i like where this is going.. great job please update....

Author's Response: Thanks hon!

Well, I feel hopeful and defeated, which is sometimes how unrequited love makes you feel--but either way, I like this so far; it's different and sounds like it's gonna be sweet...update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you honey!! You should totally repay me by writing something...

let's have a serious talk about this. this was like a little taste of something that you never knew you liked but just dicovered its your new favorite. i'll keep the whining to a minimum about how this is just a one chapter thing. i don't want to mess with brilliance. but, despite the feeling i get that there should definately be more of this.....the simplicity seriously blew me away. really fresh and raw and loved it. not that i could not love anything you put there, but yeah.

Author's Response: It's not a one chapter thing hon... well, it is and it isn't. The idea is it's one of a lot of little baby stories that add up to one bigger story. So this little story is finished, but the tale isn't. That makes little to no sense, but here's hoping you get me *lol*