Comments For Control
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2016 01:21 pm (Growing Up)
7 years??? Where's the update???
LuLu (Signed) on May 20, 2009 01:12 am (Chapter 13)
YaY! You updated. Ooh Olivia is in trouble. Justin's going to hunt her down when he finds out she ran. Sure she ran because of one of his enemies, but she still ran from him. He is not going to be happy.
More soon please!
More soon please!
Nikki (Anonymous) on May 19, 2009 09:50 pm (Growing Up)
I really like the story and hope that you get back to the regular updates but I don't want to get caught up in the story again, just for there to be months time lapsed in between chapters. So, get your groove back and don't let us down.
Author's Response: I know, I know. It's like a relationship with your work and the readers. If you're not treating them right they leave you. But I am most definitely writing. Sorry for the hiatus. Thank you for reading. LOL. :")
Author's Response: I know, I know. It's like a relationship with your work and the readers. If you're not treating them right they leave you. But I am most definitely writing. Sorry for the hiatus. Thank you for reading. LOL. :")
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 06, 2008 09:51 pm (A New Addition)
justin makes me mad. her mom makes me mad. she makes me mad. haha. seriously, justin needs to change cause baby or no baby, if he's going to be getting physical with her like he did in the last update, that is not going to flow and nobody should put up with it. i wouldn't even put up with him jerking me by my neck! anyway, if they are going to try to work things out, well i hope they do and things get better. communication, not domination, is key. update again soon! :o)
MochaB (Signed) on Aug 04, 2008 11:31 pm (Jumping the Broom)
she's finally starting to show a backbone, but she needs to kick it up a notch and leave his butt. haha. talking down to her like she's a little girl, disrespecting her with what he says and what he has done, threatening her. i don't think so fool! haha. what he said just now was surprising and nice, but it's hard to believe him with his past. not saying he can't change, but maybe her standing up to him, leaving him, and staying strong about her decision will be the force to push him to truly change. i really am enjoying this story though. i hope you update again soon. :o)
LuLu (Signed) on Aug 02, 2008 12:34 pm (Jumping the Broom)
Olivia needs to take that baby and run. Justin lookin' kind of crazy right about now.
Glad to see you're back and girl I know exactly how you feel on the job front. I'm about to knock somebody out at mine LoL :D
Glad to see you're back and girl I know exactly how you feel on the job front. I'm about to knock somebody out at mine LoL :D
MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 02, 2008 12:50 am (Jumping the Broom)
He's snatching people around and shit? Hell naw. She should have been out of his before she even got in it. If her mom loves him so much and wants to live with him so bad, she can. Olivia shouldn't have to put up with Sly's shit for anybody. I want her to just leave him and stop letting him disrespect her. And he cheated on her? Double hell naw. He needs to go.
Great, great story. Please update soon.
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 20, 2008 01:37 pm (Redeeming Qualities)
holy rigatoni....he gonna marry her!! YAY
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 16, 2008 10:51 pm (Redeeming Qualities)
I don't know if he can really do that or if he's just saying that stuff. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.
SexualCoco (Signed) on Apr 16, 2008 08:45 pm (Redeeming Qualities)
What? So now he's on some wifey stuff? Hmmm, while I'm glad that he's treating her better, I hope this isn't some trick and then "Sly" rears his ugly head around. Great update, can't wait for the next one!
