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sarah1988 (Signed) on Jun 09, 2008 08:19 am (Chapter 20)
aww fuck i dont like miranda...



MochaB (Signed) on Jun 09, 2008 02:57 am (Chapter 20)

oh my goooosh. ugh! i'm so frustrated. i'm so mad at bryne. she needs to freakin' speak! my gosh! seriously...stop groping at each other and talk. she needs to tell him how she feels because the more they just keep going from saying nothing to having sex, it's not going to fix anything (as that was shown in this chapter) and whatever they had will be over because of that. yeah that paps are terrible and all that, but i mean yall can't even talk to each other? tell each other how yall feel about each other? that will be the breaking point. justin has already told her he can't stop loving her, but byrne...she needs to choose justin and end her relationship with Miranda once and for all. you can only cry for so long before you have to take some action. ugh. man...you got me going with this story girl. haha. update soon please! :o) 




d_simplicity (Signed) on Jun 09, 2008 01:17 am (Chapter 20)
Dang, both Bryne and Justin need some sense smacked into they asses. They both tripping. Bryne needs to make up her mind and Justin needs to fight for his woman and stop being a drama king. hehehe. They need to talk. Communication is key. Besides, they know they want each other so just say fuck everybody else who is trying to hold them down and be together. I know it's not that easy, but they're not even trying pshhh....hahaha Love it. Update soon.



DaniD (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 11:20 pm (Chapter 20)

COMMUNICATION FOR HELLS SAKE! Come on Bryne..TELL him how you feel! She's gonna' lose it all..

Happy to see another great update :D




MissTasha (Signed) on Jun 08, 2008 08:58 pm (Chapter 20)
Well, what the fuck is he doing? What's he trying to pull exactly? I know he's mad but he needs to check himself a little. Please update soon.



sarah1988 (Signed) on Jun 03, 2008 04:35 pm (Chapter 19b)
continue pls. great story...damn i wanna know what happens next...



DaniD (Signed) on May 23, 2008 10:02 pm (Chapter 19b)
OMG..Now JC is in the mix!? What the hell?? She does NOT need anymore love interest here.

I do imagine that men are now on her radar..probably for the first time in her life. Looking is fine..but no touching Bryne!

Happy to see an update..and it was a really great one!



calinewgirl (Signed) on May 23, 2008 05:20 pm (Chapter 19b)
Ummm all I have to say is: JC needs to stop! Like yesterday. Is he smoking that good shit? He does know that Justin's hitting that, right? I mean, it is a clear fact to him, correct? Tsk, tsk, tsk. I smell a major fight here when Justin starts to take notice of JC taking notice of his girl. Bryne needs to hurry up and tell JC, "Nigga, you late as fuck. Here's your consolation prize though." and hand him Belinda's crazy ass lol. Nothing good can come of this. Nothing lol.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Apr 12, 2008 12:18 am (Chapter 19)

So this is like a love circle with no defined edges since people just get thrown into the mix. JC now too? Damn. And poor Justin, I hope no one goes and does anything stupid.

I mean we have Belinda and Cameron in Justin's butt, but Justin wants Bryne and she wants him but has Miranda and Miranda loves her but now JC is thrown in the mix and it's just chaos. Who's next? And what next? lol HAHAHAH Damn I love this...lol. I no longer feel bad for Bryne. She has the power to end this because her heart has already made up it's mind. She and Justin just need to agree to battle the obstacles together. Update soon.




DaniD (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 10:04 pm (Chapter 19)

For the love of.....What!? JC's got the hots for Bryne now? or was that just him trying to cheer her up? Either way..she is in deep poopoo right now. I couldn't imagine being labeled like that in every magazine.
Questions abound in my head...What about Miranda? Where does their relationship stand now?

Where do Justin and Bryne stand now? She thinks he's hiding alot of pain...will he grow to resent her? Can't wait for more!




justinaham (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 09:27 pm (Chapter 19)
Damn don't make me hate JC



Marissa (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 02:58 pm (Chapter 19)
Uh oh! This isn't a love triangle anymore...it's turning into a love octogon or something! Great job, can't wait to read more!



KLW (Signed) on Apr 11, 2008 02:06 pm (Chapter 1)
And the triangle gets bigger or so it seems. Keep up the good work.



DaniD (Signed) on Apr 10, 2008 12:02 pm (Chapter 18)

Oh...we love you too hon!

 This chapter was really phenomonal..Finally everything is out in the open to EVERYONE..and they still can't tear themselves away from one another.

 The tale is set..the secrets are revealed..now are you going to let true love prevail? I guess you have two roads this can go..and after all the angst I so want some happiness for both Justin and Bryne.
Thanks for yet another wonderful chapter..I can't wait to see what happens next. :)




justinaham (Signed) on Apr 09, 2008 09:57 pm (Chapter 18)
DAMN ...*fans self off* Forget the paps Bee , you and Justin belong together





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