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MochaB (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 08:34 pm (Chapter 22: Last Call)
awwwww that was sweet and sad. i hate goodbyes. gah justin! so obviously he knows how he feels about her, which is great, even though he still has a gf. now...when will he get a chance to tell her and break it off with jess? and when will she tell him?!? or will they be stubborn for a few more months?!? ahhhh! update soon! haha. :o)

Author's Response: They're both in awkward situations because they won't clue eachother in, and they're both in denial about the other's feelings. Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 08:28 pm (Chapter 22: Last Call)
Omg, they need to be together already, it's more than obvious that they didn't want to leave each other! Update again soon.

Author's Response: Very true... we'll see :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



SJane (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 06:54 pm (Chapter 22: Last Call)
Dammit I wanted 1 of them two at least get it done and run back to the other their killing each other with this running around and separation shit dammit! Great update luv

Author's Response: Justin tried... it was just too late. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 04:01 pm (Chapter 22: Last Call)
Im gonna cry now....why did she have to leave!!!

Author's Response: She's confused and it's hurting her to spend time with Justin while he's with someone else. :( lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 28, 2008 03:45 pm (Chapter 22: Last Call)

Tsk...tsk..tsk..Their pride just sucks.. Mostly Justin's though. Veda really is in no position to tell a guy that is dating someone else she has feelings for him. It's Justin who is dating irritating Jessica...and the ball is in his court to do something about what is between him and Veda.

The whole chapter was sad..but I understood why she had to go home. She was at a crossroads..and if Justin is going to keep dating someone else, Veda has to move on. I just wonder if they will find their way back to one another? *wink* (I'm counting on you to make that happen!) lol Great chapter!



Author's Response: lol they both have some thinking to do. Hopefully they'll get themselves together soon. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



alimera (Signed) on Jul 26, 2008 09:33 am (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)
OMG JUST GO!!!! Please please please make Justin follow her up to her room and tell her that he needs her to come with him! Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: lol we'll see about that. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 11:49 pm (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)
man! those two and their allergies! haha. gaaah i love this story. both are holding so much back and they just need to let it out to each other. and jess had to show up! i was definitely thinking something sexy might go down at the party, but that was a definite no-go when she was there. haha. i mean, not sex but you know...something sexy nonetheless. sex can come later. haha. i'm glad justin has toned down the jerkness when jess is around. maybe it's good dallas isn't going to europe. maybe this will force justin to come out with his feelings or force dallas to come out with hers. but with jess still in the picture...eh...anyway, update soon please. :o)

Author's Response: I know what you're saying, it's a tough situation for everyone lol thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)



isela (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2008 12:30 pm (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)
I live for this story. It's so good! More please!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)



SJane (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 10:12 am (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)
Dammit jess needs to fuck off already and these two need to get together and have some crazy monkey sex lmao

Author's Response: haha that could work :) Thanks for reading and reviewing !



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 04:23 am (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)
great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)



Sox (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 12:48 am (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)

Ugh! Why did Jess have to just show up?

Justin needs to get rid of her and tell Dallas what's going on before it's too late.

I'm worried lol great update! I love how they're both EXACTLY the same and won't admit the way they're feeling. And they're both crying, making up excuses like they don't feel good or the allergies. Loved it.  



Author's Response: Thanks a lot, they're both stupid haha :)



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 12:00 am (Chapter 21: It's My Allergies)

Awww..This line just made me so frustrated with them..

 "She doesn’t get that there’s more to it than that. There’s so much more to it than that. And if I didn’t have my fucking girlfriend in the other room I would tell her that. I’m having a fucking crisis here. She has to come."

Justiiiiin....please TELL her before it's too late! Get rid of Jessica and tell her! So frustrating :D lol

Loved this chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks for always reviewing :)



alimera (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 09:33 am (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)
I'm happy they're talking to each other again at least...and I'm crossing my fingers in hope that Dallas does go to Europe with him! Update again soon.

Author's Response: They are talking, so that's something haha as for Europe... we'll have to wait and see about that :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!



Vessy (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 08:04 am (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)
great work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!



Sox (Signed) on Jul 17, 2008 10:27 pm (Chapter 20: Maybe You Should Like… Wait In The Cart)

Justin is WAY overprotective, especially since he won't admit he's in LOVE. haha He's not happy, Jess is annoying, and he doesn't even want her there. That's a bad sign when you only see your girlfriends a couple days a month and you're wishing she's not there the whole time. Justin is having some serious issues thinking about Veda not going on the tour. I love that he said the tour would suck with her, but his own personal experience on the tour would be unbearable. I think he's finally getting it. Now just get rid of Jess, have a nice chat with Dallas, get all your feelings out there, and you'll have an AMAZING European tour. haha 

Anyway, love the story, update soon :) 



Author's Response: haha that would be a good idea.. but maybe too easy lol Thanks for reading and reviewing





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