OMG that was hot..No sex really even happened and it was hot. I think my lap top might catch fire when I finally get to read a sex scene between these two! lol

Where did Miranda go? She doesn't have someone on the side to does she? That would be an interesting twist..

 You can clearly see that Bryne is stepping outside the box that she had been in with Miranda..Not just sex with a MAN but sex with someone ELSE..Someone that she is falling for. But yet again I ask....WHAT IS JUSTIN GOING TO THINK OF THE FACT SHE HAS A GIRLFRIEND?!

Fantastic update as ALWAYS!

Dani

Woop I finally caught up and just damn girl!!! Justin and Bryne are two complex individuals god damn. One time I hate em, the next I love em esp when they can't deny each other. Ok, so firtly, I say Justin needs to stop this messing with all these women if he wants a real shot at Bry and second, she's confused because since Miranda is all she's ever known, these feelings for Justin are new to her since he's a guy but really, she's too uptight. I know it's strictly business...but all work and no play makes bry a dull girl. hehe. I just feel plain out sorry for belinda...she's...gonna get her heart broken. But anyway, I love this girl! I can't wait for an update. We need all these obstacles out of the way...

I don't know, let JC hook up with Miranda and Cam take a hike and Belinda find some other guy so Justin and Bry can be together. Those two are too hot together. We need some more make out scene or more? even though Justin is somewhat of an asshole in this, he's still cute for trying to get on Bry's good side like this...hehe. Ok I'm going to stop now. Lol Update asap! 

Ok...7 martinis in that short amount of time would knock anyone on their ass, let alone someone who doesn't usually drink! lol

I'm thinking that when Miranda finds out..she's gonna' demand to know what's going on. JC's gotta be onto something too. He knows that Justin was upset..and has to know that unusual for him.

 BTW..I'm going to have to go back and read if Justin had a planned trip to LA..or did he run away? WHY did he go??!!

Thank you for your kind words in the last review response. You rock too! I can't get enough of your writing girl!

Dani

I'm so glad you updated. I was thinking I would have to way days and days lol

I really like this story a lot for several reasons. The main characters are complex which makes it easy to relate to them because readers are complex and to read about characters who make decisions and say the things they do because of a variety of experiences coupled with their personality, fears, ect ect is great.

I thought that I couldn't see Justin and Bryne together with her being a lesbian, but then we find out how her relationship with Miranda came about to be. Sounds like Bryne was sheltered growing up and didn't get to experience much of life to get to know herself. I do feel like Miranda may have preyed on her innocence and need to have someone when she was feeling alone. Your characters aren't one dimensional though, so there could be a deeper reason for Miranda manipulating the situation the way she did.

As for Justin, I can see why he's acted the way he has with women. He's just plain scared. And maybe it's because he had his heart broken before. But he's clearly trying to fill a void that can't be filled with meaningless women. It's like he has to have more than one for the time that any of them decide to pack their things and leave. He doesn't care because his feelings never got deep for any of the women in his life until he met Bryne. He doesn't know how to deal with it, and kissing her was the catalyst for that flood of raw emtion to finally come out on both sides, for him and Bryne.

In other words, I can't wait for more!

THAT was intense..and I'm just floored. I'm finally seeing some real romance between them and I love it! He wants all of her!! Great chapter.

So..what are our obstacles? Brynes is a lesbian with a serious girlfirend..Justin has a serious girlfirend. Justin has a lover who happens to be Bryne's best friend. Am I missing anything? lol Guess this is a chance to prove that love conquers all! Right?

Dani