classic psych out. should I call you M. Night Shymalan?
scary though.
Author's Response: lol I wanted it that way. But I'm not a M. Night S. fan at all. lol. thanks. :)
Not gonna lie, the beginning scared the bejesus out of me! When i got to the end, I cracked up! This was well done!
and seriously, rough sex with JT? COUNT ME IN! aahahaha <3
Author's Response: OMG! I know. lol. this one was weird and It just randomly came to me some time back so had to write it. Glad you liked it. lol. And thanks for letting me know. Rough!J is hot! lol :)
LOL
that was wierd but really well written LOL
you totally had me going at the beginning and the second part hit me like a box of rocks
Yea
Author's Response: lol yeah...I was def going for something strange and different. LOL...hehehe. Glad it had the effect I intended and thanks a lot for letting me kno. :)
You should really ad more to this story. Justin as a murdeous maniac who likes to rape & torture young girls is a good idea!!
Author's Response: Hmmm, don't tempt me. I actually have a story concept I'm developing along those lines, however, I don't want to get too much into it considering I have so many other stories to finish. I'm thinking if I can knock off a few of the stuff I'm working on, then I'll certainly work on that concept because I've been thinking about it. There are a few stories on the archive that protray Justin like that aren't there? I've been behind on my reading. lol. But thanks for the suggestion, I'm taking it into consideration. It's not something I'm used to writing so it would certainly be a challenge. :)
Author's Response: hey thanks for much for the review. Hmmm....I might consider that. I was thinking of him not being so kind in my next story but it will have to wait till I finish updating my previous stories.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it. It was just a short story so It's done. But I'm glad you liked it. :-D