Comments For Diary of the... Unrequited
????? (Anonymous) on Apr 12, 2015 03:11 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
What the fuck? This makes no sense. Whose diary is it??
Author's Response: It's alright, you can swear under your own name and I won't take offence lol. There are two major bits of info about the diary owner in this piece, one more obvious than the other. The rest will become clearer through the series - it was purposely designed as a slow reveal.
Author's Response: It's alright, you can swear under your own name and I won't take offence lol. There are two major bits of info about the diary owner in this piece, one more obvious than the other. The rest will become clearer through the series - it was purposely designed as a slow reveal.
westernway (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 12:55 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
How have I missed this? Honestly have I been out of the loop this long? I really, really like this idea. I adore the fact that you have a sound tech and I'm even happier that she has the same music obsession as I do. Hooray for Big Macca, Ringo, and Freddie. God...have I told you lately that I adore you Hols? Thank you.
Author's Response: Umm... he does have the same music taste as you, it's true. *looks shifty*. Anyway, you have been out of the loop for FAR too long and I think you need to remedy that by writing me lots of updates, mmkay?
Author's Response: Umm... he does have the same music taste as you, it's true. *looks shifty*. Anyway, you have been out of the loop for FAR too long and I think you need to remedy that by writing me lots of updates, mmkay?
jaye2kaye (Signed) on Dec 20, 2007 06:35 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
on my second read for some understanding, i've decided i am not only slow but very stupid. my mind completely blanked on the last few, so they didn't register until now
Author's Response: I don't think anybody's slow or stupid, I just think that seeing as it was the only pronoun in the entire thing that gave any hint a lot of people just glanced over it. Which was exactly what my evil self was hoping for *lol*
Author's Response: I don't think anybody's slow or stupid, I just think that seeing as it was the only pronoun in the entire thing that gave any hint a lot of people just glanced over it. Which was exactly what my evil self was hoping for *lol*
jaye2kaye (Signed) on Dec 20, 2007 06:32 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
maybe i'm just slow as hell but i don't quite understand what's going on. is the narrator a guy or a girl? at some points they sound like a girl, at others it sounds like a guy. all in all, it was...new, albeit confusing but still...interesting.
Author's Response: Excellent. Somebody's confused which was exactly the plan!!!
Author's Response: Excellent. Somebody's confused which was exactly the plan!!!
stimble (Signed) on Dec 04, 2007 12:20 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
i like it. And good idea to keep it a short story. It's to the point and just great. It'd be a good long story and i'd totally read it but it does well as short. :-)
Author's Response: Ugh. I don't have the strength in me for another long story right now *lol*
Author's Response: Ugh. I don't have the strength in me for another long story right now *lol*
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 09:47 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
SO thought I read that wrong so I checked the reviews... You really like screwing with people's heads. Good lord, woman *lol*
Author's Response: Moi? Moi? I have no idea what you could be referring to... except that I do.
Author's Response: Moi? Moi? I have no idea what you could be referring to... except that I do.
smrkks (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 01:14 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
wowwww hollie that was such a sneaky move right there. but i loved it nonetheless. nothing like a little shocker to start the day offf.
Author's Response: I live to be sneaky. I'm very duplicitous *lol*
Author's Response: I live to be sneaky. I'm very duplicitous *lol*
d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 11:20 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Ok I'm loving this, but my eyes grew wide at the last line or so. What an interesting spin. OMG, ok, I won't jump to conclusions. Lol Can't wait to read the next installment. I love different. Greatness. :)
Author's Response: Thanks hon - glad it had the desired effect!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hon - glad it had the desired effect!!!
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 07:07 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Author's Response: It appears that a good few people weren't reading as close as you and entirely missed it *lol* Big relief you did, actually, I was thinking nobody had!!
well hey...way to drop that bomb. If I weren't reading carefully, I probably would have missed that little pronoun gem...sheesh...
I loved it :) in fact, I think adding that little twist at the end makes it a whole hell of a lot more interesting :)
Author's Response: It appears that a good few people weren't reading as close as you and entirely missed it *lol* Big relief you did, actually, I was thinking nobody had!!
lyss2118 (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 01:49 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Author's Response: :o)
interesting...update soon!
Author's Response: :o)
CutiePie07 (Signed) on Dec 03, 2007 12:26 am (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Author's Response: Thanks hon!
I really like this, please update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks hon!
(Anonymous) on Dec 02, 2007 11:56 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Well this is different, but I love it. Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, that was what I was hoping for :o)
Author's Response: Glad to hear it, that was what I was hoping for :o)
god gave me style (Signed) on Dec 02, 2007 08:55 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
i like her already, lol. she sounds a lot like me, mean and sarcastic, lol. great start hollie, can't wait for more.
Author's Response: She sounds a lot like you, does she? You're not mean!! Amongst other things 'she' is not...
Author's Response: She sounds a lot like you, does she? You're not mean!! Amongst other things 'she' is not...
Fionnuala (Signed) on Dec 02, 2007 07:54 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Dun DUN DUN! I'm excited. Who doesn't love a little unrequited love? heh heh
Author's Response: Unrequited love is fun. Unless you're actually in it.
Author's Response: Unrequited love is fun. Unless you're actually in it.
ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Dec 02, 2007 06:19 pm (Diary of the... Unrequited)
Hollie this is SO awesome. I love this angle of things. You're are amazing *bows*
Author's Response: *smooch* I love you. You're always insanely nice about me *lol*
Author's Response: *smooch* I love you. You're always insanely nice about me *lol*