Comments For Late Night Pickups
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 10:30 pm (The End - Part 1)
Aww they are so cute together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
Author's Response: Yay, so glad you guys like it...really, it was just an idea I thought of and decided to develop on it. hehe. I'll post the last part up real soon. thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Yay, so glad you guys like it...really, it was just an idea I thought of and decided to develop on it. hehe. I'll post the last part up real soon. thanks for the feedback.
Gigi (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 09:53 pm (The End - Part 1)
Ok because I was going to be disappointed if this was really the end.
Author's Response: Oh no it's not ending yet. muahaha...I'm almost done with the last chap so it should be up soon. :)
Author's Response: Oh no it's not ending yet. muahaha...I'm almost done with the last chap so it should be up soon. :)
SexualCoco (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 04:02 pm (The End - Part 1)
Awww, he wants to take her off the market and stuff! That is so cute. I'm sad that this is almost over, but I've loved this story so far. Can't wait to see what the ending has in store.
Author's Response: Yeah, he does. Man, I'm thinking...when I get back to school next week could I be lucky to find me a guy like that? Hehehe....The ending is coming soon. I'm working on it. Thanks for reviewing Bri
Author's Response: Yeah, he does. Man, I'm thinking...when I get back to school next week could I be lucky to find me a guy like that? Hehehe....The ending is coming soon. I'm working on it. Thanks for reviewing Bri
fsls07 (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 01:03 pm (The End - Part 1)
I luv this story so much that I don't want it to end I wish u would make it longer but anyways I think these 2 are adorable together can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh man I don't want it to end either because I could actually see it going somewhere further but I have too many other stories to update so it will have to stay as a short. :(. Still glad you like it and I'm almost done with the last chapt to upload. :)
Author's Response: Oh man I don't want it to end either because I could actually see it going somewhere further but I have too many other stories to update so it will have to stay as a short. :(. Still glad you like it and I'm almost done with the last chapt to upload. :)
Vessy (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 11:48 am (The End - Part 1)
I'm sad its gonna end so soon, but oh well, great chapter! :)
Author's Response: Yeah I know, sigh...but we're gonna make the last chap count. hehe. thanks for commenting.
Author's Response: Yeah I know, sigh...but we're gonna make the last chap count. hehe. thanks for commenting.
MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 20, 2008 10:36 am (The End - Part 1)
Author's Response: I wouldn't share either. hehehehe. Thanks for the feedback. I should have the last part up by tonight...:D
I would hate to share too if I had a guy like justin ;)
love it can't wait for part 2 :D
Author's Response: I wouldn't share either. hehehehe. Thanks for the feedback. I should have the last part up by tonight...:D
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 18, 2008 09:20 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
wow...that was awesome. He is so sweet for bringing her food and treating her like a lady.
Author's Response: Yeah he was thoughtful huh? All worried that she didn't get her regular and what not. And being all decent and backing down and wanting to do things the right way. *sigh* gotta love that Justin. Now where can we find us one of his kind. hehe. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Yeah he was thoughtful huh? All worried that she didn't get her regular and what not. And being all decent and backing down and wanting to do things the right way. *sigh* gotta love that Justin. Now where can we find us one of his kind. hehe. Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.
sChErZo (Signed) on Feb 18, 2008 04:34 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
whoa! that was hot! can't wait for the next installment :)
Author's Response: Yay! hottness! :D. Glad you enjoyed it, i'l have the last part out soon. Thanks for commenting. :)
Author's Response: Yay! hottness! :D. Glad you enjoyed it, i'l have the last part out soon. Thanks for commenting. :)
justinaham (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 09:00 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
"He's hopeful and if that's what it's going to take for him to fuck my brains out with no guilt then who the fuck am I to decline? "
The best line EVER lol
Author's Response: Oh my goodness...lmao!! Glad you like it and that line. hehe. Thanks a million for commenting.
The best line EVER lol
Author's Response: Oh my goodness...lmao!! Glad you like it and that line. hehe. Thanks a million for commenting.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 04:08 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
This is so friggin' cute D! Like I'm loving it (no pun intended). I got a little scared though when Justin backed up off of her, I was like "NO!" But great updates girlie, keep it up!
