Update

Okay so I'm trying to get back into the routine of reading fiction again and I decided to check out the two chapters you have here. So I know what I read in the beginning about Shay and Justin and their situation, but this chapter focused on the past. Are there going to be more chapters in the past to show how they begin their relationship? And why the hell did she disappear for three months? Scared maybe? Hmm, well update whenever you can I'll check back to see whats going on. -Milla

Author's Response: That is the mystery. Haha! Yes, the first chapter let you know what's going to happen, and obviously that Shay has issues. The next couple of chapters will tell you how those issues started in the first place. So it's kind of like I'm flashing back to let everybody know how what happened happened. Thanks for the review! Definitely check back. I should have the next one up soon.

my review is less on the story (p.s. i like it) and more on the set up. If you put space between each paragraph, or when a new person speak, it makes it easier to read. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I was actually going to do that yesterday, but I had to run off to neverland :) haha. Thanks for the comment!

More. Soon ok that's all I got.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment! Definitely will have more soon.