Comments For Verdant
Lily (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 12:14 pm (Chapter 15)
I'm glad that they're being so honest. They have a lot in common, very similar home lives. Justin's great with Brady and he's good with Chloe, as for comforting her and everything. He seems to really want to make them happy. I'm a little worried that he's going to do something to mess it all up though lol. I hope not. But I want to know about Brady's dad. Great job, update soon!

Author's Response: They are very similar, I think that's what draws them to eachother. Thanks so much for reading!


DaniD (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 10:15 am (Chapter 15)

No..not boring! It helps understand the characters and their reactions more.

Interesting parallel..I can totally see why Chloe appeals to Justin. Not only is she beautiful..but her relationship with her son mirrors Justin's close relationship with his Mom. She is everything to Brady...and in addition she has that in common with her own Mother being everything to her. I can see why Justin is making a real effort to be there for Brady too. He knows what it's like to need a male influence in your life.

So next chapter...McCartney? This should be interesting!



Author's Response: Yeah, exactly. Justin sees a lot of his own mother in Chloe, and sees a lot of himself in Brady. He knows what it's like and wants to break the cycle. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


MissM69 (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 08:49 am (Chapter 15)
not boring at all is good to understand chloe a little bit more great chapter can't wait for the next :)

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it :)


Vessy (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 06:07 am (Chapter 15)
good chapter! its good to get some background story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! 


SJane (Signed) on Jul 29, 2008 03:15 am (Chapter 15)
absolutely adorable as usual girl. i love how open justin is with brady it makes for some sweet interactions

Author's Response: Thank you so much!


sarah1988 (Signed) on Jul 27, 2008 09:58 am (Chapter 14)
YAY!!!! FINALLY....

Author's Response: haha yeah, finally :) Thanks for reading!


lice_scott (Signed) on Jul 26, 2008 05:55 pm (Chapter 14)
Loved the last chapter! xD

Author's Response: Thanks so much!


Lily (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 11:37 pm (Chapter 14)

Brady is adorable... I think we all agree on that one. lol 

I love Trace in this, he's a good friend, and funny. I was surprised that Justin was so open with Chloe ,but I'm glad he was. I'm worried that Brady's dad is going to pop up too.

More please? 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! You'll have to wait and see if your predictions with Daddy-o are right :)


alimera (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 08:48 pm (Chapter 14)
Lmao..."You're a kissing monster!" BEST LINE EVER. Update again soon!

Author's Response: haha thank you, that Brady... Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Karlita (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 07:38 pm (Chapter 14)
Aww, how cute!  I'm glad they made up!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!


mzmillion (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 04:57 pm (Chapter 14)
wowowowowowowwwww!

Author's Response: haha thanks for reading and reviewing :)


kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 04:30 pm (Chapter 14)
Aww That's cute. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much :)


MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 03:14 pm (Chapter 14)
Aaaaaaaaaaaaawwww!!! Tec is such a cutie pie! And I'm glad they finally talked and made up. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, me too lol Thanks for reading and reviewing :)


champ (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 02:26 pm (Chapter 14)
great update...hope you update soon

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! 


DaniD (Signed) on Jul 24, 2008 12:12 pm (Chapter 14)

*YAY!!* lol  I love how you wrote that chapter..The buildup and the reactions were all very realistic.

I understand Justin's thought process and what his behavior at different times meant. Maybe Chloe can relax and enjoy the attention now. Being a worry wart..I now just hope that Justin is careful with Chloe. She's pretty vulnerable and he is still the big superstar. He needs to be careful of her and Brady.

MY favorite chapter!  :D



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I was worried about this chapter :) 




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