Author's Response: Aww Bri, yeah...I wanted the cuteness to show. Their little date should be interesting huh? Heheh...I'll try to make up for that in the last part. lol. I'll update it soon I promise.
Author's Response: Aww Bri, yeah...I wanted the cuteness to show. Their little date should be interesting huh? Heheh...I'll try to make up for that in the last part. lol. I'll update it soon I promise.
morgan101 (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 12:53 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
OMG! I love this it is just an amazing piece of work you have there. I wish it was a long story and not a short but it is still sooooo good. This Justin is a cutie and he's sweet. I love it can't wait for the last part. You're a great author one of my favorites my dear keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Oh wow thanks so much for the great words and compliment girl. it really means a lot that you all appreciate my stories like this. I'll be updating soon. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Oh wow thanks so much for the great words and compliment girl. it really means a lot that you all appreciate my stories like this. I'll be updating soon. Thanks so much.
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 12:45 pm (The Middle - Part 2)
Author's Response: Oh gosh, you know those lines just come to me. But now that you mention it it is kinda funny. hehe. Yeah sweet!Justin is too cute. Glad you're enjoying I'll update soon thanks.
"Is it wierd that I keep comparing Justin to food? I guess it's because he's just too delish and I could just eat him up huh?"
Oh my, another one lol. Priceless, I swear.
It's so cool that he likes her, too! AND he's a gentleman. Gah, I love this Justin... so sweet.
I can't wait for that last update.Author's Response: Oh gosh, you know those lines just come to me. But now that you mention it it is kinda funny. hehe. Yeah sweet!Justin is too cute. Glad you're enjoying I'll update soon thanks.
alimera (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 08:40 am (The Middle - Part 2)
Aww, Justin is such a gentleman. Lol, hope you have the next part up soon!
Author's Response: Yeah he is, I had to make him sweet in this one. tehehe I'm almost done with the last part. I'll update soon. :) Thanks
Author's Response: Yeah he is, I had to make him sweet in this one. tehehe I'm almost done with the last part. I'll update soon. :) Thanks
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 03:30 am (The Middle - Part 2)
YES!! yes, yes, yes!! haha. This was completely cute! From her embarassment, to him bringing her her usual, to him feeling terrible for making out with her. haha! i just love it! i'm sad that this is going to be a short one, but i can't wait for the rest of it. keep it up! :o)
Author's Response: Hehehe I'm so glad that you love it. I know, I'd make it into a little long story if I didn't have all those other stories to update. HEhe. So I'm only adding shorts from now on, but I'll try to make this one count. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Hehehe I'm so glad that you love it. I know, I'd make it into a little long story if I didn't have all those other stories to update. HEhe. So I'm only adding shorts from now on, but I'll try to make this one count. Thanks for the feedback.
aszx1 (Signed) on Feb 17, 2008 12:16 am (The Middle - Part 2)
You're giving hope!I'm in the same situation that Vern is, I have a crush too. And I'm exactly like her when I’m around him, I like him to much and I barley know him. I'm reading it because it's like seeing myself with this guy, I hope it ends the same way as your story.
Author's Response: Omg I know right...I'm the same when I have a crush. hehehe. It would be great if all crushes ended this way. but that doesn't always happen. hehe oh man, the leg thing I put in there because a friend of mine could do it, and that's what broke the ice for her and her crush because he just thought is was "so cool" heheheh. Keep the hope girl, hope things work out. :) Thanks for the review.
And believe it or not I can do the leg thing too. THATS WAY I'M HOPING hahahahahaha.
Author's Response: Omg I know right...I'm the same when I have a crush. hehehe. It would be great if all crushes ended this way. but that doesn't always happen. hehe oh man, the leg thing I put in there because a friend of mine could do it, and that's what broke the ice for her and her crush because he just thought is was "so cool" heheheh. Keep the hope girl, hope things work out. :) Thanks for the review.
