Comments For Strictly Business
watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Jan 11, 2008 04:05 pm (Chapter 1)
I ment to comment earlier, but my sidekick didn't allow me too... I really like this story! Very interesting...
However, I REALLY liked the other story you started, where Bryne was a model and she and Justin were shooting the CMAR video. I have been without a computer for a few days so I was reading it on my sidekick, and as I walked into Walgreens when I was reading, CMAR was playing in the story which I thought was hysterical. Maybe you can keep that story going but just use different names?
Anyway, keep up the good writing!
However, I REALLY liked the other story you started, where Bryne was a model and she and Justin were shooting the CMAR video. I have been without a computer for a few days so I was reading it on my sidekick, and as I walked into Walgreens when I was reading, CMAR was playing in the story which I thought was hysterical. Maybe you can keep that story going but just use different names?
Anyway, keep up the good writing!
DaniD (Signed) on Jan 11, 2008 01:05 pm (Chapter 4)
Well...that was quick! lol No complaining from me.
I can't WAIT to see what happens when Justin realizes that Bryne is a lesbian! What effect will that have on his attraction to her?
Keep up the great work girl!
DaniD (Signed) on Jan 11, 2008 10:02 am (Chapter 3)
Author's Response: YEAH!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited, I'm glad you like it..i can't wait to see where it goes to..thanks!
This is so original...I LOVE IT! I really enjoy your writing style. Can't wait to see how this is going to play out.
I'll be watching for more updates ;)
Author's Response: YEAH!!!!!!!!! I'm so excited, I'm glad you like it..i can't wait to see where it goes to..thanks!
