lykeoilnwater (Signed) on Jan 20, 2009 04:28 am (
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WOOOW. That was the HOTTEST thing I've read in a really long time. I loved the tension. Amazing =)
SJane (Signed) on Sep 20, 2008 08:32 pm (
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i'm really enjoying this these two are like fire balls clashing together but you can tell they still have soft spots for each other
Boo_Berry_Crunch (Signed) on Jan 05, 2008 01:42 pm (
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awww...they seem right for each other
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Nov 17, 2007 12:21 pm (
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Hm. Interesting. LoL. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen. Bri and Justin have complicated relationship, and I can't wait for you to expand on that. Great job as usual, I'm anxious to see what's gonna happen. :) Awesome job. -Traci
Marissa (Signed) on Nov 15, 2007 12:37 pm (
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Jess, it's Rissa from JTPC! OMG, girl I love this story so far! There's more to come right???
Author's Response: Rissa! Eep, I'm glad you're reading and you liked it girl! Yes, there is more to come, I promise. :P
sarah1988 (Signed) on Nov 15, 2007 08:23 am (
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they'd make such a cute couple always having these cute fights about senseless stuff...haha. i hope this one is going to be a loooong story update soon!!!!
Author's Response: lol thanks for the review girl! yeah they do fight about stupid stuff. :P i'm not sure how long it's gonna be, not too long, but it's gonna have more parts, don't worry! :P
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Nov 14, 2007 03:27 pm (
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that was hot and amazing. i have a feeling sex will not be the answer to the problems these two are facing. great work!
Author's Response: lol thank you! your reviews are always so sweet, i love it! :P
alimera (Signed) on Nov 14, 2007 12:14 pm (
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Oh no, why did she leave? Justin's not going to be thrilled when he finds out...update again soon!
Author's Response: Hehe hehe. Yeah, Justin's gonna be a little clueless in the next one, that's for sure. I'll try to work on updating soon! :P Thanks for the review =)
Hollie (Signed) on Nov 14, 2007 11:43 am (
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Okay, so I was only half right. They didn;t screw each other's brain out in the locker room, just in a bedroom :lol
Author's Response: LOL. You know me Hollie...buwhahaha. :P Thanks for reading girl! You know I love your shit, so update ! MWUAH!
SexualCoco (Signed) on Nov 14, 2007 12:11 am (
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I had sex with Justin...*sigh* What was I thinking? Hell, at least it was good sex! Haha, I'm just kidding. I liked how everything built up in this chapter and then went so crazy and fast afterward. Good job love, can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: LMAO, I love how you refer to Breezy as "I" now B. Man, I miss your bitch ass! I keep missing your im's. Grr. I'm glad you liked this chapter, I was kinda worried it sucked. LOL.
Jenn x0 (Signed) on Nov 13, 2007 10:52 pm (
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Jess! My little hoe! ROUGH SEX! EEp! I loved it!
Author's Response: LOL, Jenn...as you know, my little slut, I'm very happy you liked it! :P bwuahah
ChristineLP (Signed) on Nov 13, 2007 09:58 pm (
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OH MY GOD HE'S STILL NOT WITH CHRISTINE?! WHEN IS HE GONNA WAKE UP AND SMELL THE COFFEE! CHRISTINE > BREEZY. Listen to the old bitchy lady Justin! Walk into the liiiiiiight
Jew Jew I kinda sorta maybe almost love you even though you do certain things on couches that we really shouldn't discuss in public, and even though you are really bad at playing the this or that game. Oh yeah and of course I loved the chapter *hugs* I think you should incorporate Maxwell into this story.. Just a thought
Author's Response: lmao- what do you mean I play this and that! Psssh and STINE, get over it Breezy is way better than you! buwahahha. I'm sorry dear, that's just the way it is. Thank you for editing this by the way. Smooches a million to you! :P
Jenn x0 (Signed) on Nov 11, 2007 04:24 pm (
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JESS!! I didn't know you posted this! Sorry i'm so late but I love it! And nobody better hate on Jenn! She is a good person.. She just made a big NO-NO that's all. LOL.
justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2007 02:35 pm (
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SIGH...justin's such a loser, but he's so cute. i hope bri opens up to him (literally HAHAHA...oh i crack myself up...ahem) soon because i think we all know that the poor girl still wants him. and although i'm still MAD that JOKE'S won't be updated in the near future, i'm thinking that this MIGHT be able to take my mind off it...update soon!!!
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Nov 06, 2007 12:42 am (
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Okay, I feel bad for Justin but I know I shouldn't. LoL. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen though, it's a good start. Nice job :) -Traci
Author's Response: Lol, no you shouldn't feel bad for him! But it's ok...I kinda do too, I suppose. :P Thanks for the review hun! =)