stimble (Signed) on Nov 01, 2007 12:51 pm (
"One Fine Wire")
awwwww,,,she didn't even realize she was raped. I hope justin doesn't take it out on her for going to derek...or i hope she doesn't end up preggy....that'd be bad...lol...good chapter :-)
loohoo (Signed) on Oct 27, 2007 12:34 am (
"One Fine Wire")
Damn. You need to update ASAP. I need to know how Justin's gonna save her and make it all better. I love it! And the bonding between Sadie and Deena was brilliant... I wasn't expecting this kinda twist. But it's all brilliant!
JustinsAngel (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 11:53 pm (
"One Fine Wire")
Update soon
alimera (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 03:45 pm (
"One Fine Wire")
she needs your help more than ever now justin!! update again soon!!
Author's Response: Yes, Justin! Help Sadie! lol. No, but in all truth here...thanks for reviewing, it brightens my day and it makes things a whole lot easier for me to find some inspiration to write again. :)
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 03:44 pm (
"One Fine Wire")
Girl, what are you talking about? This chapter was AMAZING. I feel like a broken record after I read your updates because all I can say is "wow." This chapter was hella deep and I can't believe that Derek did that to her. I am glad that she was able to have Deena there and eventually Justin there too. Great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks, I guess its true that when people think their work is their worst, its actually their best, or did I say it wrong? lol Anyway, thanks for the review cause you've constantly supported me with this story and I have nothing but love for that. :)
smrkks (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 12:19 pm (
"One Fine Wire")
you should update this like right about nowwwwwwwwwwwww. fucking derek. what a stupid scum bag piece of shit. but it was a really great chapterr. nice work!
Author's Response: Ha, can I just say I LOVE your FB! lol. That made me happy. but on another note, I love your 'ready...break', I STILL haven't gone through the whole thing yet thats why I haven't even looked at the sequel but you're an amazing writer. Just though I'd let you know that. And thanks for the review. :)
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 11:05 am (
"One Fine Wire")
Yeay! An update. Awesome job as usual. Poor Sadie, I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Justin needs to beat this guy, geez. I bet he did the same thing to Deena... :( Anyway, awesome job as usual! I can't wait to see what's going to happen. Hope more is to come soon! ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: Thanks Traci! :) Its always a good thing when I hear from you! But yeah more drama ahead...at least thats where I'm aiming.
LaughingAtYou (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 07:57 am (
"One Fine Wire")
I LOVE this story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you love it. Makes my day! :)
alias known (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 07:54 am (
"One Fine Wire")
Oh no. I had a feeling that this is what was going to happen between Derek and Sadie. Poor Sadie. Please oh please don't let Justin be mad at her. I don't know if I can take it.
TERRIFIC update.
Author's Response: Thanks for liking it even though I thought it kind of sucked but I'm taking in what you asked.... :)
free2bjoye (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 06:34 am (
"One Fine Wire")
well im lovin the story so far and can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: thanks for the love! It makes me feel so good that my story is touching people! :)
free2bjoye (Signed) on Oct 25, 2007 06:34 am (
"One Fine Wire")
well im lovin the story so far and can't wait for an update!
stimble (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 10:23 pm (
"Swallowed in the Sea")
awwwwwwwww.........shame on him for doing whatever they did while she was vulnerable. But wow...that's a lot to have happen to a person in a 24 hour period. Hopefully she doesn't end up pregnant. Keep up the goodwork :-)
alias known (Signed) on Oct 05, 2007 12:45 am (
"Anything But Ordinary")
Nooooooooooooo, Sadie! Are you kidding me? Nooooooooooo. I refuse to believe she did ANYTHING with Derek KNOWING that Justin is into her. NO WAY. No.
Can't wait for the next update, girl.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Oct 04, 2007 01:05 am (
"Swallowed in the Sea")
Ok, there is hella craziness going on and I wish that Sadie and Justin would talk to each other and figure their shit out because now look what has happened. But I'm loving it girl so keep it up, thanks!
loohoo (Signed) on Oct 03, 2007 09:49 pm (
"Swallowed in the Sea")
no! no! no! no! NO! SADIE NO! Grrrrr....... how could she!?!? WHY?!?!
thank you for the lovely updates (back to back, hell yeah!). i need more. like desperately. this is one of the few stories that i am honestly addicted to.