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justinaham (Signed) on Mar 03, 2008 12:35 pm (Chapter 15)
DUMP MIRANDA.... I can't wait for Justin to find out about Miranda , I have a feeling Belinda will spill the beans.



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:29 pm (Chapter 14)

Oh yeah that's a good wow. lol

So hot it left me speechless, and you know I'm a long winded reviewer.

I can't imagine what going to happen between them now that they've made love. What about their significant others? Belinda? OMG..*fanning myself* It's alot to take in.. :0

Dani




LaLa (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:17 pm (Chapter 14)
*Jaw drops* More please. I have a feeling things are gonna get difficult.



ashmama (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 02:52 pm (Chapter 14)

Wow.

 

.................can....can..someone tell me the number for 911?




calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 02:49 pm (Chapter 14)

Whoa Nelly!!!! ::fans herself::

No but seriously ... holy shit!




justinaham (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:44 pm (Chapter 14)
Damn....finally, that was HOT. I can't wait for the morning after.



Amber (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:36 pm (Chapter 14)

Holy...that was the most intense love scene. Had me sitting on pins and needles! lol

I am in love with Bryne & Justin. lol But really. I wonder what happened between her and Miranda to have her coming over there not even a hour after she first got home that night. I need to know!

I'm almost relieved that it finally happened for them, but at the same time, it's one of those...the shit has just gotten started and there's a long way to go things. There's Belinda to deal with and Cameron needs to be ditched which isn't really a problem. The real kink is going to be with Belinda.

That won't be easy, but at the same time, I feel like Belinda has known all a long that he didn't love her, and hadn't ever felt that way. Justin was never hers to begin with, but that doesn't make it feel any less shitty that he's in love with one of your friends who was supposed to be a lesbian. But after knowing how Bryne grew up and what happened to her, you start to understand all that, why she didn't want to have anything to do with men. It's understandable, but I could so see Belinda using that and lashing out to try and sabatago and make them hurt the way she's going to be hurting. I think Belinda has loved him and had been able to hide the fact from him until now when she's been getting all clingly and overbearing.

Wow...I cannot wait for more!




MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:25 pm (Chapter 14)
WOW!! 0_0



Marissa (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:14 pm (Chapter 14)
Damn, that was intense. Great job!



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 12:53 pm (Chapter 14)

Wow is right.

 Dani



Author's Response: is that a good wow? lol



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 03:00 am (Chapter 13b)

Well..I have such a better insight into Bryne now that I know about Uncle Benji. Why she hasn't been with anyone else since such a young age...and I am shocked that she has been with Miranda for as long as she has, and Mirand doesn't know about that. What is happening between Justin and Bryne is honest to goodness deep...IN LOVE..not just love..stuff. New for both of them it seems.

Ok..sounds like Bryne still thinks Justin is sleeping with Belinda..I think. It's hard to say. At what point is either one of them, or BOTH of them going to make a move to be each other's one and only? Is it in the cards?
Thanks for the great update..Lots of interesting insight in this chapter!

Dani




calinewgirl (Signed) on Feb 29, 2008 01:31 am (Chapter 13b)

Wow is all I can say!!! "Do you love him?" Damn. She knows. And I think not only does she know it's a guy, I think she knows exactly who the guy is too. That's too bad man. That could fuck up JC's whole entire operation. ::shakes head in disappointment:: I always felt like some of Bryne's & Justin's creepings were a little too public in the first place and that's the worst way to keep a secret ... secret lol.

But anywho, can we get a more  detailed, physical description of Bryne and the other non-celeb characters? It doesn't have to be with pictures per se (although it VERY well could be hint, hint lol), but anything will help at this point because as of right now, I only know what Justin, Cam and Trace look like lol.

Great update! ~N




MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 11:26 pm (Chapter 13b)
oh my god this just keeps getting better and better can't wait for the next update :D



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 10:19 pm (Chapter 13b)
Oh this is getting deep.. I love this story girl keep it up. kudos, many many kudos.



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 28, 2008 06:50 pm (Chapter 13)

I feel like he's leading Bryne on.. I know, I know..they aren't really together..but she thinks he's changing his ways for her. He goes out of his way to point out that Willow is just a friend...hellooo..Does it matter?

 He's sleeping with other women anyway. Actually, it's worse..he's sleeping with Belinda. I assume since she is Bryne's best friend, she's going to find out. I just hope she does something that gets through to Justin..let him see how it feels. He still doesn't know about Miranda..how's that going to make him feel?  Love it as always :D

Dani



Author's Response:

Thank you..thank you..thank you!...your insight really drives me to write this story...I could be thinking one thing, and you'll say write something that will send me in another direction..one which is better than the first..so thank you!






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