DiamondDoss (Signed) on Nov 21, 2015 12:22 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)
Okay so at 12:20 in the morning I am done with this story. Yeah, I sat and read the whole thing, grinning like a freaking idiot..but WOW!! I loved this story. Jailbait is right but geez. And I'm so glad they got back together at the end.



camshazam (Signed) on Aug 23, 2010 12:04 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 1)
This chapter, and I don't know how to give this compliment without it coming across as a backhanded one (not my intention in the least), but this chapter is an absolute standout.  Something about it comes across as quiet and more guarded and simply more...mature.  It's really, really strong and resonating with me so much.  So much so that I've just read it 3 times.  Brava.

Author's Response: I totally understand what you're saying. Seeing them all grown up and finally relating to each other from the idea that they want to be together and they CAN be together. *sigh* Its probably my favorite chapter of the entire story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



camshazam (Signed) on Aug 22, 2010 11:36 pm (Chapter 19)

I like how he swings from cocky and demanding to unsure and fumbling, up to this chapter.  He's standing up and that's a good thing.

Oh, when JT said:“We don’t have to!” he exclaims, his eyes pleading, “We can keep it a secret. We’ve done it this long!”

All I thought was "Um, J, you might want to look up the word secret in the dictionary.  I do not think it means what you think it means."  lol.  Then again, he's only 17.  Most seventeen year olds would crow on every communication device they had at their disposal that they were banging someone six years their senior.

 Just a little bit more to go....



Author's Response: I know he's kinda special when it comes to her but that's what I love about him. He just doesn't get it hahah. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



camshazam (Signed) on Aug 22, 2010 07:14 pm (Chapter 7)
um, illegal much? bwahahaha!!  Poor Sky.  He is a hot young thang... the "old" broad didn't stand a chance.  Can't wait to see how this all plays out in the next, what, 13+ chapters.  tee hee

Author's Response: EEP mah babies! This story is just so close to my heart and I'm really glad you're reading it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



heartsevolve (Signed) on Aug 20, 2010 12:12 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)

Hey, just thought I'd tell you that I was just listening to God Must Have Spent A Little More Time On You and it reminded me of Skylar and Justin and I basically feel like their relationship is real life, it's ridiculous.

 

SO, IN SHORT, YOU'RE SO GOOD AT WHAT YOU DO. I AM DEAD. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much. This story is so close to my heart and I'm so glad that you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



meggie (Signed) on Jul 03, 2009 10:29 pm (Chapter 1)
omg - heather - light of my fictional life (that's your new nickname btw) i just realized that i never left you a comment on my favorite fictional couple ever!! i must have lost my damn mind or something *smacks self*  i honest to god re-read this pretty much every chance i get because it makes my life (that i have no life apparently).  i was practically in tears as  sky go on the elevator and he mouthed 'i love you' RIP MY HEART OUT WHY DON'T YOU?!  i know you've got more plans for these two and as much as i love UTTK (charlie and justin make me almost as happy as sky and justin) i cant wait for that to wrap up so we can more justin and sky! you are too amazing for words

Author's Response: HAHAHA I have a new nickname YAAAAAAAAAY!!!! Thanks for taking the time to come back and review! That means so much that you reread. Seriously Skystin is my absolute fave and I'm really glad you enjoy them as much as I do! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ram4 (Signed) on Jun 03, 2009 11:40 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)

GAH! BEST.ENDING.EVER!!!!! Seriously! It was so so so wonderful! I knew I was going to do this but I've changed my mind. That last chapter AND this chapter are my favourite chapters ever. Hehe!

Thank you so much for writing this! You're truly an amazing writer, I hope you know that!

I can't wait to read the extra short stories! I'd cry if that was the final final end of Skystin! hahaha



Author's Response: Oh my gosh I can't believe it took me this long to reply to this review!!! It must have got lost in the shuffle of emails or something I'm so sorry!!! But YAY I'm glad you liked the ending and thank you so much. I'm glad you not only like the story but the writing as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ram4 (Signed) on Jun 03, 2009 10:33 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 1)

OMG!!!

So I know I still have part 2 to read but I just have to get this out.

First of all after reading UTTK and thinking it was one of the best stories I've ever read I decided to check out this famous story that everyone always raves about. So I've been reading it slowly over the past few weeks and I love it. Love it, love it, love it. but it wasn't until this chapter that I realised how wonderful this story really is!

I don't know what happened but when she was like "I started working at the Met five years ago" my eyes started watering and then when she said it had been ten years I started bawling. The thought of them being apart for ten years broke my heart! I'm still crying! haha. Ten years!! Golly gosh!

I think this chapter will be my favourite chapter ever! (until you outdo it at the end of UTTK, which I just know you will! haha) It was just so well written and gah! the way you wrote Justin was just so awesome - The way he was all grown up and mature exactly the way the real Justin is now but you could still see the 17yr old Justin in him! GAH! It was just perfect.

