Comments For Late Night Pickups
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 09:38 pm (The Middle - Part 1)
Author's Response: Heheh yeah, that was a funny line huh? I agree with you on her stuttering and staring but who knows, maybe Justin isn't any better or he likes it? idk...lol. Thanks for the review girl, hope you like the next part.
"the night is young, practically a virgin"
I don't know why, but I cracked up when I read that lol.
God, she's never gonna have a chance with him if she keeps staring him down like that and stuttering like she has a problem. Can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response: Heheh yeah, that was a funny line huh? I agree with you on her stuttering and staring but who knows, maybe Justin isn't any better or he likes it? idk...lol. Thanks for the review girl, hope you like the next part.
c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 02:02 pm (The Beginning)
LMAO she's so sprung. This is adorable, I'm loving it. [:
Author's Response: Yeah she is! Maybe a little more than that? Idk. hehe. Glad you like it, i'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing. ;)
Author's Response: Yeah she is! Maybe a little more than that? Idk. hehe. Glad you like it, i'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing. ;)
classicbeauty (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 01:41 pm (The Beginning)
Author's Response: Dani, where have you been? I've been missing you girl! Still waiting on my email missy. :D. And wow on the platinum thing. I uh, honestly, I just write out what my twisted brain comes up with, so if you guys like it, that's a plus! Love sharing my stories with you guys and the wonderful feedback is good motivation. :D. I'm happy to see that you're still around girl, send me a line! Thanks for the review too, I appreciate it.
wow i love it so far, and mickey ds had me smilin cause that was a sight to see.
but i gotta say this before i go... girl you know, your like one of those really talented artists, that everything you touch...goes platinum...
so my question to u, is how do you do whatcha do girl?
12 reviews? talk about hotness...
dani
Platinum
Author's Response: Dani, where have you been? I've been missing you girl! Still waiting on my email missy. :D. And wow on the platinum thing. I uh, honestly, I just write out what my twisted brain comes up with, so if you guys like it, that's a plus! Love sharing my stories with you guys and the wonderful feedback is good motivation. :D. I'm happy to see that you're still around girl, send me a line! Thanks for the review too, I appreciate it.
Blubelle0302 (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 04:15 am (The Beginning)
Haha I just think it's cute that Justin works at McDonald's (badabababa) lmao. Can't wait to see where THIS is going lol. You always come up with the greatest stories! Update soon!
Author's Response: Oh yeah, and the strange thing is I wasn't thinking of the I'm loving it thing at the time, but that works perfectly now that you reminded me! OMG!!!! It's perfect now. hehehehe. So glad you're liking this one, I'll update it soon. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, and the strange thing is I wasn't thinking of the I'm loving it thing at the time, but that works perfectly now that you reminded me! OMG!!!! It's perfect now. hehehehe. So glad you're liking this one, I'll update it soon. Thanks for the feedback.
Koralin_Timberlake (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 02:26 am (The Beginning)
I only have three words..... All. Hail. d_Simplicity. Lol, I swear that every single one of your stories are just.....that damn good. Honestly, you are like THE best author! Definately keep em comin, chick!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh...you're making me blush. That was such a nice thing to say really girl, I'm touched that you feel that way but man, there are tons of amazing authors out there, but I'm super glad that you like my work and this little short. :) I'll update it soon. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Oh my gosh...you're making me blush. That was such a nice thing to say really girl, I'm touched that you feel that way but man, there are tons of amazing authors out there, but I'm super glad that you like my work and this little short. :) I'll update it soon. Thanks so much.
stimble (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 12:40 am (The Beginning)
awwwww this is to cute....and naughty lol. i like it :-)
Author's Response: Hehe cute and naughty that's what I was going for! Glad you like it. I'll update soon. Thanks a lot.
Author's Response: Hehe cute and naughty that's what I was going for! Glad you like it. I'll update soon. Thanks a lot.
MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 16, 2008 12:09 am (The Beginning)
I love it. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I will! Thanks a lot girl.
Author's Response: I will! Thanks a lot girl.
ashmama (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 10:02 pm (The Beginning)
you are...like my favorite writer. ever. ohh soooo good. you need to update, like yesterday.
Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm honored. I'm so happy I'm one of your favs and you like my work. Thanks a lot for the compliment and I'll update soon! :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, I'm honored. I'm so happy I'm one of your favs and you like my work. Thanks a lot for the compliment and I'll update soon! :)
MissM69 (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 10:02 pm (The Beginning)
Author's Response: Much appreciated it. Yes, I really hope you all like the next updates...and thanks for the review.
a fic that holds endless possibilities can't wait for the next update :D
Author's Response: Much appreciated it. Yes, I really hope you all like the next updates...and thanks for the review.
rev0586 (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 08:20 pm (The Beginning)
OMG this girl sounds just like me w/ guy im crushin on lol... its sweet the whole kiss on the cheek
Author's Response: Aww yeah, I had to make him do something there and not leave her hanging right? Hehe so glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: Aww yeah, I had to make him do something there and not leave her hanging right? Hehe so glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback.
Nconspicuous1 (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 07:34 pm (The Beginning)
haha!...i think this story is so cute!! I love it...its funny that she went through the drive through even though she new she didn't have enough money! ahaha! hilarious. I wish there was somebody that cute at the drive through on campus!
Author's Response: I'm glad you guys are liking it so much. Oh my gosh I know, she took a chance not having any cash and doing that, but Justin was mean about it so she was lucky. tehehehe. Gurl I know, now when I get back to school I might have to look and see if I can get me a cute McDonalds guy. idk. lol. One can dream. thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Oh i meant's Justin wasn't mean...lol
Author's Response: I'm glad you guys are liking it so much. Oh my gosh I know, she took a chance not having any cash and doing that, but Justin was mean about it so she was lucky. tehehehe. Gurl I know, now when I get back to school I might have to look and see if I can get me a cute McDonalds guy. idk. lol. One can dream. thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Oh i meant's Justin wasn't mean...lol
SexualCoco (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 06:10 pm (The Beginning)
Aww D, this is super cute. Haha, I cracked up on the part about Justin and his "melt-in-your-mouth white milk chocolate goodness". Girl, ain't that the truth! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I know right. I wanted a little hottness and cuteness in one so I thought of this. Yay! Ya that line I just thought of it and said dang that sounds interesting for a description to I put it in there. hehe. Thanks a lot bri I'll update soon.
Author's Response: I know right. I wanted a little hottness and cuteness in one so I thought of this. Yay! Ya that line I just thought of it and said dang that sounds interesting for a description to I put it in there. hehe. Thanks a lot bri I'll update soon.
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 05:57 pm (The Beginning)
I love this. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: I'm so happy, I'll update soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy, I'll update soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
lovestories (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 04:21 pm (The Beginning)
Mc Donald's.....lmao that's to funny! I loved it!
Author's Response: I know right? Hehe. Glad you Love it! Thanks!
Author's Response: I know right? Hehe. Glad you Love it! Thanks!
MochaB (Signed) on Feb 15, 2008 03:44 pm (The Beginning)
Author's Response: Hehe yay!!!! I'm glad you like it and Justin working in mickey d's was too good for me to pass up! I'll update soon! Thanks so much for the great feedback. :)
haha. one chapter in and I already love this story. it's really cute. i hope tomorrow works in her favor. who knew that picturing justin in a mcdonalds uniform could be cute? well...he makes anything look good so... haha.
i can't wait to read more! :o)
Author's Response: Hehe yay!!!! I'm glad you like it and Justin working in mickey d's was too good for me to pass up! I'll update soon! Thanks so much for the great feedback. :)
