Comments For Verdant
alimera (Signed) on Nov 11, 2008 03:33 pm (Chapter 32)
I knew it!!! They didn't get Gabe. Crapper. So now he's out there somewhere and he's going to do something to one of them I'm sure...omg the suspense is killing me! Update again soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for killing you with the suspense haha. I'm almost done with the next chapter and there just may be some twists and turns so get ready haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for killing you with the suspense haha. I'm almost done with the next chapter and there just may be some twists and turns so get ready haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Vessy (Signed) on Nov 11, 2008 01:29 pm (Chapter 32)
amazing chapter once again!
Author's Response: thanks again!
Author's Response: thanks again!
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 11:16 pm (Chapter 32)
man...that got me. sitting here in my room all teary eyed and feeling so sad. haha. that was really good. i understand that it's hard for chloe to believe justin right now, rightfully so, but i think she needs to put more trust in her relationship. her fear that he's going to walk away at any moment for some small reason that she thinks he will view as crazy or any other reason is only going to do what she doesn't want it to do; make him leave. it's just going to cause problems. give him more credit than that. yes, yall had a very rocky start, but has he not shown himself to be the good person that he actually is? i also think justin is starting to get, and let it sink in, how serious the situation is. update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: I'M SORRY! lol I always forget to leave warnings about the sad parts haha. Things will be explained more in the next chapter. Thanks for always leaving such wonderful reviews! :)
Author's Response: I'M SORRY! lol I always forget to leave warnings about the sad parts haha. Things will be explained more in the next chapter. Thanks for always leaving such wonderful reviews! :)
kahnechick85 (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 10:11 pm (Chapter 32)
I love this story. I'm glad that Justin is being so great. I think that Chloe really needs to trust Justin and put more faith into their relationship. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS
Author's Response: Trust is the main issue in this story and Chloe really does need to work on it. I'll hopefully have the update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Trust is the main issue in this story and Chloe really does need to work on it. I'll hopefully have the update soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Vikki (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 09:56 pm (Chapter 32)
Author's Response: haha I'm sorry I didn't warn you. The song is always the killer. It's really cool that you're into the story enough that you can get so caught up with the characters. Thanks so much! As for the bus... we'll have to work on that haha. Thanks again!
wow... I'm still kinda turned on by angryatpolice!justin ... but omg... I totally got choked up when he was talking to Chloe's mom.
And then when Chloe was talking to her mom... my vision completely blurred... and then the song... DAMN THE SONG... I totally lost it. *sniffle*
great update... now all we need is that bus to run over Gabe :)
Author's Response: haha I'm sorry I didn't warn you. The song is always the killer. It's really cool that you're into the story enough that you can get so caught up with the characters. Thanks so much! As for the bus... we'll have to work on that haha. Thanks again!
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Nov 10, 2008 09:00 pm (Chapter 32)
ooh can't wait for more!!!! UPDATE! lol
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! The new update should be soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! The new update should be soon :)
Tiffany (Anonymous) on Nov 10, 2008 05:58 pm (Chapter 1)
Author's Response: Well thank you very much. I'm sorry for making you miss sleep haha. I'm glad you like it :) Thanks a lot!
I stayed up the last three days reading all the way through to this chapter. You have well developed characters and it was a great read.
I can't wait to continue.
Author's Response: Well thank you very much. I'm sorry for making you miss sleep haha. I'm glad you like it :) Thanks a lot!
MochaB (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 10:18 pm (Chapter 31)
i saw that it was chapter 31 and i thought, "man...i didn't know this story was so long." then i saw your note. haha. gaaaaah. i'm happy chloe spoke up. justin does need to understand that gabe is no joke. chloe, of all people, would know this so he shouldn't take anything lightly, especially her door being unlocked. that's a problem. i know justin is just trying to ease her distress and make her feel that things will be ok by what he says and trying to to come to the worse conclusions, but sometimes you just have to be real. it does have to work out though, but i'm thinking things could get worse before it works out. you evil author you. haha. update soon! :o)
Author's Response: haha your are psychic :) Things may get worse, or they may not... I'm not that evil ;) Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: haha your are psychic :) Things may get worse, or they may not... I'm not that evil ;) Thanks for reading!
helena (Anonymous) on Nov 08, 2008 02:41 pm (Chapter 31)
Author's Response: Whoa, that's some serious dedication lol thanks for reading the whole thing! I'm glad you're liking it, welcome aboard haha. I'm working on the update so hopefully in the next day or so. Thanks again!
i just found this story on the archive and read the whole thing from beg. to now and i'm loving this so much!!!!!!!!! i love how she went from being a stripper to his girll and well we know they are going to fall in love soon. and brady my gosh i just love his character in this!!! great job on the story and i cannot wait to read more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Whoa, that's some serious dedication lol thanks for reading the whole thing! I'm glad you're liking it, welcome aboard haha. I'm working on the update so hopefully in the next day or so. Thanks again!
lance_fan_4eva (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 11:57 am (Chapter 31)
omg! more soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
alimera (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 11:35 am (Chapter 31)
It really does have to work out...Gabe can't be terrorizing them all the time, seriously. Update again soon!
Author's Response: Yes, Gabe needs to get hit by a bus haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: Yes, Gabe needs to get hit by a bus haha thanks for reading and reviewing!
Vessy (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 10:05 am (Chapter 31)
great work once again!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :)
jacs12031984 (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 12:19 am (Chapter 31)
aww love it update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll hopefully have an update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll hopefully have an update soon!
Lily (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 10:13 pm (Chapter 31)
I would be going crazy right along with Chloe if he was being that calm with me haha. But I think it is a good thing, he doesn't want her to go absolutely crazy, she'd freak out way too much if he was upset too. I love that line that he's willing to kill Gabe. Justin's kind of perfect now, who thought we'd change our minds about him lol great job more soon please!
Author's Response: lol yeah Justin's calm and collect mode isn't really working for her. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: lol yeah Justin's calm and collect mode isn't really working for her. Thanks for reading!
Vikki (Signed) on Nov 07, 2008 10:01 pm (Chapter 31)
Author's Response: haha he's all talk, he'd run away like a little baby lol no, i'm kidding, he'll kill Gabe :) Thanks for the review!
awwwww i love him! he just so calm, cool, and collected and even though thats driving Chloe insane right now, she'll realize later that she needed that. if he had freaked out as badly as she did then they'd be one big fat crazy mess.
I’m not afraid to kill him. I have good lawyers; I won’t spend more than a couple years in prison. I can handle that.
That's right! Justin is one badass motha fucka! LOL!
Author's Response: haha he's all talk, he'd run away like a little baby lol no, i'm kidding, he'll kill Gabe :) Thanks for the review!
