach out finally. But there's definitely more trust that needs to be built between them before she can fully let him in. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story and thank you for always reviewing!! :)rnrnp.s. I'm glad we were able to catch up! Talk to ya soon girl!
Ugh...that was such an emotional scene, Whit. It was great, though. I'm so glad she's letting him in :) and I'm so proud of Justin for being there for her!!
Ooh..I love it. Now, can you send your muse my way so I can work on my stuff?? I've been in a real rut lately.
Author's Response: Hey AJ!! It's definitely a huge step forward for her to reach out finally. But there's definitely more trust that needs to be built between them before she can fully let him in. I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story and thank you for always reviewing!! :)rnrnp.s. I'm glad we were able to catch up! Talk to ya soon girl!