The hot chocolate had me bawling as well haha and I absolutely loved the way it could all so easily be a true story haha! like how you fit their summer in just before Justin and Britney went out and how you made Gone be about her which is just PERFECT!! lol

Ok so this review is turning into a novel and I really need to read the next bit!I just needed to get all this out! Haha



Author's Response: GUH YAY!!! Seriously ALWL is my baby. Like going back through and comparing it to UTTK the writing is a bit shotty but it also shows my growth which is something that is so important to see you know. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this and the fact that it moved you to tears seriously kind of made my day. Thank you so much for reading and reveiwing!!!



Becca Lynn (Signed) on Nov 22, 2008 08:11 pm (Chapter 1)
This was the second story I ever read on this site and I love it!!!! I finished it a long time ago, but I just never left a review. I think I reread this three times, I just can't stop reading it. What's funny is every time I read it, I'm surprised. Like I don't remember what happens. lol anyways, nice story you should write a sequel of something. They should have a nice little family!! AWWWW.... :D 

Author's Response: Wow thanks! I love hearing that you're rereading! I don't think I'll ever do a full sequel but I have two or three shorts on here that are companions to this. They're called Little Moments, Tricks and Treats, and I'll Be Waiting, which I just started. So check those out if you have time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 10:16 pm (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)

i dont know why i didnt leave feedback right away.... maybe i was in some state of denial that it was all over? which sucks because i really, really, really, really liked this story. justin .... damn... he just pulled at my heart strings, i was beginning to think the knot in my throat was like permanent. and i just loved sky's inner battle, something easy for us all to relate to, slipping into her shoes was so easy and it was such a sweet moment when she finally let herself go and admitted she loved him to. god that was such a bittersweet moment. i was beginning to plot your death if you were going to leave it at that.

your one lucky bish for fast fowarding it 10 yrs and giving them the ending they deserve. i completely feel in love with their romance. so happy i read this, but it was over too soon... heck it could've last 50 chapters and i'd still say it was too soon. :)



Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAY Skystin is seriously so close to my heart and I'm so invested in them as characters and hearing that you're invested in them too is such an amazing thing as a writer. And you KNOW I couldn't just leave them apart. I love them too much to do that! And really I don't think it will ever be over for them lol I don't think I'll ever stop writing them. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 30, 2008 01:38 pm (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)
ohmygosh heather. i have been meaning to read this for soooo long. when you first started it i meant to, then you finished it along with the continuation and i was like "come on brittney! read it!" then i saw those jtpc cards and virgin!jt and i was like, "must. go. read. story. NOW!" haha. so i got to it a few days ago, and girl...this was amazing. i can't even describe how much i love it. it was so hard to read at times cause there was so much inner conflict sky was going through and i hated to see justin so hopeful, giving, loving, and willing only to be crushed, but then come back stronger than before. it was hard, but i loved it at the same time cause you made it real. it all just got to me. then the ending. tiny yelling at her, justin fighting for her to tell him she loved him, then when he told her to let him be a man...gosh! talk about heart wrenching! he taught her so much. but the epilogue was so wonderful. it just tied it all up so well and i love that is was 10 years later. i think that leather jacket dude was her old prof haha. i don't know, but that's who i thought of...well after i thought it was justin at first. haha. but yeah...i mean i don't know if i've told you, but your little vizzies are my favorites. i've read them all so many times cause i love your writing and i'm a perv. haha. but this story, you could really see how talented you are. you wrote it so well and real and gah. i have nothing but great things to say about it. i'm excited to read the little continuation of this that you've completed. skystin will always be one of my favorite couples now. haha. man, i prob sound crazy, but yeah...i loved this so much. amazing job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: Wow what a great review!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. Its my baby and seriously I'll probably never stop writing Skystin or if I do I'll never stop thinking about them. I'm glad they touched you as much as they touched me. Thanks for taking the time to read and review!!!



strwberifields (Signed) on May 28, 2008 08:00 pm (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)
Absolutely loved this story!

Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it!!! Skystin is really close to my heart *cuddles them* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 25, 2008 09:01 pm (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)

It took me a while to actually get through all the chapters.  I had to stop when her professor walked in on them, I hated to see it end badly, lol.

But I am so glad I finished it and I think you did an incredible job with this whole story.  It was one of the better reads I've had in a while :) 

 



Author's Response: Awwwww thanks for coming back and finishing!!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



mscomplex (Signed) on Apr 17, 2008 12:23 am (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)
soo jtpc lurker here... and I just wanna say I freakin LOVED this. I started reading when you first started writing it but school took over my life... I JUST finished a few minutes ago. lalalaloveee it!

Author's Response: YAY A JTPCER!!!!!! I'm glad you loved it and thanks for coming out and reviewing!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 09:59 pm (Chapter 20 - Epilogue pt 2)
Awwwwwwwwwwwww. What a gread ending. Awesome job as usual, the story was so different and definitly brought back the weeb love. Anyway, you're sucha great writer and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Until the next one :) -TTYL! -Traci

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me till the end! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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