So hurry up and update again! I wanna see what happens when she snaps out of her shock. We'll there be yelling and screaming? How is Alex going to react when he finds out the truth? And Justin - now I'm sure he's going to be seething with jealousy, but I doubt he'll show it. I see him playing it nice and cool, and I bet that's going to irritate the hell out Natalia. Hehehehe....
Whatever you got up your sleeve I can't wait to find out! Waiting patiently, but anxously for your return :D
Author's Response:
Natalia always tries to pretend like things aren't happening. I think the truth makes her lose control and she hates feeling like that. She'd rather live a lie than except the full truth. While she does somewhat realize that something is lacking in her relationship with Alex... she also thinks that certain aspects (like his cheating) are perfectly normal. They certainly arent!
Oh man... it's going to get so good. :) Justin's jealous will erupt (maybe... but who knows. Maybe he'll stay away from her romantically to continue to protect her) and Natalia will freak. She just wants normalcy and she gets EVERYTHING but. Thanks for the review girl.. I always love your indepth thoughts about the story! :)
Author's Response: Haha yes he is!! It's about to get very very interesting. Thanks for the review girl!!
Author's Response: Yep! Nat was just completely caught off guard. That poor girl. I feel so sorry for her. Seeing him again is like the last thing she needs. :( Poor Nat is just going to lose it again. Justin is like her biggest weakness... and I can't wait to write about his reaction to seeing alex and nat together. you knooow its gonna be good. lol :D thanks for the review girll you know i love themmmm
Author's Response: lol thanks. im a dork with too much time on my hands (or much too little time, but i OCD about things sometimes lol) glad you liked my pictures!
Sweet its back!! :)
Looking forward to more quick!
Author's Response: definitely! the next chapter is in the works so expect it soon! :) thanks for reading and reviewing!
I can't wait when JT makes his appearace but knowing you lol u'll probably have him in hiding (stalker) (luv it) lol
Author's Response:
LOL! I'm not saying if hes coming out soon... even though it might be kinda obvious haha. Anyway, when he does come out... you know Justin's going to go nuts. Ruben said it well, Natalia is Justin's weakness. All his enemies know that and will use it to their advantage. This is a cruicial time for Natalia to be protected. A lot of drama is gonna go down soon! :D Im so evil, I feel bad for putting Nat through it all but i secretly love it. Anyway, I think Alex is a good guy, but I think he's selfish person in the end. I don't think he realizes Natalia's novel was fact and i don't think he realizes or cares that Natalias ex was dangerous. He's too involved in his new and happy life. He just doesn't care.
They're both in NY... Justin's in Manhattan and Natalia's in upper long island in the hamptons. LOVE IT THERE! lol anyway thanks for the review. :D
Author's Response:
That's right, Natalia believed she could escape her past, but it's not that easy. You can't run away, you have to come to terms with it and that's when you can heal. Nat is letting herself heal, so this situation is going to be so much worse for her. She can never get away. :( Thanks for the support!
Author's Response: I know! They're assholes! Ruben needs to hunt them down! lol poor Nat. I swear, she doesn't need anymore drama in her life. Get ready for lots more of this drama. It just surrounds Nat. lol thanks girl!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I'll try and update as soon as possible.
The begining was hella cute i was like awww lol. Oh man when she first said she was going to go to the store it reminded me of what you sent me in the IM and i was like 'nooooo' lol.
Wow I am hella curious as to what these people will do next i know this is just the begining.
You keep me in supsense! Unlike myself who ends up telling you what happens or sending you scenes that are way ahead lol.
Author's Response:
lmao. i make you send me the scenes that are coming too... so its okay haha. and u cant say i dont do that 2 u with BOY. i always send you everything half done lol.
so yep, this is going to get really bad... but its opening a lot of doors. a lot of shit is about to go down. poor nat though, she doesnt need this anymore. i feel bad for her, but she's gotta open her eyes. lol thanks for the review girl!
Ok I do not believe for a second that Alex will be a part of the "we" that's going to find out who did this. I bet as soon as he finds out what's really going on with the whole mob connection, he's gonna bounce, leaving Natalia and her kids in the dust.
Now Miss Natalia (shaking my head), who refuses to cross over that river called Denial - I'm guessing her form of protecting the people she loves will be pushing Justin away right? Well if she doesn't take what Ruben said seriously (You don't divorce the mob honey) and realize that she's going to need Justin's protection, she and the people she loves are going to be in serious danger that she can't handle.
I understand that Natalia wants to be strong and independent, but I think it has more to do with her need to run away from her feelings for Justin, clouding all her decisions. It's time she straighten out those issues of hers, more now than ever.
Can't wait for more! Especially if it involves setting Justin free :D
Author's Response:
i can't say that he's coming back yet i can't say that he's not. lol. i'm trying to be cryptic. haha
Now, onto Alex. I think he's going to be a bit oblivious to what's going on. I thinmk in a sense, he's a bit selfish as well. He's never really asked about Justin, so it's like he doesnt care about Nat's past. My belief is that when you love someone, you want to know everything about them. Alex has his own agenda, this relationship may just be convenient for him or, he could actually care about her. It could go many ways.
Natalia, she is someone that never changes. She will forever run from her issues instead of facing them dead on. This just screws her up more and more. Natalia needs to get her shit together before it's too late. She's going to have to make a serious decesion in this story. What is more important to her, her newfound happiness or the love that clearly hasn't dissolved.
It's going to get really good when Justin comes back. Its going to take Nat by surprise. I can't wait to see his reaction to her new "happy" life. You know he'll confront Nat about everything. hehe
thanks for the support girl! :D
Author's Response: lol thank you jaim! :) hopefully soon it'll happen. haha i can't give too much away though. thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: soon i swear! lol schools been effing with me, (graduation is like right around the corner) so i've been swamped with work., but i'm starting to get back into the writing. i should update this week sometime. :D
Part of me REALLY wants to punch Justin in the face because he's being stupid.
But part of me also wants to punch Natalia in the face because she seems likes she's in denial.
Either way, I am SOOO happy to see this up. I've been waiting for this ever since the last one ended! Great job! :]
Author's Response:
Justin THINKS that he's doing the right thing. clearly hes not. he's just making everything harder for everyone else. his return is going to make it that much tougher on everyone else, especially nat who tries to pretend like she's okay. but that's typical natalia behavior, she pretends she's okay to ease everyone else. this girl needs help, she needs to be forced, kicking and screaming into therapy. she's not okay.
anyway, i'm glad you like it. lol ill keep making the characters infuriate you. :D
Author's Response: that is going to happen soon. :D thats all im saying. :P thanks for the review!