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sarah1988 (Signed) on May 22, 2009 10:10 am (Chapter 23b)

AH! you HAVE to update you can't just leave me with that MASSIVE cliffhanger for 2 months! are you crazy?! lol

i love this story so much... 




MochaB (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 11:49 am (Chapter 22)
oh.my.gosh. i'm so pissed at bryne. grow some balls! haha. seriously! she's wrong all the way around. i'm rooting for justin, but i would have a very hard time even wanting her after this. right now, i want him to not want her! it's bad enough she was dating a woman while she was having sex with him, but then she goes and sleeps with his friend?!?! once again, the alcohol was there. maybe she needs therapy. i'm pissed at jc too for even taking advantage of the situation. i mean if she was really feeling all that guilt and didn't want that she could have said no. i don't see an excuse. ugh! update soon please.



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 15, 2008 12:36 am (Chapter 22)

I have come to the realization that you are diabolical! lol hahahahaha I love you so much right now! MMWHHAA

You sure through a wrench into this story..didn't ya?! Honestly...from this point on, I'm going to hang on and enjoy the ride. I've been rooting for Justin all along...but JC!

Well...let's see..Justin as much as I THINK he does love Bryne..he's STILL so uncertain on how to deal with the media..her past relationship with a woman. But JC...He knows the situation, and he seems to almost be in love with her despite it all.

Do I think them having sex right now was smart? Noooo..of course not. Everything is too screwed up for Bryne right now. BUT..maybe JC..eventually, if Bryne can ever let go of Justin, would be good for her.

I LOVE the twist and turns of this story. You remind people to never get comfortable, cause' anything can happen in! :D 




atina23 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2008 10:43 pm (Chapter 22)
Loved this chapter. Bryne is to confused to pick anyone.   Throwing JC into the mix just stired up more drama.  Don't know who to root for.  Update soon.



calinewgirl (Signed) on Jul 14, 2008 08:50 pm (Chapter 22)

What????????!!!!!! I don't even believe it! You can't be serious. I seriously don't know how you're going to realistically get Justin and Bryne together now. No way Justin's gonna just forgive them both when he can't even get past her and Miranda. In his head, he's always gonna vividly see JC banging his girl/JC's penis inside his girl anytime he looks at either of them.

I'm sorry, but I'm officially not feeling this story anymore.




JoJo (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2008 06:53 pm (Chapter 22)
OMG...Bryne just dug herself into a really deep hole!! This is gonna be a huge mess...so much drama. I love it!! can't wait for the next one!



sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2008 05:48 pm (Chapter 22)

JC is a fucking bastard, he knows how she feels about justin and justin about her! what an asshole!! i really hate him in this story! after all what justin did for him he's a friend who goes after his "crush". no no no...i hate JC...he's stupid. yep! 




MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 14, 2008 05:04 pm (Chapter 22)
SMH. Please update soon.



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 07, 2008 11:21 pm (Chapter 21)
i don't think i've ever reviewed this story, but i must let you know how much i absolutely love it. it's kept me pulled in since i started reading it and it continues to do so with each update. this one was definitely no different. my gosh...wow. i can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please. :o)



atina23 (Signed) on Jul 02, 2008 04:39 pm (Chapter 21)
OMG This just got very complicated.  Really interesting twist in the story.  Does this girl even know what love is? Loves Miranda and Justin but is still following JC. Maybe she doen't love either and needs to work stuf out before she even considers what JC feels for her.



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:39 pm (Chapter 21)

Oh Lord we officially have a mess...not that it wasn't messy before. If JC sleeps with her, while she's this confused and drunk...then he's a huge asshole!

I know the way she slept with Justin behind her girlfriend and bestfriends back..was shady. I still feel bad for her! She belongs with Justin! So that's who I'm rooting for :D

Thanks for this latest update!




Amber (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:20 pm (Chapter 21)

I love this story...

And if Bryne does anything more with JC I am so through with her...lol Harsh, but oh well. My impression of Bryne..oh, I'm kissing JC, am I making things more complicated? UH, hell yeah you are. That's an asinine question to even ask. DUH you're creating more of a mess. You haven't even fixed the two messes you're already in. Plus the media is hounding you over Justin. If they catch wind that you're with JC, the shit is going to hit the roof. I know she's not a ho, but that's the picture that's being painted on the outside. Bryne...get your shit together before you lose the one thing you know in your heart that you want.

Ok..I'm better now. lol Great story!




MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 06:15 pm (Chapter 21)
Please, Jesus, don't let her have sex with JC. God, no. Please update soon.



sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 01, 2008 03:32 pm (Chapter 21)

i don't like JC here...i mean he KNOWS about justin's feelings (he has to know he knows justin like forever) plus he's taking advantage of bryne's misery, which he 100% knows about. sooo...what the hell does he want?

and what is she thinking?!?! no no, she's gonna

destroy the friendship of justin and JC. 

not good, not good at all... oi oi oi

i love the way you write and bring another chapter pretty soon please.

thanks for continuing this. =)  




DeterminedNot2Fall (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2008 12:23 pm (Chapter 20)

Damn....so B is doing to him like to did to others, making him feel like a cheap piece of sex from the constant revolving door.

 

It's hard to feel sorry for him now that he's fallen for the one person he probably shouldn't have and at one point couldn't...and in some way still can't. Karma has long term memory and Justin never cared soooooooo DEAL honey!

 

The only difference is perhaps that he went in there blind sighted as to what she really was and though we could speculate that many girls perhaps got with him not knowing who he was really was a good deal many did and I think that slight difference does count lol

 

For some reason I always get the impression that Bryne having a female lover gets under his saddle like no other...the comparsions and competition between he and another guy would be obvious and most likely render him the winner but a woman...that's another ball game.

 

*Runs to play catch up with the rest of story* 






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